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PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:00 pm
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Sleepy Slowpoke
Type of Summon :: → :: Snake
Sage :: → :: -
Name of Contractor :: → :: -
► Sub - Contractor :: → :: -
Summoning Lands :: → :: Ryūchi Cave; a legendary place that is equally as famous as Mount Myōboku and Shikkotsu Forest. It is the residence of the snakes — including the sacred White Snake Sage. Unlike the toads of Mount Myōboku, the snakes of Ryūchi Cave doesn't seem to have any affiliations with any Village.


|•| Summoning Sage(s) of Snake |•|

Name(s) :: → :: Hakuja Sennin [White Snake Sage]
Rank(s) :: → :: S+
Description(s) :: → :: This snake is extremely large — many times the size of a human with its massive body wrapped in thick coils. Along these coils are yellow circular bands. It wears a hat with two pointed edges and a red orb on top along with an orange headdress. It also wears a chain with a green orb around its neck, similar to the one worn by the Great Toad Sage. The Sage smokes as well, using a long cigarette holder when doing so.
Special Attributes :: → :: As a Sage, it is very knowledgeable in Senjutsu (Other things that can be placed here are such things like "All fire techniques used become, instead, a poisonous ash that burns as well as chokes", or "Can utilize combination techniques with other Sages without training", etc. Attributes are actual things that can effect combat, or roleplay, vs. just information about them. That should be listed in personality, which is part of the description)
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
(I would pick a couple of jutsu, say no more than ten, that it is best known for.)


|•| Available Summonings |•|


Name :: → :: White Snake (Make actual names. Each summon is a unique entity :3)
Rank(s) :: → :: D
Description(s) :: → :: A small white snake used to sneak into small cracks and either spy or gather information. (Also make sure to give all of the snakes a more in depth physical description, as well as descriptions of the personality. Just remember, MORE IS MORE xD)
Special Attributes :: → :: (Even this tiny guy has something. Think something like "Can utilize 5 chakra per post to completely hide all traces of chakra and life sense. All movements are silenced during this time")
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
(Again, Just a few, such as about 3 or 4. This can also include some sensor techniques, as well)



Name :: → :: Dual Headed Snake
Rank(s) :: → :: C
Description(s) :: → :: A double-headed, snake-like creature
Special Attributes :: → :: Can form smaller snakes from its Mouth (Good start, but surely there is something more? Look at above notes for ideas. Be creative here, with each snake being distinct, with an actual NAME, like "OOGO" or something, because each summon is a purely unique creature within the summoning family.)
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
• Snake Steel Net
After using the Summoning: Dual-Headed Snakes, snakes emerge from the summoned snakes mouths in order of two's and from those ones others are summoned through the mouths in a continuous order in an attempt to capture their target. As the snakes continue to multiply, they become smaller and smaller the farther they are from the epicenter of this technique.
(Hell yeah! That's more like it, but remember to have a rank to the techniques you make. They are E, which are Academy techniques, D, Genin, C, Chunin, B, Jonin, A, Konin, and S, Sanin. Basically. But yeah, basically. Look at our jutsu lists!)


Name :: → :: Three Giant Snakes (Name)
Rank(s) :: → :: B
Description(s) :: → :: The snakes are brown in color with darker tomoe-like patches all over their bodies. They tower over structures including the boundary walls of villages. Each snake wore a red scarf around the base of their heads. In the anime, these snakes are merged together towards their tails.
Special Attributes :: → :: as a Boa Constrictor, these Snakes can wrap around their target(s) and squeeze until the target can't move anymore. (That's a good point, but we'll have to make rules for grappling, such as how to break, how much damage it does, the speed of the attack, etc)
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
• Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu



