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Yui Ga Dokuson

Thirteenth Gatekeeper

PostPosted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 2:49 pm
Character Application and Approval

tab Below you will find a guide to filling out a profile, and below that is where you go to apply for your character of your own creation, utilizing the rules and regulations found throughout the guild. For Profile information and layouts please see here. Until your character is approved we require submission of the profile to utilize one of the two provided layouts, after which you may post your character profile in any way you choose fit in a different location, as long as all information provided here is there as well.

Character Profile Guide

_________General Resource Links

_________Introduction
tab Hello, and welcome to Shattered Past! Thank you for taking the time and effort to take your first step on the road to a tough, but rewarding, role play experience where your actions and reactions will directly shape the fate of this world in character, and this guild out of it. As we have striven to bring a more unique and in depth role play experience to our members, you may find a large number of our systems either confusing or seemingly bereft of information, or at the very least not readily useful. As such, this guide is being written for you to assist in the creation of your first RPC, or Role Playing Character, or as a refresher course when making another. Please keep in mind that no one method is always correct and perfect the first time, nor really ever, but if you have ideas or suggestions to help make this guide a more legible, and understandable document do not hesitate to contact Lanfaer or Royal Taorito!

_________Picking the Profile Layout
tab Below we have an official, supported Profile Layout. As long as all of the data that is on it is addressed I do not care how if you decide to add more. If you add more, or wish to rearrange it, please wait to do so until after it has been approved. It keeps the approval process simple.

_________Tell Me Some Basics

Who are you?
tab What is a name? A name is the title given to your identity, and hints at the heritage from whence you came. While the world of the Naruto source material is based in a Japanese heritage, we welcome characters from all over, and as such we hold no restrictions on the names you decide to choose as long as they follow Gaia ToS.
How Old Are You?
tab No one may be over the age of 16. There were multiple ways to reduce this age if bringing in an old character, though you must be proactive in asking a moderator for information on it. The Approval Committee is who you'd want to contact. That being said, we also do not have an age minimum, and while playing a fetus might be fun it isn't recommended.
What Sex Are You?
tab Is it SJW-ism? No, the question refers to the gender born under. We do not have issue with characters being made that utilize unconventional sexes, such as being intersex. If you wish to list your sexuality you would do so here, or if Gender is different than sex then please, put that next to the biological sex. This is important for some Abilities to reference.
What Do You Look Like?
tab Simply put, the grand majority of members will be using pictures to describe their characters, which, depending on the nature of said picture, may or may not be completely accurate. As such, describe here what you look like. More, describe what you look like if you're the type to wear different outfits, and have a few that are very specific and regular. Make sure to write if you have secret tattoos or hidden encryptions on your back!
What is Your Race?
tab As previously stated we welcome all types. An example is that, if Human is picked, we already have one person of Irish descent, and another of Aztec descent. We won't knock you either for or for not using this, but keep in mind that it can add flavor and flair to any character to simply change their skin tone, their physical features, their accents, or even add their practices of faith or small customs to their actions!

_________Now, Some Details

Personality?
tab It is important to note that while many consider only a few words enough, the Personality serves as a point of interest for the Approval Committee, and should be for you. While, yes, we look at your profile to make sure it's usable, the Profile is primarily here for you to reference and understand your own character before you beginning using them, and serve as a guide while you do. The more you explore this the greater your understanding of your own character, and the more we, as moderators, can understand the goals and desires of your character.
What Do You Fear
tab Everyone has them. These need not be phobias, but these are fears that help guide the personality. They must actually influence your character in some way. Certain ones that are for granted, such as “Death” or “Loss of Companions” are givens. Unless these somehow drive a specified character flaw/strength in Personality, they do not count. You must have at least three. Please, explore these. Fear is a primary emotion, it sets the groundwork for much of the personality your character has! Explore what makes them tick. Fear of losing your friends? Maybe this makes the character overprotective, willing to do anything to ensure their friends come first, as an example.
What Era(s) Are You From
tab In Shattered Past you will find that much has changed in the world. This is due to the enormous amount of time that has passed since a single Human has graced the world, as all were taken by the Plague. To reference the far distant past we refer to Eras to highlight a particular strength of time. This can dictate what knowledge your character may have had, what sort of work fields or experiences with the Plague the character had. An example is that you may have been born during the edge of one age, and lived through the beginning of another, giving you possible first hand accounts of what happened during it. Keep in mind that no character may come from the 5th Era. See the link in the name above for more information.
What Have You Experienced
tab Alright, folks, break out your thinking caps and your hand warmers, we're going for a bumpy ride! Histories can, depending on the person, be the most interesting, fun, and hated part of writing a profile. Most cut it short, saying only a few words. Well, here in Shattered Past we require two [2] Paragraphs at least, and there isn't any getting around that. Why? Well, you see, it needs to be detailed as who you were, and what you did previously, is incredibly important to who your character is now. It helps support the personality, the strengths and flaws, and will be referenced in different events within the guild. The more you add, the more that can be used for a more immersive experience within this guild. Want to be more involved in this guild directly, personally? Write a history, and we'll work it into the story line, big or small.

_________What Can You Do

Classes
tab First and foremost: You begin at E, or D - rank. If you begin at E - rank get all of the benefits described, including that starting one hundred [100] points of Mana and Stamina. If you start at D - rank, you would only start with fifty [50], and you begin with half [1/2] the Ryo as normal to pick your starting inventory. But you get a class! This guild is about starting with nothing and earning your way up the totem poll, so if you want the full experience start at E - rank. As Classes begin at D - rank, this means that E - ranked characters, who may have had classes before, no longer begin with one now, and you will have to wait until you reach D - rank again to pick your first class [500 Experience points away!]. If you want to write something here, fine, just keep in mind it won't have any effect statistic wise until you hit D - rank.
How Do You View It
tab Same as classes, bubs! Unfortunately no one can use a Discipline, unless earned in some fashion through guild events, to achieve a Discipline at E - rank. These will be specifically marked as usable at E - rank to ensure no miscommunication.
What Makes You Unique
tab And here's the really, really, really hard part of making a character. Personal Attributes help you define your character, granting them supplemental changes ranging from situational modifiers (+1 Power after defecating!) to permanent increases (+10 Spell Slots!). These can be incredibly difficult to figure out at most times, but thankfully, we have a handy-dandy guide for personal attributes, linked in the Terms and Systems link at the beginning of this post. If this still doesn't help, consider two things. What do you want them to do? Write it out, and we'll help you achieve it if its possible with your Personal Attribute. Or, if you have an idea of what you want, go pester harass ask Lanfaer for aid. He enjoys making them, the weirdo.
What Are Your Limitations
tab Now, it's important to note a few things. Every character starts with one hundred [100] Mana and Stamina pools. This determines how many techniques, talents, and powers you may use before you run out and have to retreat. This can be changed by your Stats, which is further explained, along with Archetypes, at the hyperlinked page. To explain a few things further in this section, however, see below:
    → Materialization is what happens when your emotions run high, when special locations are found, or when you use an enormous amount of mana or stamina. It is also the color your Mana takes when visible. Your materialization takes on a shape or effect that has no battle purposes, such as armor, an afterimage, or even the twisting, screaming faces of the damned as they grasp for air! If you want this to do anything besides look like something you'll need to use a Personal Attribute to make it so.
    → Mana Elements: There are five base ones to choose from. Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning, Earth. Evos may grant you combination ones, but these are the generic ones.

What Skills Do You Possess
tab What are you skilled at doing? How proficient are you at dissecting a mole for science! Do you know the right end of a hoe to use when hoeing the earth?! Skills define the character, and rules, and regulations, can be found here.
What Are You Proficient With
tab Formless combat, unnamed attacks, beating-someone-with-a-chair, however you call it the Proficiency system lets you know what you can do without needing to pull out the big guns (ala Named Techniques). This is a measure of what weapons you are proficient in, and will be referencing in styles and Talents as requirements. Click here for more information.
What Are Your Limitations
tab This is hugely important, and is dictated by many factors ranging from your choice of Archetypes, Classes, Disciplines and Personal Attributes. To put it simply, this is the number of slots you have from different types of techniques. Once you're full you'll need to somehow increase your slots before learning more.

_________What Do You Possess

How Much Experience Do I Possess
tab Truth be told, zilch. On a more official note no one begins play with experience as a Role Play Character. Every character must gain experience to work their way up the Experience Ranks, from E, to D, to C, to B, to A, and then to S - rank.
How Much Ryo Do I Own
tab Shattered Past is a member driven world, which includes the Economy. Right now, guild NPC races that can be interacted with primarily use barter or theft as a means of trade, meaning that while Ryo for the moment may not be used it may at a later time if members set that up as a form of currency. To start with, however, no one possess any, as any Ryo the character has left over after purchasing their starting gear is erased.
What Do I Carry
tab The Rule of this guild is that if you do not have it listed in this section your character will not have it at all. This needs to be kept up to constant date. This includes description of the clothing. Any hidden pockets, straps, or weapons, etc. This is an important section. When Starting there will be Starting Packages, listed under the Archetypes, that informs you what you may begin play with. This is to help determine what your starting stats and Ryo is. With this Ryo, you purchase items that fill up the slots here. All Ryo left over is permanently removed. Please keep in mind the reality of what you are carrying, including Money, and how much space and volume your character can realistically carry.
What Techniques Do You Possess
tab Every Character begins play with one [1] E - C Ranked technique learned. This can be from anything except for Bijuu and Clan // Bloodline techniques. If a Custom Technique or Item is desired it must be between E - D ranks, and must be submitted to the appropriate Approval thread.

_________Default Casting Method

• For more in depth descriptions and information on Casting Methods, please see the [Following Link].
• Casting magic of any type requires some methodology to wield. While classes allow the character to select a limited number of methods that are linked to spells from that class, every character begins play with one [1] Default they can fall back on. These base level casting methods are described below, and cannot be changed once selected, though attaining a class will stack with this selection.
      Vocal and Somantic → Your mind if filled with arcane words and hand gestures that make your mind spin with power. Your mana wells within you, and with these words and gestures you shape the mana into a new form: magic. While you may use words or gestures singly on any spell up to C - rank, anyone higher will require both to cast, though with some training [after thirty [30] successful castings of a single spell] the spell may be cast with one [1] without the other by reducing the Strength or Speed rank by one [1].
      Hand Seals → An ancient, outdated metholody of casting, Hand Seals are the hallmark of a former Shinobi, one of those that helped decimate the world. Utilizing combinations of hand seals based upon the Zodiac of Monkey, Dragon, Rat, Bird, Snake, Ox, Dog, Horse, Tiger, Boar, Ram, and Hare, with the number of seals required going up with more powerful spells, the mana is shaped by these specific seals as it exits the body for a variety of effects. Hand Seals traditionally require the use of both hands, though with some training [after thirty [30] successful castings of a single spell] the spell may be cast with one [1] hand by reducing the Strength or Speed rank by one [1].
      Magic Circles → While most definitely a flashy method of casting, drawing magic circles has its benefits. When harnessing the mana within the practitioner uses a part of their anatomy to trace lines of their own mana into the air or onto a surface a pattern that gives shape and rule to the mana flow in order for it to be cast. Completion of the circle causes it to be cast immediately. The length of time it takes to draw is no more than that of any other casting method, but the drawing can be interrupted just as one might break a line of salt or smear a line of ink. If, however, the magic circle is carved in some manner, or permanently placed in some manner, upon a structure it may be later activated by simply interacting with and paying the cost of the spell, though this will always count as an Action. When done so, the circle lights with the color of one's mana, often displaying some characteristics of their Mana Manifestation. In all cases these circles exist as long as the duration of the spell, meaning if a spell lasts four [4] posts so, too, does the circle, and if it is disturbed by sufficient movement or action the spell will immediately fail.
      Talismans → Not as well used as the previous entries, Talismans represent a unique artifact level approach to casting spells. If this is selected at character creation the character begins with a small deck of talisman cards, ranging from as smell as a simple deck of playing cards to tablets the size of tomes, with a total of twenty [20] cards to begin with. Each time a spell is learned the practitioner may press a digit to their Talisman and inject their Mana, and the memory of the spells effects, rules, and regulations into the depths of this artifact, imbuing it with the power of their knowledge and allowing them to be a focus for one's spell casting. To use the Talisman, the practitioner must either reveal the card for the realms to see in some fashion, revealing its face for it to take effect, or throw it and activate it at a different location with a limited range of fifteen [15] meters, where it will trigger. Once cast the Talisman disintegrates, though at the beginning of the practitioners next post the card reconstitutes into the deck, available for use. Whenever touching the deck the desired Talisman always appears to be at the top. Please note, the Talisman may only have one spell [1] at a time on it, but may be imbued with any Personal Attributes, Disciplines, or Augmentative knowledge/spells that would normally affect it already in place. Additionally, the Talismans may have the cost of the Mana placed within the Talismans, and as such when they are "used" for the first time they will be cast without the need for more mana. Unfortunately, once they are reconstituted their mana is spent, requiring preparation again. Preparation/Recoding of a Talisman take one [1] Action per Talisman. The number of Talismans available increase by five [5] at D - rank, B - rank, and S - rank for a total of twenty five [25] Talismans at S - rank.

