[OOC] Redstone post critique.

[Articx-Frost]

A place for people to critique the posts of those trying to better their roleplay skills and those trying to smooth out their characters. This includes my skills and characters as you never stop improving.

A link to the Rp thread  

[just call me butt]

I hope I'm allowed to post here, as no one did earlier... *looks around nervously*

Anyways, I just read the posts, and there was some other races mixed in... And I don't quite know/understand the 'golden earring' thing, and the other markings to verify you are of that race. Was this talked about earlier in some other post...?

Oh gosh, I feel so clueless. I'm sorry for my stupid-ness. sweatdrop  

[Articx-Frost]

No worries, you are allowed to post here. That's what it's for.

I should clarify that I have his profile in my character thread over here. The golden earing is to keep him from being bound to anything else as he's bound to it. He is a dijin after all.  

[just call me butt]

Oh, okay then! Thanks for clearing the mist. *rushes to RP*  

[AurinJade]

Oh goodness, a character cafe! I love these things. <3 Some of my favorite characters have been developed through character cafes. Wonderful RP tools. I will be joining sooner or later.  

[Lydia Blue]

I quite like the look of this role-play. I'm toying with a character at the moment, but I wouldn't logically be able to join until the roleplay has progressed to evening or so.
I haven't role-played in ages.  

[just call me butt]

Haha. I am just waiting for the others to roleplay, and so far, it has been hopeless. D: So, if you could jump in, it would be terrific. sweatdrop But take time in making your character.  

[Articx-Frost]

Gah! gonk My fault in this case. School's eating up much more of my time than I'd expected.  

[Lydia Blue]

I kind of want to play around with a completely unlikable character. What's the stand on slavery in this world/time? What about witches?  

[Articx-Frost]

The world is free form. Anything goes.  

[Lydia Blue]

Neat.
I'm think I'll jump in with a slave trader fellow when the time has reached evening.  

[Articx-Frost]

No more posting for anything?