Name :: → :: Aoda
Rank(s) :: → :: A
Description(s) :: → :: Aoda is a large blue snake with light green eyes and is easily comparable in size to the largest of summons. Not much is known about Aoda's background. In stark contrast to Manda, a snake of similar size to it, Aoda seems to be very mild mannered and respectful to its summoner, as shown when it addresses him/her with the "-sama" suffix and dutifully follows all his orders without needing to be controlled. Aoda also would always ask how he could be of service the instant he is summoned.
Special Attributes :: → :: As a snake, Aoda is extremely fast and nimble, successfully moving through an entire army while evading all of their attacks. And like many snakes, Aoda possesses large infrared-sensitive receptors on its snout. (Same info as above)
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
• infrared-sensitive receptors (Same as Above)



Name :: → :: Manda
Rank(s) :: → :: S
Description(s) :: → :: Manda was the largest snake in the world. He easily towered over buildings, trees, and large rock formations. Due to his length, he was even larger than Gamabunta and Katsuyu, and was easily able to coil around Katsuyu, having additional length behind him. Additionally, he could open his jaws wide enough to swallow Gamabunta whole.

He was colored purple, and had black rings running down intervals on his body. He had massive fangs, though they were arranged in a way similar to that of a constrictor snake instead of a viper or other venomous snake species, presumably carrying venom in them from the way they were designed, and green eyes. He also had four horn-like protrusions on his head.

Manda was very snobbish and proud, believing himself superior to everyone. He apparently only served his summoner because he could not successfully defeat him, as most would express concern that Manda would turn on the summoner if he knew they couldn't perform techniques. Even in this instance, he complained about the conditions he was summoned into, and demanded that he be given a hundred human sacrifices as compensation for his help.
Special Attributes :: → :: He was extremely fast, able to shed his skin, and his body was sturdy enough to withstand massive explosions, and remain intact, while providing a relatively safe shelter for anyone to hide inside his mouth. Overall, Manda was feared as the "strongest colossal serpent" (最強の蟒蛇, Saikyō no Uwahebi).
Stats :: → ::






Jutsu :: → ::
• infrared-sensitive receptors
• Orochimaru-Style Body Replacement Technique (??? What technique? Go through our lists :3)



Alright. SO! I made bolded notes at the end of each area that needed touching up. There are some that I didn't touch on, but that's more because I've already said what I had to say above. This guild is looking for rich detail in everything, and remember that there will be Chakra/Stamina costs for every technique, as well as pools for the summons as we go along. Just thought I'd tell you, in case you didn't know :3 Anyway, long way to go, but it's a start, and we always have to start somewhere!


I wrote in Bold my thoughts :3
 
PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2014 10:37 am
Lanfaer
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Anyone? Anyone? Bueler?
 

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:32 pm
I have been waiting for my work yum_puddi  
PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2014 10:20 pm
Admiral Frog
I have been waiting for my work yum_puddi


Alright. How about...Hey! Would you care to make some cool s**t for, idk, Sunagakure? biggrin  

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2014 1:33 pm
Lanfaer
Admiral Frog
I have been waiting for my work yum_puddi


Alright. How about...Hey! Would you care to make some cool s**t for, idk, Sunagakure? biggrin


I like making s**t cool. So I guess making cool
s**t wouldn't be too much of a change. Just lead
the way captain my captain.
 
PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2014 6:21 am
Admiral Frog
Lanfaer
Admiral Frog
I have been waiting for my work yum_puddi


Alright. How about...Hey! Would you care to make some cool s**t for, idk, Sunagakure? biggrin


I like making s**t cool. So I guess making cool
s**t wouldn't be too much of a change. Just lead
the way captain my captain.


Over to yonder and through the secret tunnel, my dear~
 

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2014 10:01 am
Lanfaer
Lanfaer
Mana_ecl Zetsuya
CanoodlingFlibbertyJibbit
Yuumei Kagemusha
Synister Bombardment
Archade
Sleepy Slowpoke
xNew York Slavex
Telliechan
Admiral Frog


Anyone? Anyone? Bueler?


Alright! Weigh in on the new prestiges. Tell me if you have questions, or can think of anything to add!