 
PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 6:28 pm
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Lanfaer
Captain

Aged Genius

8,075 Points
  • Befriended 100
  • Survivor 150
  • Hygienic 200

HeadlessKoko

Invisible Regular

12,125 Points
  • Invisibility 100
  • Inquisitor 200
  • Alchemy Level 2 100
PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2017 2:23 pm
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_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Φ__Ⱥ я Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ...]
Who Am I…| Kagerou Uchiha.
How Old Am I…| 20- no... 40?... No... No... 14.
What Gender Am I...| Female?... Yes, female but I feel like I was a male once.
When Was I Born...| On the cusp... the cusp of the virgin and the lion... August 24.
What Are My People...| Japanese.
What Frame Am I...| Light. I move... gracefully and elegantly. Something was nice enough to let me know that much.
How Tall Am I...| 5' 8"?... No... No not anymore... 5' now, and right before my growth spurt.
And How Heavy...| Now... 100 lbs.
What Do I Look Like...|
    Green hair like the leaves that grew on trees, growing long just the way I like it. Red eyes as vibrant as a Sharingan, full of emotions and life. My father had the same. Yes, I inherited my hair and eyes from my father, and for a long time, I wondered if I was anything like my mother. Yes, for a long time, until I was older and more experienced. I remember that, or maybe it was all a dream? Maybe this is all a dream? I cannot know, so I suppose I should accept it. Anyways, as of right now, though, I don't think I'll be seeing much of my mother in me for a while. My body feels smaller and less developed. This is not who I had grown up to be. Had I... Had I grown younger? What?... How... Yes, yes I had... I had done this to myself... I am... once again... for the first time in decades... maybe... I am a teen again, even down to my clothes. I feel that this is what I always used to wear. A hoodie, high-collared sweater, jeans, and sneakers. How did I come into this outfit again?... Was it intentional?... Ugh... My head hurts... and my eyes, they hurt too... but I... I don't think anything is wrong with them, at least on the surface...]
Where Am I From...| Kirigakure.
Did I Belong...| Yes, my mind is becoming clearer now, I was as much an Uchiha as I was a Kiritani, and I remain as such in memory of my beloved father and mother.

What Am I Like...: "A Sound Soul Dwells Within A Sound Mind And A Sound Body."
    I like to think I am calm, like a quiet forest, but should I see someone hurt before my very eyes, then that forest rustles and breaks, it jumps to life for the life of another. The path of the healer and protector is one I chose for myself knowing that it will not be easy, and I strive for my best in this path because it is what I want to do in this world. I want to help, not hurt, and to this true self of mine, I wish to remain true. Over decades, I have grown and spread my roots and branches. Some had broken and been shed. Others were warped, but through it all my core stood strong. I was not the young hopeful I once was the last time I had this childish body, but the hope within me remains strong. Though, I don't know if this was the conclusion my life reached in the end or if it because the later of my years increasingly become foggy. Who, exactly, did I grow into? My hunch is that I never lost my calm or inner peace, and while I may have learned the value of a mask and the situational irresponsibility of honesty, I always returned to myself in the end. I did not lose myself like my mother before me had and my father before me can rest in peace knowing that I will continue to hold fast to who I am, that I will never make the mistake of putting aside my core for duties and beliefs out of my control. I will find a way and my determination to myself will not waver. I am someone who loves to smile and to see smiles on others. I am someone who finds myself precious, but will give this body without a second thought for the sake of others who I find more precious. The solitude of nature calls to me as much as the love of the masses. The silence found in a good story, the sound in good music, and the peace of a nap are all equally enjoyed. Behind my disarming smile and calm demeanor, which are more often true than not but are not always, I hold words that I am not afraid to use, though I may choose them carefully. I like to be close with others, and while I've grown old enough that I can no longer excuse myself with the claim that I've forgotten, sometimes I still like to pretend that I have forgotten so I can share warmth and care with another. I am human. I make mistakes, but I try not to. I am like your mysterious friend.
What Did I Believe In...: "Every encounter, an experience, and every life, countless encounters."

What Am I Good At...: "Hakuna Matata"
    Subterfuge, stealth, and... wait no, when I was young, that was what I trained in, I think. I did have a gift for those arts, but it wasn't long before I decided to change, decided I wanted to preserve life rather than destroy it, and I put forth as much of my strength into the pursuit of such a dream: all of my abilities, my agility, my wit, my smarts, my intuition, my perception. For most of my life, I specialized in medical techniques, supporting a team, and calmly keeping out a keen eye to both exploit our advantages while shoring up our disadvantages. Outside of combat, I was also raised with the most solid foundation any kunoichi could ask for outside of a hyper-specialized and isolated training regimen, covering everything I could ever need to fake a role and being introduced, from an early age, everything it meant to be a shinobi. I can feel it in my bones, though. The knowledge may remain in my head, but my body no longer retains the memory of years of drilling and practice.
What Am I Terrible At...:
    I was most vulnerable when I was alone. Because of my neglect, I also fell short in physical combat. My heart, too, was soft. I could not ignore even the slightest hope that we can end a fight without death, and that mercy will sometimes be sorely misplaced, leaving me and others vulnerable. These weaknesses, I didn't mind them, but they were also a luxury. I could only walk the path of my ideals that gave birth to these slights because I had the support of others, a whole village's worth of people who thought differently than I and could shore up where I fell so short in terms of what is expected from a ninja... I can feel it already, though, I will be alone when I awake... I wonder if I should...
What Do I Fear...:
    Heh. There is this one irrational fear I have of ghosts, and specifically only those that would look like floating bed sheets. I never did grow out of it. Then, there's also death... Though, I suppose everyone is afraid of the reaper grim. Still, the thought of my death, of the unknown that could very well just be a blank void and the end of all of my thought, chilled me to my very bone. Getting hurt, sick, battered, bruised, or even tortured were all outcomes of my life I had accepted since I was young, but I would fight with all I had and even more to stay alive. Even more than my own death, though, I dreaded the death of those around me, even strangers and especially those closest to me. If it could be avoided, then I would do everything in my power to avoid it... I think... My life for my friends, always, but what about others? I hated to see any life snuffed out, but I was also a ninja, my very occupation was shrouded in death no matter how I put it... I could understand when others did it, I always did, but did I really go my entire life without taking a single life? Or standing by and watching a death I could have prevented take its course? How did I reconcile the two ends?...
What Era Am I From...: Into the Era of Madness (-200 to -151 BET) I was born. Until when I lived I cannot remember...
What Have I Experienced...:
    Once upon a time...
    there was a little girl with hair as green as the forest and eyes as red as blood. She was a precocious little one, but as gentle as she was demanding and as calm as she was lively. A well-behaved child, she was exactly what her family, especially her mother's side, wanted in their newest member. From the moment she could talk, she learned to speak the names of the various tools she would no doubt use in the feature. Once she could walk, already plans were being discussed about how training for her would go about, if at all. For the sake of her future, she was trained and taught everything that could be passed down to her. Day in she was trained hard and day out she was treasured with the love and warmth of family, even her mother who could no longer feel her real self put her all into a motherly act for the child she loved. Every week, the green-haired child's limits were tested to the utmost. Every month, her red eyes saw and learned something new. Every year, her body grew with memories of her training embedded within them. Like generations of her mother's family had, the little one was destined to one day grow into a hidden tool of the village hidden within the mists that she grew up in and loved. The path was hard, but it was not one the little child feared or was unwilling to walk. Wishing with all her heart to have the power to protect those she cared for, she happily accepted her tasks at hand, and it was not like she was treated cruelly or without love. Even the most hardships she faced were carefully restrained with love and care. After all, the harder the trainer was now, the greater chance she had of surviving in the future, and that was what mattered to those who loved her.

    Then one day, the little child saw for the first time what her mother was. The beautiful lover of child and husband, the gentle killer, had long since donned masks upon masks that she had never taken off. Who she was beneath those countless masks was a mystery even to herself. Somewhere, there was definitely love for her child, her husband, her family, and her village, but more than that eluded her. Every time she met her child, she had been merely wearing the mask of mother to care for and love her child, to give the world's precious gift to her the mother that she deserved. Growing as she did, the child's perception and intuition would one day find out her mother, and when that day came was also the day the little one began to have second doubts about the path she took.

    Her path was meant to protect, but protecting had become synonymous with hurting somewhere along the line. Hurt was not something the young one wanted to spread to the world, but she was always told that she had the makings of one who could protect through hurt very well. An agile body, quick wits, eyes and mind for the important details, and other qualities heralded the growth of a great assassin or scout. When she took her first steps into finalizing her place in the village, the academy, she passed with honors all of the lessons and tests set before her to ensure she had a future. She was almost there and almost ready when she stopped.

    The little girl, not so little now, turned around. She turned around and chose for herself what she wanted to give to the village. Hurt was necessary to protection. She knew it was only because there were others who could hurt for the village that she had the luxury to choose to not hurt but heal. Setting aside her honorable graduation on time with the rest of her class, the stubborn girl returned to her lessons branched into a different path, one with less steel and more life. She decided then that she would combine her love for life with her love for music to help in the world she had been trained all of her life to survive, a world she knew without a doubt was dangerous and harsh.

    There was once a giant tree...
    and Kagerou watched as it destroyed her village not long after she graduated from academy and was officially recognized as a genin. Before even receiving a squad, the sky grew dark. She was luck that she wasn't caught in the middle of the devastation. There were others who had to suffer the horrors that took place in the center of the terror. Kagerou barely handled even the monsters on the outer ring of the darkness. She didn't know how the nightmare began, and when the nightmare ended, she wasn't sure about the details even then.

    Like so many others, she wanted answers, but she didn't let the curiosity eat at her. When everything was over, she focused on what mattered. The past could always be discovered later if she really needed to know. The present and future of the village mattered more. Kagerou couldn't do much, but she did everything she could. She willed herself to smile when no one else could, just to show it was possible and to help those who had suffered so much more than her to slowly recover their old smiles. She cried and mourned for the fallen like the rest, but she also knew that memories could only be honored with such intensity for so long. Fortunate enough to have both of her parents, her entire immediate family, survive the incident, Kagerou did not need to experience the torment that clouded the judges of so many others and had fewer shackles keeping her from moving forward and onwards towards helping the village.

    She spent most of her time, during the beginning of reconstruction, in the make-shift hospitals that tended to the many injured in the fighting and the growing number of people falling ill because of the poor living conditions immediately following the crisis. Serving as an assistant with her mediocre medical abilities, she learned plenty by working alongside much more experienced doctors and nurses. This wasn't the type of structured learning experience Kagerou had expected to advance her medical skills in, but she took what she could get. Because of the sheer number of patients and the sheer lack of personnel, Kagerou actually didn't get a lot of chances to learn any ninja medical techniques. In light of such numbers and no imminent threat, the medical staff had to conserve the energy of everyone working. Chakra was used sparingly, and as a result, while Kagerou's knowledge of standard medical practices increased, her skills as a medical shinobi stagnated. Every now and then, she had to bring out her rudimentary medical jutsus. However, she was given no chances to learn any new ninja techniques.

    Even after the initial rush of medical attention ended as combat patients were discharged and the living conditions of the village reached a point where people could leave cleanly and safely, there was still so much more work for Kagerou to attend to. As she knew so much less about everything than anyone, she didn't find a place working in fields that would allow her to practice the ninja arts. Again, while she could have learned jutsus and reached a level where she was helpful with ninja techniques, learning cost time and energy that could be much better towards other uses.

    Eventually, Kagerou settled into the simple task of transporting supplies. It was a task anyone could do. Therefore, perfect to give to someone that didn't have special skills in any field. Working around her small frame, Kagerou was tasked with transporting shipments, alone, in a small boat that she rowed while standing at the back. The size of her long, narrow boat also made it a good fit for transporting people. Thus, she ended up ferrying people and objects across Kirigakure's vast lake for the rest of the reconstruction.

