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 Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 3:49 pm
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Help me I am being held against my will
This space is for some mad man ramblings
Tracker Talents
D-Rank
Emphatic Quarry
The true link between hunter and prey is the thrill of the hunt, the emotion that fuels the raw intention of taking their prey. A tracker's supernatural senses are keen enough to mentally afflict and connect to their prey, the intent of their chase feeds on the emotion of what their quarry might be feeling, be it fear, anger, etc. The connection is not one-sided as the prey too knows the emotion of their hunter, feeling a fabricated sense of raw instinct that the tracker puts out instead of their own feelings. This connection draws on the tracker's own spiritual reserves, yet the application of it is simple. It is mostly a fear tactic and a tool for trackers who prefer a more dramatic chase. It is often mistaken for a genjutsu when in actuality it isn't altering any senses other than the tracker's own.
Hide in Plain Sight
A subtle technique made famous by the assassins trackers that have hunted humanoids. A tracker who doesn't want to be found off of a glance can apply this talent to help with that. Similar to the shinobi shadowing stealth, this technique uses the favored sense of the tracker to use. Through exertion of spiritual energy, the tracker hides their presence from others when they are among other people, objects, plants or other obscuring elements that block the tracker's body or presence depending on the sense. This talent tricks the mind of those around the tracker in overlooking themself and completely muddling their sense that the tracker favors. This talent usually affects a sense the Tracker is actively trying to hide, yet their favored sense is always in effect when this talent is in use -- if more than one favored sense is chosen, only the first favored sense is given priority. If the Tracker is actively trying to hide in their favored sense, it acts as 2 [steps] higher in potency against detection from enemies such as tamer's or sensors or creatures.
Visual Favor: Trackers that favor sight as their sense can appear as appart of their environment, moving and acting as part of the scenery as long as half of their body is obscured or blends in. Even if direct eye contact is made, this doesn't entirely reveal the tracker. Ocular jutsu do not perceive the target when in use.
Scent Favor: Trackers that favor smell as their sense can mask their entire scent from others. By mingling in the aroma of something present in the environment, the tracker blends their own scent as apart of it, making their scent similar to the original smell. Useful in smoke, flower fields or other areas with strong odor.
Sound Favor: Trackers who favor hearing are able to hide their body's noise in the presence of others. This sense doesn't exactly hide as much as it alters the sounds a tracker makes usually to blend into the environment, this also extends to their voice being able to replicate other noises like a dog or bird to even a person - though it's not convincing enough to mimic someone entirely.
Touch Favor: Trackers who favor touch have a more direct use of their hiding in that they alter how they feel to someone or something. Both a mental trickery and actual application of spiritual energy, the tracker's body or possesions take on sense of touch of another entity in their environment. This extends to sense of grass, hot air, cold water and even pain or even making their body feel like a prickly cactus. Unlike other favored senses, this has a more direct impact.
Taste: Trackers that favor taste are the strangest application of the talent, they instead shroud themself in an invisible aura that surrounds a pinpointed location. In this aura, the tracker fabricates the sensation of something around them on in their possession and anyone that passes the aura are affected in that they will instantly feel the taste of whatever's imitated, and usually invokes a reaction normal to when if the target would taste the real thing. It doesn't afflict harm or pain such as if a poisin's imitated and a taste replicated must be present to the tracker.
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2017 5:02 pm
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Maruton
Null Release
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In both 'Foundation' and 'Advanced' techniques, the Null Release (i.e. 'Maru' + 'ton') is all about chakra control at its finest. These techniques may take up more chakra than elemental techniques, but most do not require hand seals.
• Rankless Maruton is listed after the known Ranked Jutsu.
• All E-rank or Academy Student techniques are ‘cantrips’ and do not take up slots on the profile.
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E-rank
Bikou Ninjutsu [Shadowing Stealth Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: This technique allows Shinobi to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the Shinobi shadows their target can differ from the basic hiding under a nearby object to using a Jutsu to turn oneself invisible. Using this technique makes it more difficult for those of the user’s rank or lower to find the user while he or she is hiding. Effectively makes the shinobi less conspicuous, less noticeable, and allows them to blend in with the crowd for three [3] posts per use. Useful when tailing someone.
