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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:40 pm
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:21 pm
(start the evaluation. Akisame is still stunned from the fall and from his dreams. He'll move after you start)  

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:22 pm
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Edegaru turned to face Icchiro. He had an apathetic expression on his face opposed to the frown. "It will be the same as before. You are to come at me with full force. Treat this as a true mission and try to destroy me." Edegaru said moving his shoulder in order to stretch. "You can begin when you are ready." He said.
 
PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 8:04 pm
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Icchiro followed the ANBU leader down the hill to where he had fought the other three Genin. To Icchiro, Edegaru was just another suspect in the crime of his parents' murder. He knew it was a Hyuuga that had slaughtered the ones he loved and if it just happened to be Edegaru, he didn't know what he would do. It couldn't be anything drastic or harsh though. Ugh, what am I thinking. He's loyal to the Mizukage and I know Zerus wouldn't order something so harsh and immoral. He pushed the thoughts out of his head for now and focused on his fight with Edegaru. When he stopped, he was standing about 10 feet in front of Edegaru, his sword still on his shoulder. All of a sudden, a compartment opened up on his sword. It was the blade that was facing toward the sky. It swung up until it reached a 90 degree angle with the top of the sword. A light hiss could be heard as a black cloud slowly rose up out of the sword, which doubled as a container for Icchiro's Iron Sand. After a few seconds, there was an iron mist that floated around Icchiro and when the Iron Sand stopped pouring from the sword, the compartment closed back up and he placed the sword on his back, in its holster. He then put his hands in his pockets and a chunk of the Iron Sand flew at Edegaru. Within a second, the chunk turned into a spike that has the diameter of a tennis ball but was long so that if the tip was broken off, the rest of the spike would make contact. The spike was aimed at Edegaru's chest and reached him in about two seconds. Icchiro's grin soon faded as he waited to see Edegaru's reaction so he would be able to think of a counter.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:39 pm
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Tsukiko nodded slightly to the Anbu who would evaluate them later on. Unfortunately she was unable to ask Gopan any questions about herself, for the kunoichi was swept off her feet and taken to higher ground by the Shinobi Kenji. Tsukiko watched, her eyes hardening. This annoyed her slightly. This was a training ground, not some playground or area to use the time to flirt. Her hardened mind frame already jumped to conclusions, deducing that Gopan would not make a good team mate for her. Suki did not regard herself too highly, for there were plenty of things to learn still but she did not think Gopan would be that much of an asset. Bending her knees slightly, she pushed off the ground, going in a backwards, vertical direction. Using her Chakra, she covered a great distance and landing smoothly on a part further away from where the second evaluation would begin.

Ignoring Gopan completely now, she focused on the battle that had already started. This guy was using, sand? Her eyes shone brightly, her interest peaked. Never had she seen such a thing before. This was going to be a fight to be zeroing in on. Not only was it going to reveal a lot about both of her peers it would also be a good way for her to begin building some type of strategy. Every gesture, stance, use of dominant hand and leg positions would serve her well. Suki only hoped that the girl who was busy flirting away would use this time well.
 
PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:27 pm
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Edegaru hit the spike on its side with the back of his right hand as it came close to him. He then dashed forward in order to close the distance between the two. Edegaru knew that as a sand user, Icchiro would not be very formidable in hand-to-hand skills. He brought up his right knee to Icchiro's stomach following it with an elbow to his head with his right arm.  

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:42 pm
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When Akisame didn't answer, he sighed a little. It was clear that things weren't going the way that the oddball had intended, what with his fall and sleep. The newly appointed genin looked to Suki. He'd invite her himself, by the looks of it, and as such, he moved for her, waving. Though he winced a little. He had no idea what to say, aside from what was necessary. Marciel had never had a need to speak with the girl before.
"Hey! After you graduate, swing by the hot springs with Aki over there," the boy commented simply, as he approached. Depending on her reaction, he'd linger a little longer, or he'd depart.
 
PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:32 pm
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The iron spike that Edegaru had hit, dispersed into sand as he made a dash towards Icchiro. As he ran through the cloud of iron sand, Edegaru left a clearing behind him. But, before Icchiro could think of a reaction, Edegaru was right in front of him. His eyes widened and out of pure instinct, Icchiro tensed his stomach to brace the impact but luckily, his other instinct was to use the sand as a shield. A small part of the iron cloud quickly moved in and barely caught the knee. Icchiro was relieved and started to raise his right hand from his pocket when he noticed the elbow soon afterwards. This was too quick to block with his iron sand so Icchiro had no choice but to take the hit. As the elbow made contact with his face, Icchiro's cigarette flew from his mouth. He staggered back, holding his head with his left hand and spinning to his right As he spun, he raised his right arm from his pocket. Fully extending his arm, he swung it backwards, as he spun clockwise. If successful, the back of Icchiro's forearm would make contact with the right side of Edegaru's face. But, Icchiro knew that the ANBU captain was too skilled to get hit by such a move so he had a backup plan.