    When the reconstruction completed and Kirigakure could fully function once more, Kagerou received an announcement and notice from the Mizukage, one that was distributed to all shinobi in the villages. Taking this as a signal that it was time, she finished her last jobs as a gondolier and readied for her return to her initial job: kunoichi. She sort of wanted to keep the gondolier oar and gondola for old time's sake, but figured that as she wouldn't have much use for it anymore, it would be better if she just left it for someone who would be using it more regularly.

    Hoping that her skills hadn't grown too rusty, Kagerou returned to the ninja scene. Not in a showy shower of sparks, but in her usual calm, happily smiling manner.

    A lonely Mizukage, horrors from the past, and many sleepless nights walked into a bar...
    on Halloween, and a world of chaos unfolded all around those poor, unlucky few. The reconstruction had just finished. Kagerou had just received her insignia, embedded within her own skin, that reinstated her into Kirigakure. She had even received her first squad assignment, as part of the Mizukage's personal team, no less. Surprise, excitement, but just generally really happy to be back. Such great emotions, all of them ruined when what should have been a simple(?) mission to the Mizukage's supposedly haunted and deadly island home was turned topsy turvy by a sudden, mysterious event.

    Everyone disappeared except for a select, seemingly random few scattered throughout the village. What the others had to go through, Kagerou never really asked, but her own group, made of herself, Takeda Shirai, and Nozomi Aburame, found themselves face-to-face with their past. Well, Takeda and Nozomi did, at least--Takeda facing the ghosts of his dead tribe and Nozomi seeing someone she had thought had died six months prior. All Kagerou had to endure was the riddle-giving abomination of ghastly pale and horribly stretched apart woman nailed and connected to the back of some cow that the rest also had to deal with. It all unraveled when Takeda acted rashly in rage and Nozomi's mild overreaction evolved into a very physical consequence that she had not expected, something that forced Takeda to sever all of his own tendrils, appendages coming from his own body that he could feel everything through. It was, for all intents and purposes, a mass amputation. The group of three technically succeeded in completing the first challenge, but with Takeda in the state that he was, calling what they had done a "success" was hard to swallow. Still, they had been given the keys to ending this nightmare, and a message from the Mizukage's most trusted little brother. Without further ado, the trio made their way to the office with all haste, where the climax of the event took place.

    There, while everyone gathered waited with bated breath for those who knew what the hell was going on to end this ordeal, a wave worthy of the worst nightmares crashed into and through the walls, windows, and door. A horrifying deluge of faces and bodies contorted, slashed into, and otherwise disfigured into abominations galore of those the watcher loved and cared for. Who knew what would have happened if the wave had crashed into those who were living. It was a good thing no one had to find out because at just that moment, the heroes arrived to save the day. Whatever the little brother of the Mizukage, Shadow, had needed to do end this, he had done it at some cost. The Mizukage Jack returned in... his special kind of odd glory and expelled the nightmares. Normalcy returned... supposedly.

    Again, Kagerou was left with no answers, but again, what was she supposed to do about it? It seemed like, other than those she had seen in the office, no one else knew that anything had happened. Not even a comment about the giant foot that had been suspended in mid-air, threatening to stomp the village flat. She... she just did her best to recover and recuperate. Not herself. No, she was quite good, actually. The doom and gloom had chilled her soul, with its voices that threatened demands and whispers that tried but failed to tear through her calm. However, as ever, she knew that she would just need time, and besides, others should come before her. With those who were fit to walk, Kagerou carried the injured down to the hospital to be treated.

    Shadow and Kagerou sitting in a tree, K-I-
    No. Please no. Was asking for some normalcy too much? Apparently it was because as soon as everyone was situated at the hospital and Kagerou was ready to visit them, something happened... again... before a day had even passed. Some weird who know whats affected Kagerou and, incidentally, many of the same people who were trapped within that hellish nightmare realm. The effects differed, but it all had some sort of unusual effect on the behavior and/or the body. Kagerou's were loss of inhibition, gender swap, and... oh god... She fell madly in love with Shadow the Mizukage's little brother, who Kagerou barely knew. It was utter chaos. Reports of two yanderes roaming the hospital, by Kagerou's count, both after Miki who had approached Jack on a cloud of hearts. Oh, but Kagerou wasn't noticing any of that. She had ran out to distance herself as far away from the disturbance in her mind, from Shadow and the havoc he was wrecking on her rapidly changing inner self. She wanted to... stop? Go on? As the minutes ticked away, it was getting harder and harder to tell until she just... she just had to give up, to relax and remain calm as ever. Calm and completely without any self control. What ensued was Kagerou waltzing into wound Takeda's room without a single care just so she could change clothes, getting tossed out with a lot of force by said teammate's ridiculously powerful tendrils (which just meant that not only had she disturbed his rest but she had also caused him to overexert himself), almost doing the deed with Nozomi, doing the deed by herself in the bathroom of Takeda's hospital room, changing clothes (the one sane thing in all of this), cutting her hair (why?!), showing up at her parents' place and showing them what an embarrassing mess she was, going off to find Shadow, and proposing to said Shadow upon sight.

    Of course, Shadow, now a girl, immediately said no to the male Kagerou. Thank the grace of all that was good that, to Kagerou, love was meant to be voluntary, so she was all ready to wait for him and just pamper him in the process. They went to get food and sometime during the middle of that the next phase of this who knows what change started. Different effects. Kagerou and Shadow at least returned to their normal genders. Kagerou was struck with a ridiculous feeling of paranoia. Nothing too interested happened after that, though.

    Oh, Jack did show up and nearly kill a genin that shot an arrow at him, though. As a testament to Kagerou's dedication to her ideals, even through her fear, she stepped forwards between the two to try to dissuade the Mizukage partaking in any deaths while he was not in the right frame of mind. Then, whatever spell held all of them broke. Things returned to normal. Kagerou profusely apologized for disturbing Shadow, who was also a patient like Takeda. Aside from whatever physical injuries he might have had, Shadow had also lost his memories. Kagerou had also been assigned to showing him around Kirigakure and generally taking care of him until his memories returned, which she had obviously failed fantastically right from the get-go. Good times, really good times.

    Shadow was still hungry, though, so the two went and ate something together. They had a nice, normal talk. Kagerou learned that he liked to draw. Hey, maybe she could recover from her terrible first impression?

    Nope.
    Just nope. Shadow dies.

    Okay, so first, the two go and get some shut-eye. Well, even before that, Kagerou goes over to the giant statue of herself hugging a small girl that was erected during the course of the crazy events. Atop it, the creator, the small girl portrayed in the statue, slept. Kagerou didn't have the heart to wake her up, so she just patted her head and said a few words, then went back down to rest up for the mission the next morning, the mission to the Lonely Island, Jack's mysterious island.

    The next morning, Kageoru, Shadow, and Takeda woke up on said island. No, they didn't walk to it or anything. They straight up woke up on it. Well, Kagerou and Shadow did. Takeda slept through the whole ordeal. If Jack could have done this from the beginning, then that would have been nice.

    What happened next, though, wasn't nice. Jack appeared and after some signature cryptic words, things got creepy. Kagerou and the still sleeping Takeda were suddenly thrown out through a portal and to the cliff that should have been their starting point. Shadow... had to remain behind... in the growing darkness, Kagerou had to leave Shadow and Jack behind. Utterly helpless, she watched as the portal closed behind her and the yet sleeping Takeda, closing the curtain on Jack's and Shadow's death for all she knew.

    She couldn't mourn in the middle of a mission, though, and she had been given a mission right before being tossed out. Kagerou was to deliver a thick tome to the Mizukage's advisor, Inka, and inform him that he would be the next to succeed the position of Mizukage. Leaving behind the sleeping Takeda, the boy was apparently dead to the world, Kagerou kept her cool and completed the mission as instructed. Both tome and message were given to Inka as instructed then she withdrew for some time to herself.

    Rest for the dead and tests for the living.
    Kagerou got all of ten minutes to herself before she was called over to her grandparents, mother's side. It was enough time, though, for her to overcome the most recent loss. Death, after all, was a not unfamiliar concept with her, raised to be a kunoichi and witness to the Sero's devastation. Losing Jack and Shadow hurt Kagerou, but at least she was hurt more with how there was almost nothing she could do or maybe the doubt that she had failed in her duty to reach out and stay in the slim chance her presence could have saved either of them. A life of a genin to a jounin, after all.

    When she received the summons, Kagerou was back to functioning at relatively normal capacity. Though, it would take more days for her to really recover from the sting of loss the deaths left in her heart. With proper manners and behavior, Kagerou met with her grandparents, who promptly told her that she had been signed up for the chuunin exams, no questions asked. Kagerou didn't bother asking anything. After all, handling surprise was a vital skill to a ninja.

    Kagerou left for the chuunin exams. Successfully finished the first test by following the biggest group and getting into the first round of the second part, which was the standard fighting tournament. To accommodate her support style, Kagerou was paired with another in her fight. In the middle of the fight, though, tree hugger (Evergreen) terrorists apparently thought that it was a great idea to terrorize a bunch of genin with giant hunks of fish falling from the sky and exploding into ice mosquitoes. With the air quickly chilling and everyone's toes threatening to freeze, at least in Kagerou's area (others had different problems), the exams were called off and everyone was instructed to evacuate. Evacuate everyone did, with Kagerou helping to gather stragglers while others worked on building a makeshift ship because apparently the last one had already left.

    Then when everyone was back at port safely, the examiners said good work, gave them rewards, and promised to send chuunin promotion recommendations to everyone's kages. With that, the exam arc came to an end. Kagerou returned home.

    HGRALB
    Kagerou returned home to... what was it now? Her memories begin to fail her now. The new Mizukage had settled into his position over the course of the exams. Kagerou, too polite, does not ask about the recommendations at all and instead goes about increasing her experience by helping around with the new missions. She gets to know Kumotake more, who she had befriended since they first met in the Mizukage's office right after the completion of reconstruction. She learns how to sort of speak to Sukoso, and in exchange, Kagerou teaches Kumotake how to sort of tend to another person's wound while they're doing missions in the newly built arena's medical tent. In revenge(?) for being forced to treat a patient, Kumotake then drags Kagerou to participate in a play of his that revealed his dark, gloomy past. Kagerou, in a fantastic display of her creative inability (being able to execute another's work did not mean she could create her own work), winged the play into a fantastic boy's love ship between Kumotake and Severin. Thank the gods that, before it got any worse, Kagerou received a notice that she was chosen for a mission. She skedaddled immediately to meet up with Mizukage and Takeda who were sparring in the same arena. Insert mistakes, fighting, drama, anger, and just a lot of bad things. Stuff in general tends to go wrong. Takeda is pissed. Kagerou meets Nozomi in the Mizukage's office, and they're both given a promotion to chuunin. After confirming the mission with the Mizukage and placing Takeda onto her squad for the mission, Kagerou leaves with Takeda for the mission to Takumi. There! That's about where her memories end!

    OH. Right! There was also the letter that Kagerou received from Shadow. Knowing that he's still alive shocked the ever living life out of Kagerou. She gave it to Inka because it contained information she felt the Mizukage should and would like to know. Apparently, she got it back... some time... because Kagerou knows that she has it in her headband, sealed in water proof storage along with her final message in case the worst is to happen.

    And Now...
    SHE LIVES. Okay, no seriously, I don't know what to write anymore. My writing has slowly been deteriorating and now it's blaaaaaaaaargh. Kagerou wakes up, somewhere, with her memory oddly clear about her early life but awfully vague about stuff when she's older. She sort of has a general gist, though, that she grew up into a fine medic. She's pretty sure she had matured into a gentle, calm lady of the woods... or something like that.