REIKO SAYS: This technique is a bit too specific if it is meant to be a shadow stealthing technique. Refers to crowds when in actuality this will be a useless thing. It is unclear by what it means of "more difficult" leaving much to the imagination. Needs a complete rework for it to ever be taken seriously
Genso Bunshin no Jutsu [Illusion Clone Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Also known simply as Bunshin no Jutsu, creates an intangible copy of the user. Since the clone itself doesn't have the ability to attack, and thus can only be used to confuse the enemy, it is mainly performed in combination with other techniques. The clones will dissipate when they come into contact with most anything else. These clones can be easily distinguished by persons with doujutsu. Even a person with normal eyes can distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones do not cast shadows and will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement ( won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc. ). The clone technique which all ninja start with. Creates a fragile empty-clone which cannot perform any physical task. Clones are mindless and can only follow tasks given upon creation. Rather than costing [5] chakra to perform, each clone created costs [2] chakra. Up to three (3) clones can be created per usage of this technique.
REIKO SAYS: These are pretty underpowered even if they are just basic clones. No one will use these outside of a basic genjutsu. Remove the harsh drawbacks of the clones being so obvious.
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every Shinobi learns at the Shinobi Academy. Henge allows the Shinobi to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the Shinobi to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. In addition to being able to transform normally, the user can also employ this technique to transform objects in the environment. In order to transform in to exceptionally large things, the user needs to use Konbi Henge.
REIKO SAYS: So is this an illusion or does this transformation actually do something? This is not clear and what it means by move with stealth. A better defining Transformation would be better and clear. In the series Naruto actually turned into a Fuuma Shuriken that was able to be stowed away. So food for thought.
Karakuri Hakke no Jin [Mechanical Eight Trigrams Formation]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: A technique used by Konohagakure to trap the enemy in a maze of tall walls. The user bangs a giant drum which causes countless walls appearing around the village, cornering the enemy. The walls must be set up prior, using at least a blueprint for the workings, if being used specifically for the blueprint. The chakra usage occurs in relation to using the drum as a signalling device, as everything else is mechanical. As in, this technique enables remote activation of items which need chakra to start up, up to eight [8] such items.
REIKO SAYS: Wat?
Kawanuke no Jutsu [Escaping Skill]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Kawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a Shinobi to escape from rope binds. Allows the user to escape from being tied up, or otherwise trapped, as long as doing so is possible without requiring significant altering of the human body to escape and as long as movement is still possible. Using chakra, ropes and other ties can be nudged in ways to loosen them and allow eventual escape. Takes two activations to get through one tie.
REIKO SAYS: How does this interact with style based grapples, or things of higher rank? Two activations is too much, wait for the guy to try and tie people with with Jiongu threads.
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: When in danger the Shinobi will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the Shinobi to quickly flee and hide while the object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.The substitution technique can only be performed four [4] times per battle and you must be near an object roughly the same size as your character. Other roleplayers' characters (unless willing) cannot be used as a substitute. Spawning random, faceless characters to use as substitutes is not permitted. All clones, with the exception of the standard clone, may be used in substitution.
REIKO SAYS: Should have a range limitation and size minimum for the subsitution. By the way it is written, you can in theory subsitute at any range and size.
Kekkai Massatsu no Jutsu [Barrier Shatter Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: Variable
Speed: --
Description: This technique is used to shatter visible or found barriers by borrowing chakra from allies. Only affects barriers made and sustained with chakra. Once used, the user's chakra passes through all nearby and willing shinobi that have trained in Korabo with the user, prior to disrupting the barrier, gathering strength. Gains an extra rank of chakra and power for every extra shinobi that it passes through before returning to the user. Shattering occurs at a higher level than the barrier's own, and also causes the source to be unable to create another for one [1] of their posts. Requires E-rank Korabo training with another shinobi to use past E rank.
REIKO SAYS: I see no problems here outside potential Story Breaking things.
Oiroke no Jutsu [Sexy Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Oiroke no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uzumaki Naruto. This technique is a variation of the Henge technique. Naruto changes his form into that of a nude, sexually appealing young woman. This technique is normally used to titillate and knock unconscious perverted adults or get Naruto's sensei Jiraiya to do what Naruto wants. Transforms the user in to a person who he or she believes is sexy, usually nude. Is super-effective against perverts.
