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PostPosted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 7:56 pm
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:19 pm
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Rawth arrived at the mountains finally, it was quiet, just as Rawth liked it. He made his way through a small crater and jumped down into the sandy bottom below. He then moved a giant rock which revealed a secret grotto known only to Rawth. There was a couple of small couches there along with portraits of Legendary Ninja. There was also several bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a kitchen, a war room, and then a downward spiral staircase that led to a hallway at which at the end contained a door which lads to a panic room. This wall all inside a mountain, all of it, completely secluded from the outside world. His own little get away made by his father , and his father's father and so forth. Rawth lit a candle with a match and proceeded to lay on the couch on his back , while he faced the ceiling."Im to weak....just too weak."  

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:00 pm
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Rawth got up after a few hours and put on some new clothing. He then went decided to leave the hideout for now. He walked out the grotto and pushed the boulder in front to cover the entrance. He then climbed up from the crater and proceeded to return to the training field. (exits to training field)  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:21 pm
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Rawth enters the mountains once again, quiet as always, he thought to himself. He checked very thoroughly o make sure no one was behind him or watching him when he entered his secret grotto.  

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:02 am
(exits to training ground to watch examination)  
PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:15 pm
Everything from this point on occurs 3 years after all previous posts.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:35 am
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Edegaru stood at the summit of one of the mountains near the village. The village could be seen down in the distance and the ocean not so far from it. Three years had passed and Edegaru did not look much older. He did not feel that way either. He felt that too much time had passed since he last went on a mission. Missions for the ANBU had been less than scarce and Edegaru had become restless. He had gone to the mountains in order to train in seclusion. Edegaru knew that wasting time could lead him to premature death. He had heard of the genin's promotions and felt a small prod of curiosity to see the difference these years had made on them. Edegaru dismissed these thoughts and focused on his task. He was to learn a new jutsu that would come convenient in his line of work:Temporary Paralysis Technique.

Edegaru looked at his hand and closed it, feeling chakra moving to his fingertips. He then very carefully touched his own forehead with his index and middle finger. He made sure not to hit a chakra point for the chakra would pass through his skull. After a second, he felt nothing but his own familiar fingers. He looked at his hand wondering what he did wrong.

Edegaru decided to warm up with simple chakra manipulation techniques. He coated his finger in chakra and jabbed it into a boulder on the edge of the mountain top. It entered the boulder with a rough sound. Edegaru then removed his finger from inside the boulder, leaving a small, finger sized hole. This technique would be fatal if ever used on someone's forehead. It only served as a warm up for it required a focused mind for chakra concentration.

Now, Edegaru was going to perform a technique using less dense chakra. He had the same boulder as before in his sight as he cocked back his right arm. He charged chakra into his right hand and shot his right palm forward as if pushing something. A gust or wind then shot out of his palm and tossed the boulder far into the forest. Satisfied, Edegaru stood straight again. That was a technique that the Hyuuga was proud for, the Air Palm.

Edegaru now felt that he was ready. He forced chakra into his fingers and looked off to the village. He then placed his index finger nad middle finger on his forehead. Once they made contact, Edegaru felt his muscles lock into place and his breathing become shallow. He feel to his knees, unable to move. He could only look to the ocean. Edegaru felt satisfied in this state for he had learned the new technique and was glad it worked.
 
PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:59 am
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After a few minutes of immobility, Edegaru rose to his feet and dusted off his knees. The sun in the sky reminded Edegaru that he was to meet the Mizukage at the waterfall. Edegaru disliked that place. It was where Hiruko, his love, had been killed. She had been tossed over the edge of the waterfall leaving Edegaru helpless. Edegaru looked down the edge of the summit and saw that he had a long climb down. He started on his way to the waterfall.  

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