Character: Coda Technique Name: Body Art: Perfection of Form Rank: X Type: Bloodline Element: N/A Description:An expansion of her own jutsu, this technique allows Coda to make a transformation permanent. This may be transformation of one part of her body, or a complete change into another person. Though it imparts no battle effects, transformations from this technique cannot be broken except by a hidden seal on Coda's body. If transforming into a different person or creature, all elements of Coda's body are changed, including features that could be used to identify her, provided that is the intent. Transforming into another RPC or NPC requires a sample of genetic material from the subject in order to perfectly replicate finer details. While transformed, the Youzen's tattoo based techniques are disabled, but Coda's skillset otherwise remains the same. The effects of this technique may last for an indefinite period of time. Transformation into someone else requires the user to spend a rank of chakra equal to the RPC or NPC's body rank, or their own body rank if transforming into someone or something else.
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Character: Nakya Shouten Uchiha Technique Name: B I G B A N G Rank: S+ Free Custom Type: Katon Element: Fire Description: The ultimate expression of Kya's role as a powerful, battlefield controlling artillery cannon, BB is a skill that focuses the power of her katon chakra into a single point after she performs a lighting fast set of somatic gestures in front of her body. As she does this, flames seem to react at her will, gathering together around her in a showing of her power. When she finishes the mvoements, she forms a diamond with the index fingers and thumbs of her hands with the small ball in the center, and then fires the ball of concentrated blaze like a rocket of extremely quick motion. Once she wills it, the ball explodes with a force akin to a nuclear bomb, with the associated risk of destruction to her allies and self in place. It is not uncommon for an entire thread to be consumed by the blaze as it rages absolutely. Fire resistance does nothing to curb the power of this skill should someone be hit by it, and in the wake of the explosion flames spread even to nearby threads. The only way to be safe is to be behind an S+ defense once it detonates.
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Character: Szen Ranmaru
Technique Name: Beast Mode [Bloodline Keystone Custom] Rank: C-S Type: Bloodline | Complex? Element: Jiongu Description:Szen's nightmare becomes reality when the monster within himself finally breaks out, unchaining the shackles that are its vessel. Tendrils seize his body and proceed to function with a mind of their own, regardless of his will or command, even if he's rendered unconscious. Brimming with energy, they maximize his body's physical capabilities to flow through battle at great speeds, allowing him to leap amazing heights, all while moving at x-rank agility. His fortitude and strength too are bolstered to x-rank, the tendrils acting as muscle fibers overflowing with power. Any lost body portion is filled in, covered up or replaced by tendrils as the beast can reform itself in any manner to survive and finish whatever it sets its heart to doing. This jutsu lasts for 10 posts, after which it may utilize Szen's chakra reserves, paying half its chakra cost to keep its effects active. While in this form, the user must fight to maintain their inner beast from hurting nearby allies. β’ The "x-rank" mentioned above is replaced by the cost paid to perform this jutsu.
Technique Name: Mutation [Free Bloodline #1] Rank: C Type: Bloodline | Spiritual? Element: Jiongu Description:Szen may form objects from detached tendrils such as kunai, shuriken, shields the like; these objects will permanently retain their form after created. He may also have his tendrils form items that remain attached to his body during combat; in this case, he may choose to unravel the item to its former state at any time. Each item (a bo staff or the like) or set of items (like senbon and shuriken) constructed costs a c-rank amount of chakra. Objects created will have qualities akin to their mimicked forms (ie. shuriken will be sharp around the edges).
Technique Name: Weaver [Free Bloodline #2] Rank: B Type: Bloodline | Spiritual? Element: Jiongu Description:By cloning his tendrils, then weaving and molding them together, Szen extends the length of his reach to ten times its prior amount, specifically to 195 feet. He need only use this technique once per battle and his tendrils will retain their extended length for the remainder of the fight.