REIKO SAYS: OP Please nerf. *Nosebleed*
Tanukineiri no Jutsu [Feigning Sleep Technique]
Rank: E
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Tanukineiri no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that puts someone to sleep. It can only be used on self or willing shinobi. Allows for the affected to be put instantly to sleep, thus gaining any regeneration benefits associated with sleep. A firm shake is enough to wake them, or they will wake up naturally after a full sleep cycle, approximately three [3] hours.
REIKO SAYS: Will this have an actual effect on the guild or is this flavor?
Null Release
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D-rank
Jinteki no Mayu [Human Cocoon Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: C
Speed: --
Description: The user creates a cocoon of hardened chakra around themselves most likely to spy or hide from the enemy. The user can also use the cocoon as a "sleeping bag". The cocoon is waterproof.
REIKO SAYS: See Feign Sleep
Juujin Bunshin [Beast-Man Clone]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Juujin Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by tamers. First tamer and the familiar may ingest a soldier pill to help their strength and stamina. Then, acting in conjunction with the tamer, the familiar will transform themselves into a copy of the clan member. While in this form they can accomplish many of the same techniques as the original. Requires a companion or summon of some sort to use. This technique is performed in conjunction with an animal that has received training as a Shinobi. This technique transforms the animal into a clone of the user, while retaining all of the instincts and abilities of the original animal. While in this form, the animal has access to five of the user’s techniques, up to its rank in training.
REIKO SAYS: This is good.
Kage Shuriken no Jutsu [Shadow Shuriken Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: Variable
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique typically utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the Shinobi will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware. Chakra hides the second shuriken in the shadow of the first. This can be used with normal shuriken as well, with up to three [3] of them in one activation, or one [1] of the Fuuma Shuriken. This technique takes on the Speed of the thrown object.
REIKO SAYS: This is superbly written. Good job.
Kanashibari no Jutsu [Temporary Body Paralysis Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the Shinobi can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat. Lasts until the end of the target’s first following post. Requires physical contact to activate.
REIKO SAYS: There is a lot of uncertainty around this. It's vague, sure it needs physical contact, but hello clone spam followed by Chidori instant-kill.
Mōjōrō [Net-Shaped Prison of the Blue Joro Spider]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: This technique is simply the manipulation of web by the summoner or the summoned spiders. When used by the spiders the web emitted hardens into spikes. The summoner can also emit web from their mouths and manipulate it into such things as a net to trap opponents. After the four handsigns, the user controls the web cords as one would with rope usage. Requires a spider companion or summon, or some method of creating web, in order to use.
REIKO SAYS: Should be removed and put toward a more specialized list of Jutsu. Like for Summons.
Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu [Haze Clone Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Oboro Bunshin is a normal Bunshin technique that created approximately a hundred clones of a person or group of persons. Due to the number of clones created, the user can take the opportunity to hide from their target. To attack their target they will hide in the shadows of the clones and attack from underground. The clones cannot use techniques, and have no combat capabilities.
REIKO SAYS: This has 100 more uses than the basic clone jutsu.
Oiroke no Jutsu: Onna no Ko Doushi & Otoko no Ko Doushi [Sexy Technique: Girl Companions & Guy Companions]
Rank: Augment [learned as D]
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Oiroke no Jutsu • Onna no Ko Doushi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique. After learning a Bunshin technique that creates a solid clone, the user transforms into two naked people, usually in some sort of sexual-seeming situation. Is super-effective against perverts. Requires knowing Oiroke no Jutsu [Sexy Technique] and some form of solid clone (such as Kage Bunshin no Jutsu). This is an upgrade of Oiroke no Jutsu but takes up its own slot, or the same slot as other Sexy Technique augments. Has no real combat value but can certainly throw someone off.
REIKO SAYS: ******** broken, my god. NERF. *NOSEBLEEDS HARDER*
Shikyaku no Jutsu [Four-Legged Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Shikyaku no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by tamers. After forming the needed hand seals, chakra begins to emit from the body of the tamer and they take on a more animal-like appearance, based on their companion's features. These body changes give them increased speed and reflexes. Requires an animal companion or summon to mimic. Agility is increased .5 ranks. Lasts for five [5] posts.
REIKO SAYS: Flavorful and does something. Keep -- Don't know why it's a ninjutsu though.
Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: --
Speed: --
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The Shinobi will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the Shinobi will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. As such, an 'air' or 'feeling' will pervade the area before usage. Maximum of 1 mile. Further mileage requires 1 D-ranked per each mile. Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique ] in any form can only be used three [3] times per battle.
