I WROTE ALL OF THESE POEMS BY MYSELF ON PAPER SO YEAH ITS MY WORK OK!!!
So yeah i write peoms and i would like ur opinion on them!
It would be very helpful since i want to write good poems
So here's one
HOw i long to be free like you up there so alone and cold yet so beautiful...
how you just hover over us watching down. You see everything and everyone.
You are alone up there yet you seem so free. No one or no thing to tell u what to do, its like a whole new meaning to freedom.
How do you do it?
Is it because you are dead and yet so full of life. You shine so brigth up there in the night sky.
How i wish to be you...
Full of mystery and beauty like nothing else in the world.
So calm so perfect so...Free
I wish I felt no pain like you and just be up there so strong and white please take me up there to the night sky.
I long to be rid of this pain that can never be healed...
And yet you seem to erase it when i look at you...
Oh Beautiful Moon.
how you just hover over us watching down. You see everything and everyone.
You are alone up there yet you seem so free. No one or no thing to tell u what to do, its like a whole new meaning to freedom.
How do you do it?
Is it because you are dead and yet so full of life. You shine so brigth up there in the night sky.
How i wish to be you...
Full of mystery and beauty like nothing else in the world.
So calm so perfect so...Free
I wish I felt no pain like you and just be up there so strong and white please take me up there to the night sky.
I long to be rid of this pain that can never be healed...
And yet you seem to erase it when i look at you...
Oh Beautiful Moon.