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What Was I to My Home...| I was many things, I think. Something different to different people. A friend, a daughter. A subordinate, a leader. A student, and a teacher. A healer, and like any ninja, a killer. Was I like that? In the end, I was, and still am, someone who believes in peace, but to protect what I held dear, I was a ninja.
How Experienced Was I...| I... was once... I can remember that I knew a lot once, but like so many other missing pieces in my life, there is now just a void where that knowledge once was. Will I even be able to move my body? I do not know, so I suppose, I must assume the worst and consider myself no stronger than an E-rank.
How Do I Experience Life...|
• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige}
How Do I View It...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
Soothing Sanctuary: There is just something relaxing about Kagerou, probably because calm is a trademark trait of hers. It's especially noticeable by those who are physically close to her and are receiving her soothing attention. Kagerou can decrease her chakra regeneration by one step to either double or increase by one step the chakra regeneration of one person she is touching, whichever is greater.
Angel's Trumpet: Medical techniques that require touch may instead be turned to sensing Kageoru's performance (usually sight and sound, but any other sense is valid should they happen to be relevant). Techniques modified in this manner can target any part of those affected and hits the moment that the performance is sensed.
Dance Macabre: -1 post when learning bukijutsu and taijutsu associated with stealth, acrobatics, and assassination.
What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→Forest Green
→→Rustles around her like a flurry of leaves and branches. A miniature forest, almost.
→→→Katon
→→→Fuuton
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Performer
→→→• +125 Ryo
→→→• +1 Stage [Bukijutsu or Taijutsu]
→→→• +2 Genjutsu Slots
→→→• +1 Proficiency Point
→→→• +1 Skill Point
Statistics
→→→Agility → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Strength → ☆ (1)
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Chakra → ☆☆☆ (3)



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How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Skills Have I Learned...|
• {Name of Skills} ► {Current Skill Level}


What Am I Proficient In...|
• {Proficiency Tree or Weapon} ► {Current Training Level}


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 00
Genjutsu → 00 // 02
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 01 [To Learn: Akira Style]
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 00 // 11
Proficiency Points → 00 // 03



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What Do I Carry...|

      • Hidden Pockets Clothing (40 ryo)
        • Kirigakure headband, worn as an armband on upper part of her left arm. Hidden pocket that's been loosely sewn closed right behind the metal protector; waterproof storage.
          • The letter from Shadow. Stowed away in the headband's hidden pocket.
          • A short letter written by Kagerou, just in case she died on a mission. There's not much direct information about her memories within it and it's more a short, universal farewell to anyone who may have cared for her. Stowed away in the headband's hidden pocket, which explains why the letter has so little detail. Can't write too much or the letter won't fit inside the tiny hiding spot.
        • Pull-over hoodie w/ a large front pocket. Hidden pockets that can be buttoned closed in the sleeves and at the nape of her neck.
        • Zip-up sweater w/ two front pockets. Hidden pockets that can be buttoned closed in the collar and each side of the chest.
        • Jeans w/ two front pockets and two back pockets. Hidden pockets that can be buttoned closed at the bottom of each leg (though they often go unused because her pants are rolled up and a very thin one at the center of the back at belt level.
        • Sneakers w/ laces. Removable hollow soles and a tiny little hidden pocket, more like a sheath, at the ankle of each shoe.
        • Socks and underwear. Nothing hidden. Kagerou might be from a ninja family, but she's not crazy... she only sometimes tries to hide things in her bra.
      • Backpack (2 ryo)
        • Spyglass (50 ryo)
        • Journal (5 ryo)
        • Pen (.5 ryo)
        • Flint and Steel (.5 ryo)
        • Sewing Needle (1 ryo)
      • Bedroll (6 ryo)
      • Oiled Waterskin (1 ryo)
      • Rope, 20m (5 ryo)
      • Battle Fan. A fan crafted from thin sheets of metal, it's edges are bladed to one side only, allowing it to function as a small, single-edged blade when closed. x1 (10 ryo)
      • Senbon x10 (4 ryo)

What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton


Katon


Fuuton


Eiseijutsu
• Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui [Healing Hands Technique: Minor] C (starting technique)

Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

What Secrets Have I Discovered...|
• {No one starts out with these. These are an in-game mechanic that will be utilized throughout the world, and will encompass items or secret locations discovered.}



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Royal Taorito
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2017 4:05 pm
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Who Am I…| ...I can't remember
How Old Am I…| 16
What Gender Am I...| Male. I think.
When Was I Born...| March 15, xxxx
What Are My People...| German
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'6
And How Heavy...| 140 lbs
What Do I Look Like...| Refer to the image
Where Am I From...| Kumogakure
Did I Belong...| Satetsu

What Am I Like...: I don't know. I'm brave. I think. I don't remember. Everything is a blur if I'm honest, I think I was honest, generally a good person.

What Did I Believe In...: "The strongest warriors are time, patience and myself."

What Am I Good At...:
• General Offensive Combat
• Ninjutsu
• All ranges of combat

What Am I Terrible At...:
• Generally, anything to do with defense
• Particularly, coming up with defensive strategies
• Genjutsu

What Do I Fear...: I don't know what I fear, at least, I don't know what I feared. Now though, I fear myself, my anger and my power.

What Have I Experienced...:
I don’t recall much, if anything. My memories consist of flashes, images really, like pictures, of myself, and a kid with red hair who I have never seen before in my life, at least I don’t think I have. Maybe we’re brothers, or very close friends. I remember a big house in the mountains with two women, the sisters, a mother, and a father, stuck on a wheelchair. He sustained wounds, I remember. Thinking about that made the pit of my stomach bubble with rage. Something happened to him. Something that made me angry, inexplicably angry. Then one day I never saw them again. Neither the sister, nor the parents, nor the boy in red. Perhaps they all died, I wonder if I cried… I’m sure I did, that’s the type of person I am. The type of person I think I am. After leaving the house in the mountains, I found myself in a city. I don’t remember where. I met a lot of people who I don’t remember. Much of it is a blur, the one thing I remember is a set of deep eyes flashing blue with the crash of thunder, the fear in my stomach, afraid of him, yes, but more so afraid at myself, because I knew I could get out, but I was mesmerized by the beauty, and that made me even more afraid. After that, I moved around the world helping people, saving children from kidnappers, slaying the tyrants of the world.

At least, that’s what I think happened.



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What Was I to My Home...} Rogue
How Experienced Was I...| B
How Do I Experience Life...|
Adventurer
Researcher
Bukijutsu
Bukijutsu

How Do I View It...|
Urban Explorer :: These types of Adventurers love to sniff around old ruins of villages, establishments, and other man-made structures that exist across the surface of the new world. As such any roll done to determine if they discover a new, unique location that involves a ruin is increase by one [1] in their favor per point invested.

Decryptor:: During the Fifth Era the last of mankind decided to encrypt documents and include ciphers in all sorts of important books and maps. Only those who have invested themselves into understanding just how to identify, and break, these encryptions have a chance at doing so. As such, the Decryptor Discipline was born. For every one [1] point invested within this Discipline the overall requirement for a document or item's Decryption is decreased by one [1].

Lone Wanderer: Sometimes it isn't the draw of the old that brings forth the Adventurer drive by the discovery of something new on the surface. These Adventurers are known as Lone Wanderers, and when traveling the world above their chances for discovering new and unique land locations is increased by one [1] step in their favor per point invested.

What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|

• Vitality: Physical actions with weapons where Axel has a proficiency have a 5 chakra & stamina refund for every 2 ranks put into that particular proficiency. 5 at E, 10 at C & 15 at A.

• Determined Learner: Having partially renounced his fighting past, Axel gains an extra discipline point that must be spent in a non-combat oriented class [Discipline Point Spent on Urban Explorer].

• TBD at a later time: This PA slot remains open until I can come up with something for it.

What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→• Red
→→• A full shogun armor around the body
→→→• Raiton
→→→• Doton
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Paladin
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆☆☆
→→→Agility → ☆☆☆
→→→Intelligence →
→→→Chakra → ☆☆☆☆

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How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|




What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Brewing :: 5 points
• Foraging :: 5 points


What Am I Proficient In...|
• Single-handed small weapons [D Rank]
• Medium ranged weapons [D Rank]


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 00
Genjutsu → 00 // 00
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 02
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 00 // 10
Proficiency Points → 00 // 04



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What Do I Carry...|

      • Dagger
      • Composite Bow
      • Light Armor [Leather]
      • Normal Clothing
      • Backpack
      • Skinning Knife
      • Rope, twenty [20] meters
      • Oiled Waterskin x2
      • Journal
      • Pencil
      • Pen
      • Scroll Case
      • Arrows x22
      • Whetstone x6





What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:

Wind


Lightning


Satetsu



Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name}


{Your second Type's name}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u



Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Shunkan no Hagane
• Extension :: C - Spiritual




What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






 

Rexnov

Alien Abductee

1,350 Points
  • Unfortunate Abductee 175
  • Hygienic 200
  • Gaian 50

Arrow35

PostPosted: Sat Oct 21, 2017 9:19 pm
Memory is a fickle thing. As perception begins to dawn on you, as your mind wakes from a slumber of what feels like eons, a moment passes in which a question comes to you.

Just who am I?


Odd though the question seems, it strikes you as important. Your mind wanders for a moment in a fog that seems bent on obscuring and distracting you at every turn. In fact as you drift within the emptiness of your mind, as the weight of your body begins to touch your awareness, your thoughts return to that question. Body? What body?

What do I look like like?


The questions come flooding in as you realize one horrible truth: you’re not entirely sure who you are, were, or will be. Strange, as you are sure at one time you did. The panic sets in for what feels an eternity until you bring yourself under control. Focus. Focus is necessary. Focus on one question at a time as a voice from deep within you speaks, asking questions to guide your way, hinting at the world you might find with questions you have no knowledge to answer.


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Who Am I…| Kokuei Nara
How Old Am I…| 15
What Gender Am I...|Male
When Was I Born...| March 17
What Are My People...| Mixed Light Skinned Asian
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'6"
And How Heavy...| 160
What Do I Look Like...| Average Height, Lean, Average Face, Standard Nara (Pineapple) Haircut, Heterochromatic (Right Eye Light Green, Left Darker Green), Thin Smile, Small Diagonal Scar Across Right Cheek, Red Ring on Right Middle Finger (turns to Dust first time it is touched outside of basic wear)
Where Am I From...| KumoGakure
Did I Belong...| Nara Clan

What Am I Like...: Trickster by nature, Love attention, hates giving effort, Snarky, Lazy unless motivated or inspired, Dedicated to his cause, Fiercely loyal (to friends, family, clan, leaders), Can Hyper-focus on goals, Rambler by nature
What Did I Believe In...: Honor those who Honor you, Shame those who Shame you, and Defy those who would destroy you

What Am I Good At...: Extremely Smart, Very Goal oriented, Good at Improvising on the fly, Fascinated by new things, Loves to learn
What Am I Terrible At...: Vain, Arrogant, Easily Engaged/ taunted into conflicts when his family is brought up , Exceedingly lazy, Memory isn't the best at times,
What Do I Fear...: Failing to save someone dear to him again (Such as Family, friend, teammate or Rival), Not being good enough to fill his brother’s shoes, Failure to restore clan (once he learns what has occurred), Failure to Live Up to Clan Image, Failure to live up to his goals and self image,
What Era Am I From...: The Era of Division
What Have I Experienced...: Youngest of two children,, Older brother was perfect ninja in many ways,, Brother was killed in front of Kokuei when Kokuei could have helped, but didn’t think it was needed, His brother’s death is his biggest regret and the source of his biggest fear, Incredibly smart, was admitted to the academy early, like his brother, but after the incident with his brother’s death, he dropped out and didn’t go back till he was 14 out of shame and trauma for his part in his brothers death, Parents are very hands off with raising him, after his brother’s death (they don’t know he was there), Father is a medical Shinobi, Mother is a secretary of sorts, working in the academy office,graduated near bottom of his class at the academy, due to lack of focus and being more interested in the insects flying around the room than the test on his desk, Served under Raikage Kaileer and Raikage Shiro, Was on mission in Konoha to learn Konoha Bukijutsu styles and Earn a copy of Nara Sacred Medical Guide from the Nara Elder when he encountered former Cloud Nin Axel whom he grew to respect in brief travels, Was crystalized by curse outside Konoha in the Nara Woods shortly after first meeting with Nara Elder, Born with a spirit closer to the plain of the kuragari, and is basically a cursed child in a way because of it and had to cover all of his flesh at night or else he became animalistic. But no one knows that that is why he had those moments, just that it happens. Curse Has been lifted by Crystallization (Unclear how).


