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 Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:31 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 7:32 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:22 pm
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░░ Backstory:
xxxxx۩ Marnie adored her parents. Her mother did all she could to make sure Marnie had something to dispel her hyperness. And her father always seemed to have a loving kind manor about him. Though she was a little creeped out by her brother sometimes, she tried her best to love him all the time.
Zellia and Marnie went out on one of their little outings for Marnie to get rid of some of her energy. It was a lovely orchard next to a small waterfall and a little pond. A fantastic place to get rid of energy. Zelia thought Marnie was swimming as she busyed herself with the apples. Though, Marnie was more interested in trying to test out her paws climbing the hill with the waterfall.
When Marnie got to the top, she encountered Chessur. After a short conversation, he convinced her to follow him to him home, with plans of freedom and adventure.
-place plot from Chessure here-
Now, after Chessur became bored of Marnie, he left her and was left in a forest she knew nothing about. All Marnie knew is that it had seemed like days when Chessur led her from her home. Luckily, only a few days had passed till she met Edmund. He seemed so full of life and easy going, Marnie instantly liked him. and he agreed to help find her family. Now, they are in search of her family, growing closer as the days pass, becoming best friends now. ۩
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:23 pm
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░░ Plots-
░░ Current plots:
xxxxx۩ Marnie is traveling with Edmund to find her family. What they encounter on those travels, no one knows yet. If you have any ideas, I would love to hear them. ۩
░░ Future plots:
xxxxx۩ Marnie will soon learn that the star she wished on after being left by Chessur, has come true. She stumbles on a basket left in the forest. Edmund is thrilled and agrees to help Marnie raise the foal until they find her family. Edmund is a fantastic father, and the foal is raised in a loving, friendly environment as they travel slowly.
One day, when the foal is older, Edmund is juggling his tea set to entertain it. Unfortunately, it some how cuts the foal. Edmund becomes ridden with guilt and believes he is a terrible father figure for the foal, worried if he stays, it will just get hurt by him again.
That night, Edmund slips away and runs off. When the foal learns this the next morning, it is devastated. The stallion he practically knew as his father has left, and the foal is convinced it is its fault. The foal runs off, trying to catch up with Edmund and convince him to come back.
Marnie is unable to find the foal before it runs off. Completely devastated by that not only is Edmund gone, but now her foal. And even more, she soon realizes that she is pregnant with Edmunds brood.
Marnie continues to wonder, looking for Edmund, her foal, and her family. she doesn't remember the last time she ate, and has no feeling to. Depressed, alone, and pregnant, she walks and walks and walks. Stomach pains finally come, and she realizes she is in labor.
After placing her offspring in the baskets, she tells herself she can't take care of all of them. So she leaves one of them at the edge of a forest, hoping someone will find it, or that it will at least die peacefully. She just has no faith in even being able to raise one, but she needs something of Edmund left.
Marnie continues to travel slowly, keeping the one basket she has left safely with her. But miracles of miracles, Edmund and the newly grown foal come across her. She is elated to see them again, but her heart drops when Edmund finds out of his child. He is extremely happy that he has a child of his own, not even knowing of the child Marnie left behind. Marnie doesn't have the heart to tell him either. Marnie can't stand the guilt and runs away after leaving the basket with Edmund and the grown foal.
She then comes across Pontifax. Who tells her that he will give her something besides love to live for.
-enter plot with Pontifax here-
Then, Marnie, still in a haze of depression, is found by her child hood friend Finnegan. He is surprised at how the chipper, full of life foal has turned into such a silent depressed adult. He thinks it is because of Pontifax and swears to take her away. Marnie agrees, and they sneak away one night.
A few weeks later, Marnie is once again surprised to learn she is pregnant. This time with Pontifax's brood. She feels disgraced, especially after just being reintroduced to her childhood love. She is about to run away when Finnegan discovers her idea and convinces her to stay. That he will help raise the foals with her as his own. Because he loves her, and he would do any thing for her. Marnie is so full of feelings that she breaks down and cry's on his shoulder. Crying all the pain from her past away.
Marnie and Finnegan raise the foals, as Marnie finally feels she has a family to belong to. The foals grow up happy and normal, and start to have their own lives as they grow older. Finnegan then comes to Marnie, asking if she would please bear his children. Marnie is over joyed at the idea and quickly agrees.
After a while of trying, Marnie finally becomes pregnant. Though Marnie asks Finnegan if they can try and find her parents before the foals are born. She would love for her parents to be a part of one of her foals lives at least.