Technique Name: Unravel [Free Bloodline #3] Rank: A Type: Bloodline | Spiritual? Element: Jiongu Description:Szen clones and unravels any amount of his tendrils to detach from him and flow freely in midair; this method may also be applied to previously removed tendrils. He then controls them to move in any direction within 100 feet of himself. During this time, Szen can alter the shape, size, hardness and sharpness of his tendrils. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts, after which he may pay half its chakra cost to keep it active.
Technique Name: Final Labyrinth [Free Bloodline #4] Rank: C-S+ Type: Bloodline | Spiritual? Element: Jiongu Description:Szen's sharpens and hardens his tendrils, commanding them to immediately flow forth from his body in any or all directions; they path in a manner that leaves no space to maneuver or squeeze between his tendrils in order to avoid being hit. He may choose bypass allies as his tendrils extend, manipulating his tendrils to curve around them. The tendrils travel outward for up to three times the user's height at c-rank; every rank above this, his tendrils can travel further by thrice their prior amount (ie. c-rank would be 6.5' * 3 = 19.5 feet, b-rank would be 19.5' * 3 = 58.5 feet, a-rank would be 58.5' * 3 = 175.5 feet, s-rank would be 526.5 feet, and s+-rank would be 1,579.5 feet). At any distance chosen, Szen may halt his tendrils from extending and instead and have them flow around himself and/or other targets, forming a wholly defensive barrier that can block oncoming attacks.
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Sorry, I had a few other things I wanted to tack on :'<
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2019 7:59 pm
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All are Approved except the keystone! (That sounds bad don't worry though <3)
So for the keystone your intent is to make yourself move fast enough to evade techs at or below it yes? Then you'll want to just label your keystone as either spiritual/bloodline or just bloodline. Complex will make it so that it is one rank weaker than any ninjutsu in terms of collision and then you'd need stats (speed and reflex) to make up the difference. Also just so you know because I could tell from your writing but when you used this jutsu it wouldn't increase your fortitude or strength to A rank but rather give you the stats associated with A rank.
So! These are the stat amounts that you can get without giving up something in return. Say you used this at A rank, you can't be getting a greater increase in strength and fort even with a keystone so you'll have to pick one. I would make it something like this: He can increase any stat he chooses by an amount determined the rank used. This amount is also able to be divided as he sees fit. This way if you use it at S+ you can give yourself a 6 in strength and 6 in fort. OR you could give something up too! Like losing access to ninjutsu because you're a midless beast blah blah blah. Then you could doible up on the stst effects like you want.
Character: Maric Solis Technique Name: Ardenti Vindictae [Bloodline Keystone] Rank: Passive Type: Bloodline Element: None Description: Uchiha and Hikariton blood mixed within him have turned Maric into a burning and passionate individual. This not only shows in his personality, but in his bloodline jutsu as well. At the cost of ten chakra per rank of the jutsu Maric can turn any of his Uchiha (Aside from certain ones like Kamui and the genjutsu ones) techniques into Hikariton ones as well. In addition becoming a bright golden color this jutsu will now also blind any who look directly at them for one post. Furthermore, Maric may pay the cost difference of any Uchiha bloodline jutsu in order to change it's rank. (D base cost + 240 = a now S+ jutsu). This second ability cannot exceed Maric max learnable rank.