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What Was I to My Home...} Just a forgotten Genin
How Experienced Was I...| Genin D-Rank. Now E-Rank
How Do I Experience Life...|
• Was Ninjutsu, now N/A
• Was BukiJutsu, now N/A
How Do I View It...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
• Crafting Catch: Increases chances of finding desired materials by 25% when searching, and by 10% when not looking
•The Boy With Cloud Envy: Kokuei recovers chakra and stamina at a 1 step increase any time he is outside doing nothing, but will regain chakra and stamina at a 2 step decrease for 10 posts after the relaxation period.
• Herbology Minor: Because of his Nara heritage, he gains 1 skillpoint in each Herbology Identification, Reconstitution; Gathering Herbology; and Chemistry Poisonmaking skills
What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → Was 360, now 100
→→• Chakra Color: Green
→→• Chakra Materialization: Building Chakra while calm does nothing special, just creates a green generic aura. Building Chakra while Enraged or riled up, his chakra forms an aura that puts pressure on the minds of those around him, creating the illusion of everything around Kokuei growing darker and Creating slight distortions of reality (lack of light resulting in depth perception and similar things). When Someone dear enough to him is in danger or a similar level scenario (A fear or full blown rage/emotional Peak) his aura turns dark and literally absorbs and draws light into it, creating more shadows and, thus increasing his effective ranges/ strength, in addition to Creating slight distortions of reality (lack of light resulting in depth perception and similar things) like the last level, for the length of his emotional peak (until his loved one is out of imminent danger, or he gets brought back to reality from his rage or other emotion) and when it ends, the light that had been drawn in flashes back out
→→→• Wind
→→→• Earth
Stamina Pool → Was 150, now 100
Archetype → Magician
Statistics
→→→Strength →☆☆
→→→Agility →☆☆☆☆
→→→Intelligence →☆☆
→→→Chakra →☆☆☆☆



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How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|



What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Herbology: Identification ► 1
•Herbology: Reconstitution ►1
•Gathering: Herbology ►1
•Chemistry: Poison Making ►1
What Am I Proficient In...|
• Single Handed Light Weapons ► 1 base, 1 in Trench Knives
•Two Weapon Combat (Light & Light) ► 1

What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 02 (had 14/20 (6 Wind, 6 Earth, 6 Maruton, 2 “Bonus”))
Genjutsu → 00 // 00 (Had 00/01)
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 01 (Had 01/02)
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 00 // 11
Proficiency Points → 03 // 03



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What Do I Carry...|

      • Nara Clan Scroll (Disintegrates first time it is interacted with)
      • • Single Handed Light Weapons [Durability 30] Trench Knife x2 (concealed in bag on back)
        • Two Handed Medium Weapons [Durability 30] Woodcutting Axe (worn draped across back for moment)
        • Super Light Armor [Durability 20, D - Ranked, Scale 10] (Mesh netting shirt worn under vest)
        • Flint and Steel (Kept in pack)
        • Backpack (worn)
        • Skinning Knife (Sheathed in pack)
        • Twine, 50 Meters (coiled in pack)
        • Whetstone (Kept in pack) ( can be used 3 times, and each time it restores 2 durability to a weapon)
        • Oiled Waterskin (filled, carried at hip by strap)
        • Journal // Sketchbook (Kept in pack with Pencil)
        • Bedroll (Strapped on top of pack)
        • Fishing Hook (In mess kit for safety)
        • Pen // Pencil (Kept in pack with Journal/Sketchbook)
        • Mess Kit (Wrapped in bedroll)
        • Sewing Needle (Hidden in toe of left shoe)
        • Sheers (In pack)
        • Shinobi Clothing (Basic short sleeved green vest, with tan long pants and blue open shoes)



What Techniques Do I Possess...|

Quote:

Maruton:

Fuuton


Doton


Fuuin
• Fūnyū no Jutsu [Enclosing Technique]/Kaifū no Jutsu [Unsealing Technique]

Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






With each answer to these questions, offered from a nameless voice within you, your self awareness continues to increase.
You are inside of something, something that holds you still, caresses your flesh and keeps you protected from a world gone mad. Mad?


Yes. Mad. The world outside as you knew it is gone. How long cannot be said, but it is new.
Everything has changed, with reality becoming but a story, a place mixed of fantasy and future, a place where man has been absent far too long.
You will face trials, tribulations, in a world without laws, rules, or care for your safety and well being.
How you survive, and whether you do or not, will fall upon your shoulders. I am sorry we will be never able to meet, and
I am even more grieved to inform you that it will be you, and others like you, who will be left to fix the mistakes we made.
Go, find the answers to questions we asked. Find the source of this plague, and end it, lest the past repeat itself.
The world is now what you make of it. Be wise. You won’t remember these words, not entirely, and that is as it should be.
I am sorry.


As the voice spoke into the recesses of your consciousness you realize it is correct,
for already the words fade, the voice behind it, and the tone, until it is little more than impression.
And before you, where darkness once lay, light began to reveal itself. A pressure was building around you,
a strange, siren call that resounded in the deepest recesses of your mind and heart. The last moments of your prior life were just that: moments before.
Or that was, at least, the truth you felt at the moment as a loud crack is heard and you are falling, falling...falling...
 
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 11:40 am
HeadlessKoko
Denied

It's almost perfect, but Lan and I have one problem with one of your PAs:

• Angel's Trumpet: Techniques that require touch may instead be turned to sensing Kageoru's performance (usually sight and sound, but any other sense is valid should they happen to be relevant). Techniques modified in this manner can target any part of those affected and hits the moment that the performance is sensed.

We feel that this needs to be more specific. While I'm fairly certain Kagerou would never do it, she could theoretically hit someone with an elemental jutsu that requires touch without touching them. With something like Katon or Raiton, that could be potentially deadly, as I think both have techniques that destroy bodies with a single touch. I would recommend making it specific to one category, maybe Medical, since that I think was the original intention.


Aegon VI Targaryan
Denied

Ok, first off, you can't leave your history blank. I think we even told you that. If he doesn't remember put it in [parentheses] or something, showing it's not him speaking. Same with personality and fears, while what you have is technically acceptable, it could really use more details. Especially in situations regarding fears or personality traits.

• Vitality: Bukijutsu techniques refund cost equivalent to two ranks lower (E-C refund 5, B refunds 10, A refunds 20 and S refunds 40) if he has the relevant weapon proficiency for said weapon.

This is denied, per Lan. You can do -5 per two ranks in a proficiency [-5 at E, -10 at C, and -15 at A], but that's the limit.

• Determined Learner: Having partially renounced his fighting past, Axel gains an extra discipline point that must be spent in a non-combat oriented class [Discipline Point Spent on Urban Explorer].

Jut to clarify, even though I think you were told already, you can't get that discipline until you get the class associated with that discipline. You could start with one of the bloodline ones if they're available, but that's about it.

And of course you'll have to resubmit whenever you come up with your last one.

Chakra Materialization: You have to have one unless you have no chakra, which doesn't appear to be the case.

Proficiencies: Putting a point in a proficiency does not increase that proficiency's rank, only makes it available for use. The two weapon categories you have would only be E-rank. You can use any weapon in that category at E-rank. From there, you can spend a point on a specific weapon to unlock it to be trained. This does not increase it automatically to D-rank. You gain experience through using the weapon and training with it.

Ryo: You still have 15 ryo if there's anything else you want to buy.

Starting Technique: It hasn't been explained in the actual Buki/Tai threads but it is in the definition for Stances, it states that techniques from Buki/Tai take a one rank decrease to strength and speed outside of the stance(s) associated with that style. Like I said, it hasn't really been explained yet but that is the case.


Arrow35
Denied

Frame: You're just a tad on the high side for weight. I'd recommend 150 rather than 160. Especially if he's lean.

Era: It's missing from the profile. A couple things were added to the profile layout a couple days ago

•The Boy With Cloud Envy: Kokuei recovers chakra and stamina at a 1 step increase any time he is outside doing nothing, but will regain chakra and stamina at a 2 step decrease for 20 posts after the relaxation period.

There's nothing wrong with this one, but 20 posts is just a tad extreme. If you want, it can be maybe 10 posts instead. But that's up to you.

• Herbology Minor: Because of his Nara heritage, he gains skill up to (Not including) first tier in Herbology Identification, Reconstitution; Gathering Herbology; and Chemistry Poisonmaking skills

And in reference to your skills, you cannot start with an additional 16 skill points. That's almost equivalent to what you get from E and D rank combined. We'll update the PA guide, but the cap will be four [4] skill points per PA. So you could have one [1] point in each of those categories. The PA must state how many skill points are acquired by it, as well.

Archetype: It's missing from the profile. A couple things were added to the profile layout a couple days ago. I think you have Magician...?

What I Have Laid Claim To: This refers to discoveries made in the world and should be blank for now. You can make your own section for Passives if you want.

Ryo: You still have 25.5 Ryo if there's anything else you want.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 1:46 pm
HeadlessKoko
Approved.
 
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 1:47 pm
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Who Am I…|
    My name is Shadowseeker Húnyistír, but I’ve always just gone by Shadow.

How Old Am I…|
    I am… sixteen years old, physically. I guess in years, I’m only fourteen.

What Gender Am I...|
    Male.

When Was I Born...|
    April 17, xxxx.

What Are My People...|
    I am Japanese, despite my name.

What Frame Am I...|
    I guess I would be considered Light.

How Tall Am I...|
    Five-and-a-half feet, maybe?

And How Heavy...|
    Last I checked, one hundred and nineteen pounds.

What Do I Look Like...|
    I'm pale skinned with deep circles under ice blue eyes from lack of sleep. Or, that's what it used to be. Now, my right eye is green because of... I... I'm not sure. I can't remember, which is a strange concept that's starting to become too familiar. A mop of wavy black hair falls into my eyes and curls into a thin and long, but young, face. Some of my hair reaches almost shoulder length. I have a fairly light build with broad shoulders, and I seem to be leaning more toward medium as I grow older and stronger. Oh, and I have the ears and tail of a cat, thanks to a curse put on my when I was young. A black mark stretches on each cheek from the fur of my ears to about the center of my eyes. A similar marking wraps around my torso, ending just before the navel, though I don't think anyone has seen that. A cluster of scars decorate my jawline on the right side and my right ear, as well as my right shoulder and side.

    Then of course, I am missing my right arm. Or I was. I'd had a puppet arm built and surgically attached to my chakra network so that I would still be able to use jutsu freely. However, the metal arm there is not the one I remember, and it seems to have fused with my flesh at the attachment point midway up my upper arm. A litter of scars surround the site. It seems I'll still be able to make any necessary adjustments to it, but it can no longer be completely removed.

    As for clothing, I wear whatever I can find, preferably clean but I'm not always that fortunate. I prefer to wear a coat to hide my arm, but it gets in the way in combat. The only other static piece of clothing I have is an old blue jacket of mine that I've made into a sort of sash as padding between my weapon belt and body. Long pants and tall boots are preferable as well, and I frequently wear a hooded scarf or cloak.

Where Am I From...|
    I was originally from the countryside in Mizu no Kuni, but moved to Kirigakure when I was eight.

Did I Belong...|
    I have had the tanto that is a symbol of the Ukyo clan as long as I remember. But...it seems I’ve acquired a Sakkakugan eye, which only means that it’s Jack’s.

What Am I Like...:
    I'm a good person... or at least I try to be.

    [Shadow is a character, to say the least, and often gives off an air of dispassion and apathy, leading others to think he's an unpleasant person, and while this might be the case at first glance, his intentions are always good. In fact, he has no intention of wronging others and will often go to their aid even if he does not want to, not because he has to. Although that does make up a good portion of his claims.]

    I like to craft and create. It helps me focus my scattered thoughts.

    [As a member of the Ukyo who focus on the arts to bring them to life, Shadow has the qualities as a person and an artist to match. With a perfect memory of things he sees and a wild imagination, anything from recreating past events to creating something completely from scratch is easy for him. With this quality, he is also highly observant without even realizing it. Though most see him as cold and aloof, those that get to know him can have a glance at the enthusiastic child within, and he takes pride in letting people see his creations.]

    I'm not very good at making friends. Every time someone tries, I can't help but push them away.

    [Shadow’s greatest downfall is his distance from reality, and he will go out of his way to detach himself from others. He is quite happy in his own imagined world and will often daydream, easily being absorbed in his ideas. Likewise, he is not very sensitive to others. In fact, he is oblivious to them more often than not, and is passive in the face of tragedy. This gives people the impression that he has no ambition or care for anything. He does not want to be with others and lacks the social skills required to be with them.

    This does not mean he is a hopeless case. He just requires someone willing to take the time to get to know him and earn his trust.]

    I have a lot to say but never seem to have words to say it.

    [Shadow’s mutism makes it no easier to get close to him. It is not entirely clear why he stopped talking, but it started well before his family died. Those that knew him assumed it has something to do with his inability to sleep. His mustism has nothing to do with being shy. In fact, he is very confident, almost too confident, and is perfectly able to understand and speak. He is just unwilling to speak to any but a few specific people.

    As he reached his mid-teens he began to grow out of his mutism as he was forced to deal with others, and even began fully expressing his thoughts, regardless of how blunt they were. But now it seems he's reverted and lost his ability to speak altogether for reasons he himself doesn't even know.]

    I'm still awake when the rest of the world isn't. No matter how hard I try, I can't seem to sleep.