As he extended his arm, the cloud closed in on Edegaru, becoming more and more solid as it did so. Icchiro was trying to keep him still so that his attack would hit. If this was successful, Edegaru would be trapped in a solid disk that would radiate from his waist. As all of this was going on, the sand from the spike earlier was quickly creeping up on Edegaru from behind. It formed into another spike right before Edegaru's elbow made contact and would pierce him in the back at the same time Icchiro's back hand would hit. If Edegaru were skilled enough, he would be able to avoid all three counters and Icchiro knew that. But he wasn't trying to kill him, just test him.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:05 pm
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Edegaru ducked under Icchiro's arm and quickly moved behind him. He could feel his movement begin to slow due to the cloud's solidifying process. Once Edegaru had moved to Icchiro's back, the spike that he saw coming toward's him would pierce Icchiro as long as he stood behind him. Instead of a second attack, Edegaru moved out of the cloud by quickly springing backwards using his hands and feet alternatively. Once he was out of the sand, he lifted his right hand. In it was Icchiro's cigarette. Edegaru brought it to his mouth and took some of its smoke in. He then exhaled the smoke through his nostrils and dropped the cigarette to the ground before stepping on it.  
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Tsukiko turned her gaze slowly and resentfully towards the person she felt unbelievable competitiveness with. Marciel, the new ranked Genin. Although she would have altogether ignored him under normal circumstances she felt herself compelled to look at him, diverting her attention between the fight she was so intensely following to his invitation for later on. His encouraging words threw Suki off. Blinking dumbfoundedly and dropping her guard slightly she looked at him with disbelief.

"You really think I could pull off the Genin rank so easily..."

She muttered back to him, trying to maintain that wall she so perfectly held between her and other individuals. This guy was not necessarily a bad person but she always held those who were at her level away and view them with caution.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:54 pm
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Marciel noted the strange responses of the academy student, as she managed to break her gaze from the fight between Icchiro and Edegaru, to look to him. The blank and dumbfounded look on her face was a little entertaining, before she managed to get some kind of emotion on her face, which seemed to be something altogether completely different. The tawny haired shinobi grinned, shark like teeth showing apparent.

"Why not? You'll be working with Aki over there. Ya saw what I had to work with," he chuckled, indicating the dazed boy beneath the tree. It was pretty clear. Akisame was a pretty reliable guy, though he was a completely off-the-wall character some of the times, and he was certain that he'd be even more off the wall at the springs tonight. It was going to be a blast.
 
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It took quite a few minutes as Akisame tried NOT to reach for his head and cuddle it like the busted melon it felt like. So, when Marciel mentioned his name, it took him a moment to respond. Suddenly, he threw back his head and roared with laughter, until he figured out that only made it hurt worse and he finally did grab his head. "Ah, s**t! ******** trees!" Of course. It HAD to have been the tree! It could never have been his fault! His balance was just to good! Standing up, Akisame swung at the tree in anger, and splintered it from the roots up to about eight feet high. The whole tree shook, dislodging all manner of leaves, dust, and birds nests. Coughing and knocking the stuff off of him, he finally turned to Marciel and walked over. The boy was almost completely covered from head to toe in a white, red, and black suit. His arms were a bit revealed, though, and of his face the only thing they'd see was the tan skin and the emerald green eyes.

Coughing to make sure his lungs were clear, Akisame clapped Marciel on the back, almost knocking the kid over. Eyes crinkled up in laughter, he chuckled. "So you made Genin, huh? Hopefully we'll be in the same squad. Else I'll have to beat some a** to convince them they made a bad mistake!" Glancing over to the girl beside him, he leaned in to whisper loudly to Marciel. "Who's the hotty?"



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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:53 am
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As Icchiro turned, he saw the spike coming at him since Edegaru had moved out of the way. He continued to spin until he was facing Edegaru again but the spike stopped just before piercing Icchiro. Soon after, it started to dissipate. The cloud of sand returned to its place around Icchiro but it was a little closer to him this time, just in case Edegaru tried another dash like that. But after a second or so, the sand dropped to the floor. It covered the ground around Icchiro and radiated from his position for about 5 feet. He examined Edegaru as he stood, crushing his cigarette.

That was my last one....b*****d.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:53 am
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Rawth arrived at the field, but he just wanted to check on the status of the examination, he was secretly planning a trip to Konoha in order to receive some medical training, and an operation. "I'll be gone for a while, but I'll be back " , he said to himself. (exits to gate)  

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