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2019 6:16 pm
Character: Szen Ranmaru
Technique Name: Beast Mode [Bloodline Keystone Custom] Rank: C-S+ Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Jiongu Description:Szen's nightmare becomes reality when the monster within himself finally breaks out, unchaining the shackles that are its vessel. Tendrils seize his body and jutsu along with it, proceeding to function with a mind of their own, regardless of his will or command, even if he's rendered unconscious. Brimming with energy, they maximize his body's physical capabilities to flow through battle, reach great heights with powerful leaps, and even tank nasty blows. Each post this jutsu is active, Szen may have any of his stats increased in accord with the rank of chakra initially applied. Any lost body portion is filled in, covered up or replaced by tendrils as the beast can reform itself in any manner to survive and finish whatever it sets its heart to doing. This jutsu lasts for 10 posts, after which it may utilize Szen's chakra reserves, paying half its cost to keep its effects active. While in this form, the user must fight to maintain their inner beast from hurting nearby allies. β’ The "x-rank" mentioned above is replaced by the cost paid to perform this jutsu. β’ Reference for stat boost based on cost/rank: tabβ E, Slight (1) tabβ D, Mild (2) tabβ C, Moderate (3) tabβ B, Heavy (4) tabβ A, Greatly (5) tabβ S, Supremely (6) tabβ S+, Double Supreme (12)
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Character: Maric Solis Technique Name: Angelus Solem Rank: Null (Eats up two custom slots cause I intend for this to work at S+) Type: Bloodline Element: Hikariton Description: A secret technique of his order. It is said that the materalization of this jutsu differs from person to person, but is always heralded by a blanket of comforting emotions to all those around the user. Regardless of it's appearance the effect is always the same. The apparition is treated as an advanced level clone for the sole purpose of korabo. It is able to perfectly copy any bloodline, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu, etc, and replicate the attack. This effects extends to the makeup of the original created jutsu, meaning that it is possible to Korabo with an already Korabo'd jutsu with this technique. The chakra for jutsu cast by the angel is taken from the caster which determines it's costs as the apparition itself costs and does nothing until the user does.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2019 10:38 pm
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Just reposting this since it seems to have been overlooked at the end of the last page. I think I addressed the concerns regarding duration limits, and making sure there were no special effects for the environment. emotion_kirakira
Character: Sandayu Genburyuichirousuke
Technique Name: Amenominakanushi (Heavenly Ancestral God of the Originating Heart of the Universe) Rank: E Type: Bloodline | Spiritual Element: Rinnesharingan Description: Like the Kamui dimension, other dimensional planes lie closely parallel to that of the "normal" world. Sandayu has learned how to reach them through use of his space-time techniques. These parallel worlds have no special attributes (no statistical/systematic value while present) aside from simple environmental features (forests, landforms, and bodies of water) and can only be accessed by other space-time technique users who have also visited them. Follows same duration restrictions as Kamui [ Authority of the Gods ]. β’ Must know Yomotsu Hirasaka/Kamui [ Authority of the Gods ] to learn & use.
*See spoiler regarding the reason I mention Yomotsu Hirasaka in this technique.
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Yomotsu Hirasaka creates doorways through space-time, unlike Hiraishi which "just teleports you". Kamui and Yomotsu are similar in their means of transportation through space and my character knows both so I made both eligible for the sake of learning to and accessing the other dimension.
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Technique Name: [ Wood Release: Green Thumb ] Rank: A - S [Learned as A ranked] Type: Bloodline Element: Mokuton Description:The wood version of the petrication jutsu. Allows the user to flow petrifying chakra through physical touch or any Mokuton created substance. Once infected this wood will not stop at the just the skin, taking over bones, muscles, and veins until everything has become wood. It will slowly force all movement to come to a halt until the target is completely petrified. Total petrification occurs over the length of [14] posts, with one limb becoming infected per post, and is followed by one post of the infected body part actually being petrified/locked up, and death on the fourteenth post. This process may be reversed through any Eiseijutsu that can heal/remove infection. Alternatively, if chakra is supplied to the target from the user themselves then the enemy will remain alive and in their immobile state for as long as contact is held. The petrification process may not be sped up by attacking uninfected areas with the same technique. Guild Description:See official description. A-ranked is required for sending petrification chakra through normal physical contact. S-ranked is required for sending it through any any Mokuton created substance. A few of things to be aware of while using this technique. First off as the wood overtakes the body, the target will follow all the normal properties that trees and wood does. Secondly, in terms of this jutsu a limb is defined as one of the six basic extremities. (i.e. Torso, Abdomen, Head, Arms, and legs.) Thirdly, while this jutsu does turn the target into wood. Movement is still possibly for a single post while the infection is spreading throughout the targeted limb. Finally, for the purposes of this jutsu connections are defined as follows.