    [Just as insomnia is defined, Shadow has always had an inability to sleep uninterrupted. Sometimes he simply cannot sleep. Because of this, he is rarely ever fully rested and always tired, shown by the seemingly permanent dark circles around his eyes that look like bruising. He also has fairly poor health as compared with others his age, and he is small for his age as well, though as he grows older and stronger, he's proving that he'll end up fairly tall. It is uncertain what exactly is causing the insomnia, whether it is fear, stress, or anxiety. He thought, for a while, it was the Rokubi's fault, but his ability to sleep has not improved even after being on good terms with the bijuu, or after the bijuu was gone.

    It also leads to him napping several times during the day if there is time to try to make up for the lost sleep.

    After every sleep post, a 4-sided die is rolled to determine how much sleep he got:
    • 1 – 100% chakra/stamina restored (meaning 100% of the 25% restored)
    • 2 – 50% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 50% of the 25% restored)
    • 3 – 25% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 25% of the 25% restored)
    • 4 – 0% of chakra/stamina restored (meaning 0% of the 25% restored)]

    I've gone through a lot, and it feels like no one understands. It's made me jaded.

    [Although the first several years of his life were peaceful, Shadow has had nearly nothing but disaster after anther happen since he was eight. His apathy comes from exactly that. He has built up layer after layer of defenses around himself that his shell is nearly impossible to break anymore, except for those few that have managed to make their way through who he presumes are dead. What's more is that he feels like he himself is dividing in two, and wages war internally. He must first survive that battle before he can open up again. Until then, he will be selfish in that he believes he has had life off worse than others, and that they could never understand what he has been through.]

What Did I Believe In...:
    I believe that the titles of friend and family should not be given out lightly.

What Am I Good At...:
    Perfect memory | I am known for my crystal clear memory and my ability to recreate almost anything I have seen on paper. I can remember everything from before the curse in fine detail.
    Enhanced senses | Thanks to the seal used on me when I was younger to change my appearance, my senses have been enhanced, especially hearing and smell.
    Archery | I was raised hunting with my adoptive father and know how to use a bow well.
    Resourceful | Maybe that's not quite the right word, but I have always been good at setting up traps and using my surroundings to my advantage.
    Trustworthy | You can guarantee that I'll keep my word, and that I'll see a mission through to completion. Even if it might mean my life.

What Am I Terrible At...:
    Apathy | I don't make friends easily. Everything I have gone through has left me apathetic and jaded towards others.
    Insomniac | I have never had an easy time sleeping, and it plagues me. Because of it, my immune system is a little frail and I get sick rather easily.
    Mutism | I am mentally unable to communicate verbally with others, which hinders my interactions with them. For a while I was growing out of it, but after all that's happened I seem to have reverted.
    Melee Combat | Although my strength is improving as I grow older, I still do not have much practice in close range combat, compared to my other skills.
    Distrusting | If you want something done do it yourself. I'm tired of trying to get people to listen to reason, and I'm tired of expecting people to do the right thing.

What Do I Fear...:
    Bugs | It's not really a fear, but a severe hatred for insects, arachnids, and any other creepy crawlies thanks to Jack. It wouldn't stop me from entering a place full of them if I had to, but I'd probably burn the place on the way through.
    Darkness/Shadows | Despite it being my namesake I don't trust unnatural darkness of any sort, and no one should. You never know what's lurking within. Also thanks to Jack.
    Losing my Memory | I have a perfect memory, and after the events of Kirigakure that caused me to lose the entirety of my past, I am legitimately afraid it'll happen again. I already don't remember anything that happened after leaving Kirigakure for the last time. And even now, my mind seems to be playing tricks on me. As you guessed, that's also Jack's fault.
    Being a Burden | I hate asking for help. I hate the concept of letting others help me. I should be strong enough to do everything that needs to be done myself.
    Plaguebearer | He's the first life I ever took when I was only ten years old. And he has haunted me since then. I know he is linked to the man who killed my parents in some way, but I never had the chance to find out what it was. He has to be gone for good after this long... right?

What Era Am I From....:
    I was born in the Era of Madness, and lived the remainder of my past life in the Era of Division, before... before... I don't remember.

What Have I Experienced...:
    Before Kirigakure
    My birth has always been unknown to me, even to my adoptive parents, and no one has bothered to tell me about it--not that I have had that much interest until more recently. Or I guess it hasn’t been so… recently. I know I was born on April seventeenth somewhere in Mizu no Kuni, and when I was old enough to understand, I was told the village I was from was destroyed by the Rokubi, the six-tailed demon. My birth mother brought me to another family, a family of farmers who grew and caught their own food, to keep me safe. I do not know what happened to my birth parents, but they left with me an Ukiyo Mizo, the short blade of the Ukyo Clan.

    I started drawing almost as soon as I could hold a pencil, and while the drawings were crude, they were amazingly accurate in details a boy of three should not have noticed, let alone remembered. I became focused on my drawings, obsessed with them, and I stopped paying attention to reality. I drew scenes from books I read or news I heard, drew horrific and beautiful creatures alike. By the time I was five, not an inch of wall space could be seen in my room, and my art had improved to look as though someone twice my age had drawn it.

    Thanks to my overactive imagination and the nightmares that haunted my dreams, I have never been able to sleep well, and it has always been obvious through my health. I’ve always been somewhat sickly because of it.

    On top of the insomnia, my parents never realized I was mute until they took me into the city to meet relatives of theirs. I would not say a word to them. In fact, it seemed more like I ignored their presence. Even children of my age I would not speak to, and I was ridiculed for it by child and adult alike.

    Needless to say, I did not go to the city with them again.

    Nothing spectacular happened for the next couple of years. Since my family grew and caught their own food, I was taught how to use a bow, something that distracted me from my drawings for a while. The utter calm I was known for helped me learn to hit in or near the center of a target seven times out of ten, and practice on moving animals improved this further.

    My peaceful life turned upside down when I was eight.


        "A man came to our house looking for a place to stay for the night. Mother and Father agreed to let him stay when he paid them, but something felt strange about him. There was something dark... frightening. I knew he was watching me.

        "But nothing happened, not that evening, or that night, or even when he left the next morning.

        "It wasn't until a month later, when he showed up again, that everything changed. He wasn't there to stay the night. He shoved Father out of the way, and Mother, too, when she got in the way. He was after me, I knew that.

        "Everything that happened after is a blur. He grabbed me, screaming, "Give it to me, or else". All I could do was cry. I didn't understand,

        "Then I watched him stab Mother. I saw her fall to the floor, her eyes wide and staring at me, but I knew she was dead. Father came at the man with an axe, but the man moved faster than I thought was possible, and suddenly Father was dead, too.

        "The man grabbed me again, but seeing my tears only made him angrier. He used something, a scroll, I think, and there was a flash of light and suddenly the world seemed overwhelming to my senses. I heard him say that no one would listen to me now. I don't remember anything after."


    When I next woke, hoping it was a dream, I found my parents just as I had seen them before. Afraid that the man would still be there, I ran. I knew the road led to other people, where I might find help. However, the moment people saw me, I was chased away, being called a demon. Confused, afraid, and alone, I was forced to wander just outside of the village.

    Later I realized why they were afraid of me. I had a long, thin tail, like a cat, and ears like one too.

    The next couple of months were the hardest time of my life. I knew how to hunt, but had no supplies for much of anything else, and I was too afraid to go home. Frequently, I was forced back into the village to acquire things I needed, and every time I was chased away again. I was beaten several times, but I always managed to get away.

    One particular time was especially bad, and I may have been killed if someone hadn't stepped in. The boy hadn't really said anything, but looked at them, said some gibberish, and they ran off. The boy helped me back to my feet and led me back to his house, which was apparently outside the village.

    Jack Harren Snipe quickly became the only one I knew I could trust, and was the first one outside my family I would speak to, though that took time as well. About a year or so later, Jack suggested that I join the academy in Kirigakure, telling me I had potential and that it would prove to others my 'curse' was a boon, not a weakness.

    Jack then disappeared.

    Adjusting to 'Normal' Life
    Academy years, attempted to stab someone, eventually graduated, received headband from Jack.

    The Plaguebearer
    Tracked down thieves who led to Plaguebearer attack; Jack's genjutsu made him see parents; killed Plaguebearer & became Chuunin; one year time skip.

    The Bloody Mist
    Fought Red's character (look up name), after defeating, saved from drowning; promoted to jounin & they go to Takumi to get puppets

    Attack on Kumogakure
    Traveled to Kumogakure after Takumi to aid in UHV attack & Nibi was attacking; Myurai flooded area & Shadow saved himself & Jack with new puppet; told to retreat soon after; went on mission to Kumo a while after & attacked by small group of UHV; genin was poisoned; wiped out UHV attacks

    Prison Break
    Fought Hashgroth; genin who was poisoned was killed; Thenal'fan ate Shadow's arm & cauterized it; ended up helping Shadow defeat Hashgroth and sealing him away; passed out; woke up to Jack leaving & told him to just go; Small UHV attack on village; Sypher dropped ship on tower & Shadow helped save survivors; acquired UHV shield.

    Time Loop
    Time loop

    The Seal is Weakening
    New arm acquired; given another squad to train but can hardly focus on them; unable to sleep more frequently; sent to deliver message to Suna; detoured & almost killed by Saiken as it tries to break free; manages to take control of the bijuu

    What to Do About the UHV
    Hurries back to Kiri & panics to Sypher about bijuu; Sypher acts like he already knows and brushes off concern; leaving, confronts Jack & punches him; meeting regarding Suna proposal gets nowhere; confronts Jack again & expresses anger

    Sero Disaster
    Sent on missions with Jack to get help from Konoha; find it in disarray and find no help; begin Sero disaster, which ends with Shadow 'at fault' for the village flooding

    Nightmare
    New village built; out of lack of sleep, Jack triggers village's defenses and all shinobi are caught in crossfire; must collect all artifact & take them to the heart of the island; lost memory

    A New & Strange World
    No memory; The Shippening

    ???



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __Ⱥ я Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ…?]
What Was I to My Home...|
    To Kirigakure, I was a Jounin, and an Oinin.

How Experienced Was I...|
    I was considered B-rank.

How Do I Experience Life...|
    Ninjutsu
    Puppeteer
    • --
    • --

How Do I View It...|







What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
    Natural Resilience | My curse provides a bonus resilience to venomous creatures, such as snakes and spiders, since cats are naturally more resistant than humans to such poisons. Because of this, it takes an extra dose of venom from animals and creatures before the poison takes effect. This does however mean I am more sensitive to poisons that affect animals, such a variety of plants.
    Dramatic Target | Due to the insane amount of events that seem to just follow me around, I have gained a sort-of "sixth sense" to when things are about to "go down". Thus, in any situation that I am aware of something incoming, I have an increase to reaction speed, as well as a 10% reduction to any costs used to avoid it.
    Practiced Signs | Thanks to losing one of my arms, I've invested time into learning to use techniques one-handed. I can now use hand seals with only one hand if I feel the need to. Or, you know, in case my arm breaks again.

What Are My Limitations...|
    Chakra Pool →
      1085 100

      • Chakra Color| Gold
      • Chakra Materialization| A wisp of an aura around him flickering like tongues of golden flames.
      • Chakra Elements |
        Suiton
        Doton

    Stamina Pool →
      435 100

    Statistics
      • Archetype | Jack-of-all-trades
        → +125 Starting Ryo
        → +1 Stage [Bukijutsu or Taijutsu]
        → +2 Slots [Ninjutsu or Genjutsu]
        → +1 Proficiency Point
        → +1 Skill Point

      Strength → ☆☆☆
      Agility → ☆☆☆
      Intelligence → ☆☆☆
      Chakra → ☆☆☆


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ__đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
How Much Ryo Do I Have...|
    00, 000 Ryo

How Much Experience Do I Have...|
    00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|



What Skills Have I Learned...|
    • Drawing ► 3
    • Painting ► 2
    • Poisonmaking ► 2
    • Bombmaking ► 2
    • Bakery ► 2
    • Field Triage ► 1
    • Herbology - Identification ► 2
    • Herbologist ► 1

What Am I Proficient In...|
    • Medium Ranged Weapon :: 1
      • Composite Bows ► 1 :: E

    • Single Handed Light Weapons :: 1

What Can I Do...|
    Ninjutsu → 00 // 02
    Genjutsu → 00 // 00
    Kuchiyose → 00 // 00
    Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 01
    Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
    Skill Points → 15 // 15
    Proficiency Points → 03 // 03


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __đ Φ__Ӌ Φ ʋ__ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
What Do I Carry...|

    • Ukyo Mizo [Tanto; Durability: 30]
    • Composite Bow [Durability: 30]
    • Arrows [8; Durability 10]
    • Normal Clothing
    • Spyglass
    • Medium Satchel
    • Journal
    • Pen
    • Skinning Knife
    • Flint and Steel
    • Twine, 50 Meters
    • Whetstone
    • Oiled Waterskin
    • Bedroll
    • Fishing Hook

What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

    • Kugutsu no Jutsu [Puppetry Technique] - E

Maruton


Suiton


Doton


Ukyo Clan


Sakkakugan


Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
Enchantment


Instance

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
    • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
    • {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|



 

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Who Am I…| Sonyo Kuno Rue
How Old Am I…| 16, though I remember once being over 20 years old
What Gender Am I...| Female
When Was I Born...| December 15th, xxxx
What Are My People...| Japanese / French
What Frame Am I...| Light
How Tall Am I...| 5'3"
And How Heavy...| 125 lbs
User ImageWhat Do I Look Like...|
    o
    I was always told I looked like my mother but I never really saw it. I think I look much more like my dad, with my dark hair and his same hazel brown eyes. I was once tall and intimidating but I am now fairly small and skinny though I do have some musculature to me.