• ANBU
• Anbu Captain
• Artillery (Bukijutsu)
• Artillery (Ninjutsu)
• Bard (A bit o' everythin')
• Curious Savant (Choose two different Primaries, and a secondary)
• Grand Performer
• Illusionist (Master Genjutsu Crafter on large scales)
• Licensed Medical Practitioner
• Man-at-Arms (Kind of a Tai/Buki mix)
• Master Crafter
• Mentor
• Oinin
• Oinin Captain
• Practitioner of the Arts (Choose a secondary two times, and one primary)
• Sage of the Art of ______ (Specialist in one specific buki/tai style, extra benefits)
• Scholar of the Arts (Choose a primary two times, and a secondary for the third)
• Skill Monkey (Choose one primary, and two different secondaries)
• Skillful Savant (Choose a third, different Primary class)
• Sorcerer (Focused Battle Ninjutsu User)
• Specialist (Choose a single Primary class a third time)
• Sword Saint
• Vigilante (Heroes?)  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 8:58 am
Lanfaer
Mana_ecl Zetsuya
CanoodlingFlibbertyJibbit
Yuumei Kagemusha
Synister Bombardment
Archade
Sleepy Slowpoke
xNew York Slavex
Telliechan
Admiral Frog
 

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Admiral Frog

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 6:01 pm
Don't have a lot of time right now,
but I am not ignoring you. November
4th is closing in so my work load has
doubled what with canvasing and phone
banking. (Go Dems!) So as soon as I
am not at work until four in the morning
I will be more around. : D
 
PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2014 5:42 pm
Admiral Frog
Don't have a lot of time right now,
but I am not ignoring you. November
4th is closing in so my work load has
doubled what with canvasing and phone
banking. (Go Dems!) So as soon as I
am not at work until four in the morning
I will be more around. : D


YAY! biggrin I was getting worried...
 

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2014 8:37 am
Lanfaer

For the most part, these look like they're fine to me. A bit off the wall, considering we're pulling things in directly from other forms of fiction to label some (not a bad thing). I do appreciate the double Artillery deal there, but we can break those into subdivisions on the same one, personally.  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2014 4:29 am
Lanfaer
Lanfaer
Lanfaer
Mana_ecl Zetsuya
CanoodlingFlibbertyJibbit
Yuumei Kagemusha
Synister Bombardment
Archade
Sleepy Slowpoke
xNew York Slavex
Telliechan
Admiral Frog


Anyone? Anyone? Bueler?


Alright! Weigh in on the new prestiges. Tell me if you have questions, or can think of anything to add!

• ANBU
• Anbu Captain
• Artillery (Bukijutsu)
• Artillery (Ninjutsu)
• Bard (A bit o' everythin')
• Curious Savant (Choose two different Primaries, and a secondary)
• Grand Performer
• Illusionist (Master Genjutsu Crafter on large scales)
• Licensed Medical Practitioner
• Man-at-Arms (Kind of a Tai/Buki mix)
• Master Crafter
• Mentor
• Oinin
• Oinin Captain
• Practitioner of the Arts (Choose a secondary two times, and one primary)
• Sage of the Art of ______ (Specialist in one specific buki/tai style, extra benefits)
• Scholar of the Arts (Choose a primary two times, and a secondary for the third)
• Skill Monkey (Choose one primary, and two different secondaries)
• Skillful Savant (Choose a third, different Primary class)
• Sorcerer (Focused Battle Ninjutsu User)
• Specialist (Choose a single Primary class a third time)
• Sword Saint
• Vigilante (Heroes?)

I do say, sir, these classes you propose are quite alright.  

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 19, 2014 2:57 pm
Lanfaer
Admiral Frog
I have been waiting for my work yum_puddi


Alright. How about...Hey! Would you care to make some cool s**t for, idk, Sunagakure? biggrin


Suna is done.  
PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 7:31 pm
Lanfaer

Tao-Benshin


Do any of the villages need anymore descriptions/pictures?  

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 22, 2014 9:45 pm
Lanfaer

What exactly do you want done for the summons? Like...techniques for each summons? Which one gets what....? Rules for how to get each summons?

If you want me to do each summons that is a HUGE job. I think we should figure out some sort of system we all agree with and assign one to each person. It gets done faster.  
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