REIKO SAYS: I don't want to touch this.
Touhatsu Kubikirikorosu [Long Strangling Hairs Technique]
Rank: D
Strength: D
Speed: D
Description: The user controls their hair to strangle their opponent. This is shown when Kotohime tries to strangle Jiraiya. The user manipulates his or her hair and strengthens it with Chakra. The hairs can then wrap and tighten around a target. This technique is treated as one rank higher in strength if the user is of the Tenkei Clan.
REIKO SAYS: One problem. No tenkei. Additionally this jutsu is unclear by how it can be manipulated, strengthened, etc. It's a bit unclear overall -- sure it wraps around but I could become BOBOBOBOBOBOBOBO and use my nose hairs too.
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2017 9:40 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2017 8:51 am
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For Reference
Ranton
Kuroi Kaminari Soujuu [Black Lightning Manipulation]
Description: This control allows the Storm user to create varied amounts of black colored electricity. Electricity created by this technique has a static effect that can cause temporary numbness or even paralysis on contact. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the electricity they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any electricity that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E: Very small amount of electricity [static shock]. Can cause tingling and discomfort at contact point. Effects lasts one [1] post.
___ Rank D: Small amounts of electricity. Can cause pain and numbness at contact point. Effects last one [1] post.
___ Rank C: Medium amounts of electricity [a series of arcing bolts]. Can cause pain and numbness throughout body. Effects last one [1] post.
___ Rank B: Large amounts of electricity. Can cause pain, numbness and loss of control of limbs. Affects anyone within five feet of contact. Effects last one [1] post.
___ Rank A: Very large amounts of electricity [lightning bolts]. Can cause pain, numbness, and loss of control of limbs. Affects anyone within five feet of contact. Effects last two [2] posts.
___ Rank S: Massive amounts of electricity [a storm]. Causes loss of consciousness at contact. Causes temporary paralysis to anyone within ten feet of contact. Paralysis lasts three [3] posts.
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of electricity that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated black lightning lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against wind.
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Katon
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Description: This control allows the Ninjutsu user to create varied amounts of chakra flames. Fire created by this technique has a burning effect that can incinerate flammable materials and cause burns. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the fire they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any flames that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E:
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___ Rank C:
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___ Rank A:
___ Rank S:
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of fire that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated chakra fire lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against water.
Suiton
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Description: This control allows the Ninjutsu user to create varied amounts of chakra flames. Fire created by this technique has a burning effect that can incinerate flammable materials and cause burns. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the fire they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any flames that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E:
___ Rank D:
___ Rank C:
___ Rank B:
___ Rank A:
___ Rank S:
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of fire that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated chakra fire lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against water.
Doton
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Description: This control allows the Ninjutsu user to create varied amounts of chakra flames. Fire created by this technique has a burning effect that can incinerate flammable materials and cause burns. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the fire they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any flames that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E:
___ Rank D:
___ Rank C:
___ Rank B:
___ Rank A:
___ Rank S:
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of fire that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated chakra fire lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against water.
Raiton
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Description: This control allows the Ninjutsu user to create varied amounts of chakra flames. Fire created by this technique has a burning effect that can incinerate flammable materials and cause burns. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the fire they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any flames that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E:
___ Rank D:
___ Rank C:
___ Rank B:
___ Rank A:
___ Rank S:
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of fire that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated chakra fire lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against water.
Fuuton
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Description: This control allows the Ninjutsu user to create varied amounts of chakra flames. Fire created by this technique has a burning effect that can incinerate flammable materials and cause burns. Not only can it take any form the user desires, but it can also be shifted around as if it were a part of their own body. It should be noted that one can only manipulate the fire they themselves have made, and it must be done while holding a double hand seal. Additionally, any flames that is being freely manipulated is not very strong, and can be broken or blown away as if it were completely natural. Should be noted that techniques can be made smaller while retaining their rank.
___ Rank E:
___ Rank D:
___ Rank C:
___ Rank B:
___ Rank A:
___ Rank S:
• Requires [10] posts to learn, and must be learned before proceeding to other techniques. Receives no reductions.
• The amount of fire that can be created is limited to the user's experience rank limit [at E-rank can make up to C-rank, D-rank up to B-rank, etc.]
• Manipulated chakra fire lose any modifiers, and are beaten by techniques of the same rank, or one rank lower against water.
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