    Sonyo has predominantly Asian features, with bits of her European decent mixed in. Standing at a fairly short five feet and three inches, with her light but slightly muscled frame, Sonyo is quite small and unassuming in stature. It doesn't help that Sonyo lacks in her sillouette, with barely any curvature in her body. The young female has quite the sleek form, despite that, with dancer's legs and toned arms. Sonyo has long slender fingers and hands, and gentle facial features. She's often remarked as adorable, with somewhat doe eyes and long lashes, often holding an innocent-type look when her face is neutral.

Where Am I From...| Yukigakure once long ago, then Otogakure, then Sunagakure. I thought Suna would be my home at last, but I found out that I have no true home
Did I Belong...| The icy winds of the Yuki clan ( Hyouton ) runs through my veins.

What Am I Like...:
    x
    I am a broken house, who's been gutted and left with it's insides on the outside to rot away. I once wore my heart on my sleeve for the world to see and the world made me pay for it. I still find it hard to sleep and even though he's missing now, the anxiety and self doubt and anger that the shukaku brought still remains with me.

    Sonyo was once calm and gentle, but after a life of being a seasoned ninja, Sonyo became hardened and sarcastic. Becoming a jinchuriki didn't help that either, and being the host of the most monstrous one-- Shukaku --only made it worse. Sonyo has somehow remained a majority of her kindness and generosity despite all that has happened to her, but she is more cautious now of who she shows this side to. Most things in her life are approached with a certain amount of bitterness and cynicism, then drowned in sarcasm to cover her lack of self-confidence and general deep rooted anxiety and depression. Sonyo has an intense insomnia problem, both stemming from once being a jinchuriki and also a pre-existing problem with not sleeping. Sonyo is almost always in motion, fiddling or doing something, to keep her mind busy in an attempt to deal with said crippling anxiety. Now separated from the only things in her life that once made it worthwhile, Sonyo has returned to her withdrawn and frosty demeanor.

What Did I Believe In...: Once the soft and powdery snow, I am now the roaring blizzard-- if you do not fight back against life, it will shank you and then promptly kick you and laugh at you while you're down.

What Am I Good At...:
tab -----> Medical skills and knowledge
tab -----> Above average botany knowledge
tab -----> Easily emotionally displaced from situations
tab -----> Strong willed
tab -----> Resourceful
What Am I Terrible At...:
tab -----> Seems to have lost a good majority of her Eiseijutsu knowledge other than her customs
tab -----> Emotionally distant, making it hard to connect and work with others
tab -----> Crippling depression and anxiety
tab -----> A bad disposition for hermitry
tab -----> Often doubts herself and her capabilities
What Do I Fear...:
tab -----> Gaining people worth caring for again, the possible loss of said people could cripple her
tab -----> Never regaining the knowledge she lost
tab -----> Becoming useless/ a failure as a medical professional
What Era Am I From...: I was born in the Era of Madness, then grew up during the Era of Division before disappearing close to the end of the same Era
What Have I Experienced...:
    x
    My childhood was not bad, but not good either. My mother was a harsh woman and my father a coward. During my younger years I came to care for a great deal of people, people who I lost or left me. I lived in Yukigakure for some time, along with most of my family like my cousin Hakanai. Yukigakure was quickly destroyed when I was still young though, and like most Yukigakure refugees my family fled to Otogakure where we were told we'd be "safe". I soon found out that Otogakure was just as bad, as after trying to help my fellow shinobi I was harrassed and threatened by the UHV. I left soon after with a friend of mine, and was brought to Sunagakure. Suna is... was my home, and I thought it would always be so. I fell in love, got married, adopted children-- I did good things, don't let anyone ever tell you otherwise. I tried. But people naturally fear that which they don't understand, so they came to fear me too. I lost everything. And then I tried to fix it and... I don't really remember? I was thrown through some sort of time-space ninjutsu and ended up here... where-ever here is..

    For most of Sonyo's young childhood ( from birth to age 8 ), she lived in the frozen world of Yukigakure; a frozen wasteland of a place. Born in to a family full of strict people, Sonyo was trained from a very young age the beauties of dance and fan usage; along with other things a woman should know how to do such a sewing and textile work. She was raised as a noble in a peasant's life, leading to a lot of conflict as to what she should be like, as she didn't like the strict ruling of her parents. The young female then, at the age of eight, immigrated with her parents to Otogakure; a land much much different than what she was used to. Snow banks and ice were replaced with swamps and mud, and it took her a long time to get used to the vastly contrasting surroundings. Of course, Sonyo entered the academy as soon as her parents arrived in the new village, as that was the reason they had moved in the first place; so that she could "become a strong and respectable ninja" instead of the failure her parents saw her as.

    Sonyo did much better at fighting than at the smaller tasks her parents had her work on since she could remember; she was better at molding ice than she was at sewing clothes, and she was better at kicking than she ever was at dancing. Of course, however, her parents continued to push on her the small tasks she had been doing previously. The young child began becoming over stressed and started to become bitter towards her parents and the world she lived in. However, when Sonyo turned 13, she met a girl who soon became one of her closest friends. The girl's name was Kinu, and she was the only person Sonyo knew to date that had the braveness to push through the blizzard that surrounded her heart. Kinu taught Sonyo patience and kindness; she taught Sonyo how to deal with anger and frustration and pain. However, later on that year, Kinu disappeared suddenly. She was never found, nor did there seem to be any rush to find the girl. It took a lot of strength, but Sonyo let it go, knowing full well that's what Kinu would have wanted her to do.

    A few years later, Sonyo graduated from the academy and became an official ninja of the hidden sound village. She vowed to herself that she would work her hardest, for both her parents, and her best friend who couldn't work beside her.

    Sonyo trained hard in preperation for her first real mission that would be given to her. She was instructed by Sgt. Justice Skelly to find the Village's Master Seamstress, who had gone missing. Early on, Sonyo was crippled by the idea that she might be too late and the female might already be dead. The female shinobi followed the trail given in the ransom note, only to happen upon the old abandoned building in the village; the only of its kind. It was here that Sonyo found not only a breathing Lady Yura, but also an operation going on under the village, invisible to those who never happened under the city. Sonyo knew her life would never be the same knowing this; her innocence to the village's inter-workings and what was going on was now shattered.. and she had a piece of knowledge that could get her killed.

    After that things only got worse for Sonyo, she had a hard time going out when suspicions began to rise about what she did that day. Someone saw her, that's for sure. Soon UHV soldiers began pestering her, asking her questions. She was absolutely terrified that she would die... so she did the only thing she could do. She got her parents out of the city and then left on foot a few weeks later, alongside her best friend Elizabeth. The two parted ways at the suna gates after having a brief confrontation with a Village ANBU. Sonyo was left to live in the village alone while Elizabeth became a rogue. The trip to Sunagakure was relatively easy, that is in till they actually arrived at the village. Masahiro Hatake saw Elizabeth in the distance, taking measures to protect Sonyo should she be attacked, and it backfired. Assuming that the two were somehow connected to the UHV, Masahiro took defensive actions only to find out that one of the young females was seeking asylum while the other was only worried about her friend. After Masahiro promised to take Sonyo to the Kazekage, Elizabeth set off to begin her life as a rouge.

    Sonyo then met Ayame, who appointed Nariomi Kaguya as her guide and mentor in till her probationary period was finished. Nari carefully guided and helped Sonyo to adjust to life in Sunagakure, even going so far as to allow the female to stay with him in his home as she was homeless upon arriving. The two spent time together and the young female couldn't stop from falling in love with him. However, after shortly confessing their feelings for eachother, Nari disappeared as he was sent of to some outerlying land for a mission. To try her best to keep her mind off the disappearance of the person she loved, Sonyo filled her days with missions and training. During this training, Sonyo met many more people, including her new sensei Theodin and the Community-Minded Woman, Bastet. After a mission to Takumi to get supplies for the mysterious woman's workshop, Sonyo became an apprentice under the woman for various artist pursuits. It was soon after this that Nari finally returned, and Soyno felt herself finally be at peace.

    That peace did not last long, as the seven-tailed beast Chomei was released upon Sunagakure. Sonyo and Nari split away from Bast to go and try to save as many people as possible. However, they were only able to evacuate the residential district before Sonyo was stabbed in the back by a young girl who she was treating. Upon hearing her injured scream, Nari too stopped evacuating citizens to rush Sonyo to the hospital. Here she was treated by another one of the Medical Shinobi of the village, Doc Nara. Despite his best efforts, Sonyo fell prey to the poison that had coated the knife that stabbed her and exploded in to a rampage. She not only destroyed a good part of the bunker but also injured a few people who were currently in the hospital before the doctors could evacuate. After a brief fight with Doc and a new arrival Manny Hyuuga, a woman by the name of Kaori stopped the attack and finally broke the trance that Sonyo had found herself in. The young female didn't take her actions well, and fell in to a small pit of depression and disappointment.

    Due to the mass of death to the village, the Kazekage threw a party meant for everyone. There was an announcement: relaxation and jolly-making were mandatory. Several of the villagers became drunk out of their mind, and fun was had all around. It was durring this party that Nari proposed to Sonyo, and she said yes. After all she had done for the village during the Choumei attack and everything she did for the village afterwards, Sonyo was also granted her Chuunin rank and thus the young woman left the village for the first time in search for her parents.

    Sonyo arrived to her destination, only to find her parents dead-- killed off by the UHV in a raid against the village they were finding sanctuary in. Sonyo made her way back to Sunagakure, enraged. She was in limbo for the following weeks, disgusted with her own weakness and her inability to save her parents. A tourney for the gennin was held, and so Sonyo ( who was one of the only high ranking shinobi in Sunagakure at the time ) attended in hopes of finally successfully helping someone. Towards the end of the Tourney, the previous host of the Shukaku which found residence in Suna lost control of his bijuu. The resulting fight found Sonyo a brand new Jinchuriki, her mental state battling with this monster that was the complete opposite of her. The Hokage, which had arrived to assist, married her and Nariomi on the spot. Despite battling shukaku, the couple of years that followed were happy years for Sonyo. She adopted two of the younger gennin of the village who were orphaned or worse, made a life with Nari, and became a successful medical professional.

    Then came the dark times, when Sonyo's control of the Ichibi began to crumble. Several times Sonyo was nearly swallowed by rage-- and the beast within her-- only her family bringing her back from the brink. The village civilians began to trust her less, she lost her job at the Sunagakure hospital after destroying it for a third time and endangering lives, and Sonyo began to find her happy dream slipping. The memories past this point are a blur, a dark and depressing blur, that Sonyo can't bring in to focus no matter what she does. She's not even sure she wants to.

    How she got to this point in time is... shaky at best. Something about a mission gone bad and a time-space ninjutsu misfiring. This incident regression Sonyo's age physically, ripped the Shukaku from her being without killing her somehow, and then tossed her in to time and space. She remembers arriving in a land that she wasn't familiar with, then getting really sick, before The Sleep took her over.




