like the poem i wrote?

[boo-boo8]

vote 4 me in arenas!!
"The Great Maze

Life is like a maze. It's full of traps, obstacles, and choices.
There's entries and exits.
Sometimes people don't make it through the maze. People fall fore traps, made by the devil, or just give up halfway through.
But for the people that make it through the exits are sent into heaven! "  

[CrimsonsDecayingRose]

Is this the first poem you've wrote?  

[Azkeel]

Haha you're poem inspired me for a song I think. Topic wise at least. I like the idea of using a maze as a way to describe life. But I think I'm going to use more of a circles vs. walking straight. See inspired a train of thought! haha thanks  

[Le Pale to the Chief]

It's wonderful. :3

God Bless you!

 

[faithful quenga]

I am a sinner... "1 John 1:8"

cute poem!

... Saved by God's grace "Acts 15:11"

 

[serene__]

Very true, it is.
Nice analogy! C:  

[Green_Fuu]

He he it made me think of this pic:
Pic too big, click instead.

This would kinda represent the people that see the big cheese xd

 

[boo-boo8]

CrimsonsDecayingRose

Is this the first poem you've wrote?

no i write lots! i put a very sad poem about deppresion in the areana too  

[boo-boo8]

thx for all the compliements guys! i hope this poem has inspired anyone who read it to think about life diffrently.