At first, Finnegan and Marnie don't find any thing. Marnie becoming worried that she will never again be able to see her parents. But then, she runs into Edmund and the two grown up foals. Edmund is so happy to see her. He is a little jealous that Marnie is happy and pregnant from someone else, but it soon passes, just happy that she has been able to become so happy. Once he learns of her dream, he tells her he has actually found her parents, and had been sent by them to find her.
Marnie is finally able to find her parents, a week later, she gives birth. Now their little gathering has grown so large, her mother is convinced they start a herd of their own.
If you would like to be a part of any of this plot, or have any ideas on additional plots, I would love to hear them!۩
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:02 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:04 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:05 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:06 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:09 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:11 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:11 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:15 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:28 am
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Marnies Backstory.plots. Whether you wanted to know them or not x'D. In all their messy goodness lD.
Main players and what they are to her:
Ryuichi: Marnie's father
((will add the rest when I wake up or on monday))
((copied from AIM late at night, will make it prettier when I have a chance))
well, after Zelia loses Marnie, a while later she finds two baskets laying in the forest next to a pile of horse bones. She thinks that their mother has died so she takes the basket home with her. The twins later help Finn rescue marnie from Chessur. Note, Zelia does not know the twins know where Marnie is at. They are afraid if she knows she will try and get her daughter back. Which they are afraid she will get hurt, but mostly they don't want her to get Marnie back because they are afraid Zelia won't give them as much attention if she hs Marnie back.
When Marnie and Nekomata are born, Ryu sees that they are differnt and is afraid his children will not be accepted by others. He has one extra mask and gives it to his first born son. Secretly this pains Marnie, that she was not given a mask by her father. Well, soon after she meets a foal named Finnegan and they become close friends. But she knows before their friendship continues she has to get her fathers permission. Ryu is hesitant at first, seeing the foal looks slightly odd. But in the end Marnies pleading lets him make up his mind to let them be friends. Well, Finn notices that marnie is hurt by not having a mask and finds an extra in his hoard of things. He tells her that the mask is special and she falls in love with it. She thinks he claims it being special because there is a soul trapped inside. So she names the mask Sir Gussington and is convinced a trickster lives inside that has the ability to curse others.
Marnie is a very hyper child, so Zelia takes her daughter on little daily adventures. On one of these adventures Zelia gets distracted by a grove of apple treesand Marnie decides to try and climb up the small waterfall cliff. She succeeds with the help of her claws and finds Chessur at the top. Chessur soon convinces Marnie that it is getting late and that she should come sleep over at his place. She agrees and follows him. By the time they reach his home, they have been traveling all night with marnie half asleep on her hooves the whole time. So after she has rested, she no longer recognizes the area and can not get home. But he has convinced her that it is okay, she is just on 'vacation'.
Well, Chessur is quite nice to her inthe beginning. especially sence they really don't see any soquili till she is older. But once she turns into an adult he becomes very protective of his 'toy'. ((she doesnt realize he considers her just a toy)). She tries to ignore that he won't let her even talk to most soquili. The few he does let her talk/play with are the ones he is convinced are no threat to him and won't 'corrupt' her back into thinking eating meat is bad.
[03:06] ladyfirefox89: well, one day, when the twins have also grown into adults ((Zelia will be less protective of them now, and willlet them venture off a little)). They find Marnie and Chessur lets them play with her, not knowing they are adopted from Marnies mother. But the twins recognize Marnie after they are introduced. But they decide not to say they know her mother or have prior knowledge of her.
Oh, and one of the only soq Chessure really trusts around Marnie is Nukido's bunny stallion. He becomes close friends with her while in Chessur's company. This will be apparent when she has a fling with Pontifax and if she has a girl will invite Nukido's stallion to become close with the mare and eventually become close enough to have children of their own. She apreciates her old friend that much.
One day Marnie and Chessur come across another fluffy mare with a mask. This intrigues Chessur and he invvites her to stay with them for a while. He wants to have a hoard of fluffy mares. Kit agrees, with plans of sneaking away right under his nose later. She first wants to make sure that he isnt being skeevy with Marnie *Tsunes own words xD*. So this is how Kit becomes to know Marnie.
Kit is able to slip away a few days/week later.
So, the offspring that will be mute most of its life will be because when Marnie was pregnant she didn't eat enough. she didn't want the offspring, but her body wouldn't let her mind get rid of them either. well, the other two foals growing inside her took most of the nutrition and didn't leave enough for mine to fully form. It seems that he is perfectly healthy except he is small in stature and cannot talk. This is from his voice box muscles not forming correctly. but when he is almost an elder, he gets into a fight and gets his neck fractured, damaging his voice box again. When a unicorn is able to heal him, it is also able to put the muscles in the right spot and it finally allows him to speak.
I am very open to back feed and suggestions =D. Pm me with your ideas and comments nwn<33.
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