_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __Ⱥ я Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ…?]
What Was I to My Home...} In Sunagakure, I grew to become a Jounin who also became a Medical Onin
How Experienced Was I...| I was considered an S-rank Equivalent
How Do I Experience Life...|
Physician
Tracker


How Do I View It...|



What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
• Doraihyouton: Something special lies dormant in Sonyo, allowing her to instead make Dry Ice ( solid carbon dioxide ) instead of water ice for any Hyouton technique, causing all techniques to act one rank higher. Whether the technique uses water ice or dry ice must be decided before the move is used and cannot be changed.
• Green Thumb: Sonyo has always had a more-than-average amount of Botany knowledge due to the training her mother gave her as a child, giving her an additional 4 points ONLY towards the Herbology [ Identification ] skill
• Assailant: When using any dagger-type weapons, Sonyo's strength raises by one [1]
What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→• Multicolored, flashing from bright pastel colors to a dark inverted spectrum with her heartbeat
→→• Floats in an aura around her like an aurora borealis that flows with her heartbeat. If one looks deeply enough to to the aurora they'll see snow gently falling
→→→• Suiton
→→→• Fuuton
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Preformer
- +1 Stage [Bukijutsu or Taijutsu]
- +2 Genjutsu Slots
- +1 Proficiency Point
- +1 Skill Point
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆
→→→Agility → ☆☆☆☆
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆☆
→→→Chakra → ☆☆


_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ__đ Φ ɳ Ә…]
How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|



What Skills Have I Learned...|
• Herbology [ Identification ] -- Tier Zero [ +4 ]
• Artistic [ Drawing ] - Tier Zero [ +1 ]
• Chemistry [ Potionmaking ] - Tier Zero [ +4 ]
• Chemistry [ Poisonmaking ] - Tier Zero [ +4 ]
• General [ Field Triage ] - Tier Zero [ +1 ]
• Gathering [ Foraging ] - Tier Zero [ +1 ]
What Am I Proficient In...|
• One Handed Light Weapons > Daggers
• Two Weapon Combat > Light & Light
What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 00
Genjutsu → 00 // 00
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 01
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 11 // 11 [ + 4 only for Herbology ]
Proficiency Points → 03 // 03



_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț __đ Φ__Ӌ Φ ʋ__ђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…]
What Do I Carry...|

      • Unusual Dagger x2
      • Super Light Armor x1 [ Under armor ]
      • Normal Clothing
        • One Traditional Japanese Haori w/ partial detatched sleeves
        • One Traditional Japanese Hakama skirt w/ two pockets
        • One Traditional Japanese cloth belt
        • One Pair of sandals
        • Gold Hairpin w/ Hawk Feather

      • Backpack
        • Flint & Steel x5
        • Whetstone x5
        • Pencil x4
        • Pen x2
        • Cooking Pot x1
        • Camp Hammer x1
        • Mess Kit x1

      • One Person Tent x1
      • Blanket x1
      • Bedroll x1
      • Oiled Waterskin x1

What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:

Suiton


Fuuton


Eiseijutsu
• Runge Suibou [Lung Collapse]

Bloodline


Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u





Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u



Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u





What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:02 pm
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Denied.

Everything is fine, except for the PAs, which I'll explain each below.

• Doraihyouton: Something special lies dormant in Sonyo, allowing her to instead make Dry Ice ( solid carbon dioxide ) instead of water ice for any Hyouton technique. Whether the technique uses water ice or dry ice must be decided before the move is used and cannot be changed.

This one is actually fine. There's no issues with it as it's just a modification of the bloodline. The only thing is that you'll have to explain how it changes each technique that you find, or provide some sort of list of effects of the Dry Ice, otherwise it doesn't do anything different than normal Hyouton ice.

• Assailant: When using any dagger-type weapons, Sonyo's strength raises by one [1] per body rank, but only when the daggers are in her hands

One per body/experience rank is too much. You could do, at most, +1 to strength of attacks without giving up something else. Styles will give a lot of bonuses just for being in their stances, so there'll be other opportunities for increases.

• Defensive Bonus: The ice created by the Hyouton is denser than most, granting a D - ranked Defense to all ice techniques with a Durability three [3]. Each Discipline Point granted beyond the first increases the Durability by three [3], and every third [3] point invested increases the Defense rank by one [1] letter. [ BL ]

Um... This is one of the Disciplines from Hyouton. You only get 3 Personal Attributes, and a Discipline Point [DP] must be expended to get this ability. Without using a PA to get an extra DP, you don't get DP until you hit D-rank, at which point you get 1 DP along with your class. You're welcome to choose one of the bloodline Disciplines rather than a class Discipline at D rank.
 
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:18 pm
Royal Taorito
I Tortured Sleep I
Denied.

Everything is fine, except for the PAs, which I'll explain each below.

• Doraihyouton: Something special lies dormant in Sonyo, allowing her to instead make Dry Ice ( solid carbon dioxide ) instead of water ice for any Hyouton technique. Whether the technique uses water ice or dry ice must be decided before the move is used and cannot be changed.

This one is actually fine. There's no issues with it as it's just a modification of the bloodline. The only thing is that you'll have to explain how it changes each technique that you find, or provide some sort of list of effects of the Dry Ice, otherwise it doesn't do anything different than normal Hyouton ice.

• Assailant: When using any dagger-type weapons, Sonyo's strength raises by one [1] per body rank, but only when the daggers are in her hands

One per body/experience rank is too much. You could do, at most, +1 to strength of attacks without giving up something else. Styles will give a lot of bonuses just for being in their stances, so there'll be other opportunities for increases.

• Defensive Bonus: The ice created by the Hyouton is denser than most, granting a D - ranked Defense to all ice techniques with a Durability three [3]. Each Discipline Point granted beyond the first increases the Durability by three [3], and every third [3] point invested increases the Defense rank by one [1] letter. [ BL ]

Um... This is one of the Disciplines from Hyouton. You only get 3 Personal Attributes, and a Discipline Point [DP] must be expended to get this ability. Without using a PA to get an extra DP, you don't get DP until you hit D-rank, at which point you get 1 DP along with your class. You're welcome to choose one of the bloodline Disciplines rather than a class Discipline at D rank.

Fix'd Assailant, as for Defensive bonus-- I had originally placed it there because I wasn't exactly sure where to put it. I also didn't realize about the whole DP thing, dunno where I missed that from. I'm pretty sure I've had Lan explain it to me like twice. Went ahead and removed it and made changes to Dorahyouton.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:39 pm
I Tortured Sleep I
Approved.
 
PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 8:00 pm
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_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Φ__Ⱥ я Ә__Ӌ Φ ʋ...]
Who Am I…| Hakanai Yuki
How Old Am I…| I was 39... but not anymore... Maybe a teenager...? Oh Gods. I do not want to go through this hormonal bull-beeeeeep- again.
What Gender Am I...| Female
When Was I Born...| January 22nd
What Are My People...| From some island in Caribbean..
What Frame Am I...| Medium
How Tall Am I...| 5'6"
And How Heavy...| 157lbs
What Do I Look Like...| Exactly in image
Where Am I From...| Kumogakure
Did I Belong...| Hyouton

What Am I Like...: Throughout the years, I like to think that I control my temper better. I was still stubborn and headstrong but I was more open minded and I listened. When I met my wife and her sons, I gained more patience and insight thanks to my family. I also gained a motherly like personality, I dotted and cared for others in Kumogakure and those that are allied with it. My temper had also decreased a lot less as well.
What Did I Believe In...: "Some flowers bloom late, but when they do, they are most wise and beautiful of them all."

What Am I Good At...:
Well. I was born deaf so reading body languages came easy for me. I usually watch for pupil dilations, the movement of the feet, and so on forth to try to understand what the other person was feeling. My other strength was that I was good at close combat as long it did not involve weapons. This helped me work my way up to being an Oinin. As well developing high pain tolerance. After all, I can't spill secrets too easily if I get caught.
What Am I Terrible At...:
Despite being good with close combat, weapons can be difficult for me to handle or face with. Genjutsu are a complete pain. I had to work for years in mental hospital and they can break down my barrier quickly. Due to my high pain tolerance, sometimes I don't notice the true severity of my wounds until I either pass out, cannot move, or it's too late.
What Do I Fear...:
I faced most of my fears already. One thing that does always haunt me in my dreams was the idea of being buried alive. To ... not be able to escape, to be caged to only die... even just thinking about it, the heart is pounding so hard. I can almost hear it. My other fear would be losing a limb... I don't think I could come back from that. I like to fight. I like to run. I love to climb. To lose.. something that aids in that, would make me feel pitied and worthless. My final fear, would be returning who I used to be. I was full of anger. I harmed so many allies and so many civilians. I cannot bear to go back to that shell of body full of anger and rage.
What Era Am I From...: Era of Attention
What Have I Experienced...: So much. I was born and slightly raised in Yukigakure before my family and I had left onto a family vacation and only return to find it in ruins. My family had made the decision to sign up to Kumogakure and gave their allegiance to them since then. They weren't the only one, I was as well. My life had rapidly changed since then. When I became a genin, I made some.. decisions that I still regret to this day but I was proud of them too, I had finally learned how destructive and dangerous my personality was. This helped me bond with Shukenja much closer as well, Kaileer who was the Raikage for Kumogakure for quite some time. Then he left. I stayed in Kumogakue and did the best I can. Over time, I never saw him again but I met this amazing woman, a civilian who recently went through a divorce. I helped her and we happened to have feelings for each other. We got married and I took her children like they were my own. Shukenja... He was thrilled. He had been rough few times but he learned how to be amazing around them. I was so proud. He and I fought for Kumogakure for long time. When I hit 35, the old age was starting to get to him and my heart drop. I was prepared but I wasn't either. Slowly, I had to do missions on my own, some was too intense for him to be able to handle. Then finally when I was 39, he had went to sleep and never woke up. We spread his ashes the same place where we spread my parents and Lilja's. He would been happy there. I also got a fang of his and put it in the vial where Lilja's fur was. Last thing I remember, I was kissing the forehead of my sons and the lips of my wife, out to go to a mission and... I can't remember the rest....This is frustrating! I know more happened but I can't remember! Just... peices!


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What Was I to My Home...} Captain of Oinin, wife to another woman... mother of two sons. Friend to few.
How Experienced Was I...| E-Rank
How Do I Experience Life...|
• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige}
How Do I View It...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
Better than yours: Unfortunately for her captors, she's used to ropes, and the pitiful excuse for s**t they call 'knots' are nothing. Reduce the cost of escaping grapples and physical restrainment by one [1] rank.
The Beast: When deciding what sort of features one [1] Companion has, gain two [2] free TCS. Again, these can only be spent on a single pet [1], and can only be used to upgrade the pet.
There's Something in Them There Woods: When searching the landscape for snares and pitfalls, the Foraging skill is counted as 4 points higher. This is also increased if trying to remove them, but not keep them, as keeping a pitfall would be stupid."
What Are My Limitations...|
Chakra Pool → 100
→→• Aqua Blue
→→• Snowflakes and lighting here and there. As if a storm and blizzard are going against each other.
→→→ Raiton
→→→ Suiton
Stamina Pool → 100
Archetype → Athlete
→→→• +150 Ryo
→→→• +2 Stages [Bukijutsu or Taijutsu]
→→→• +2 Proficiency Points
Statistics
→→→Power → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Agility → ☆☆☆☆ (4)
→→→Intelligence → ☆☆☆ (3)
→→→Chakra → ☆ (1)


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How Much Ryo Do I Have...| 00, 000 Ryo
How Much Experience Do I Have...| 00, 000 Exp

What Have I Laid Claim To...|
• {List Disciplines Here}


What Skills Have I Learned...|
• {Name of Skills} ► {Current Skill Level}


What Am I Proficient In...|
• {Proficiency Tree or Weapon} ► {Current Training Level}


What Can I Do...|
Ninjutsu → 00 // 00
Genjutsu → 00 // 00
Eisejutsu → 00 // 00
Fuinjutsu → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 02
Skill Points → 00 // 10
Proficiency Points → 00 // 02



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What Do I Carry...|

        Gear
        • Backpack
        • Skinning Knife
        • Rope [ 40 meters ]
        • Oiled Waterskin
        • Fishing Hook x2
        • Mess Kit
        • Pot, Cooking
        • One Person Tent
        • Woodcutting Axe [ Durability 30 ]
        • Blanket
        • Twine [ 50 metres ]
        • Shovel


        • Shinobi Clothing
        • Weather Clothing


What Techniques Do I Possess...|
Quote:

Maruton:

Raiton
• Seidenki Ito no Jutsu [Static Strings Technique]

Suiton


Bloodline


Quote:
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}

Quote:

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Quote:

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


What Secrets Have I Discovered...|






 

Jenni Deer

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 8:13 pm
Lily Platypus
Denied.

Just regarding your PAs. We gave you the idea for "There's Something in Them There Woods" because the "Watch Your Step" PA wouldn't work with how traps work. The Foraging skill will allowing you to notice possibly disarm traps, making the "Watch Your Step" PA pointless.

The only other thing, is that you have 'Ranton' instead of 'Raiton' as one of your elements. xD
 
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