Connections: Arms: Connected to Torso Legs: Connected to Abdomen Torso: Connected to Either Left Arm, Right Arm, or Abdomen Abdomen: Connected to Either Left Leg, Right Leg, or Torso
Petrifaction Rate β’ First post - Wood starts forming on the targeted area Left Arm, Right Arm, Left Leg, Right Leg, Torso, or Abdomen. β’ Second post - Wood locks all movement in the targeted area β’ Third post - Wood moves on to next closest limb β’ Fourth post - Wood locks all movement of the targeted area β’ Fifth post - Wood moves on to next closest limb β’ Sixth post - Wood locks all movement of the targeted area β’ Seventh post - Wood moves on to next closest limb β’ Eighth post - Wood locks all movement in the targeted area β’ Ninth post - Wood moves on to next closest limb β’ Tenth post - Wood locks all movement in the targeted area β’ Eleventh post - Wood moves on to next closest limb β’ Twelfth post - Wood locks all movement in the targeted area β’ Thirtieth post - Wood Reaches Head, Completely Immobile β’ Fourteenth post - Death.
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Posted: Wed Mar 06, 2019 2:31 pm
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Okay! So yes Unki affecting tai and formless is good. Approved. As for Sadayo it is approved as well but yes your D rank example could work although it would take eight D ranks and you could probably whoop them within the four posts they were trapped.
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You're approved sorry it took so long for such an easy jutsu
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Ardenti Vindictae approved just remember that you cannot change a jutsu's actually effects just by increasing it's rank. Only make it stronger. Angelus Solem alright soo here's the thing! -You need a cost for the angel -The angel can't use any techs that you do not have because of our clone rules -The angel itself has to cost an activation
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Self approving myself since both matty and necro and rei helped me make this jutsu and it's been approved twice before this.
Character: Sora Shinko Technique Name: Ofuda Paper Talisman Seal Rank: X Type: Maruton Element: Fuuinjutsu Description: The user seals a genjutsu or ninjutsu of their choosing within a paper talisman. Then, throwing the paper talisman as it stiffens and travels like a Kunai it is stuck to it's target. For each post this talisman is on the target it drains chakra equal one rank below what was executed at.In order to break the Fuuinjutsu, the target must exert chakra equal to the Talisman's executed rank.Once the talisman is broken, the technique sealed within the talisman is triggered upon the target.
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2019 5:57 pm
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Oo devious. But unfortunately it's going to need a duration on how long it can stays stuck on a target. Also just to make sure I got this right, this custom stabs into you and cannot be removed without paying the cost correct? Then once the cost to defeat is paid the technique inside was sealed? If so then make sure to add a note that a talisman can only a technique it's rank or below please c:
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Changes are good you're good on both! Edit: If you want you can learn these during our fight right now too!
Character: Sora Shinko Technique Name: Ofuda Paper Talisman Seal Rank: X Type: Maruton Element: Fuuinjutsu Description: The user seals a genjutsu or ninjutsu of their choosing within a paper talisman. Then, throwing the paper talisman as it stiffens and travels like a Kunai it is sticks flat to it's target for two posts per rank of the technique. For each post this talisman is on the target it drains chakra equal one rank below what was executed at. In order to break the Fuuinjutsu, the target must exert chakra equal to the Talisman's executed rank.Once the talisman is broken, the technique sealed within the talisman is triggered upon the target. Techniques sealed within the talisman may only be used at or below the rank of the Talisman upon it's use.
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2019 8:09 pm
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Hello!
After examining Beast Mode, I noticed a few inconsistencies.
The notes of mechanics list X-rank , but you've listed the jutsu as an C-S+ rather than X-rank. Normally X-ranks cannot get to S+ but as it is a Keystone, It should be fine. I would just be sure of the proper stat allocation.
The DR can only be assigned to a single stat or the values may be divided between stats. I.E: one stat gets 6, two stats get 3, or 3 stats get 2. You may want to reword the "Szen may have any of his stats increased in accord with the rank of chakra initially applied" to something more like, "Szen receives an active DR boost, according to rank, whose value may be divided among the DR stats as the user wishes.
The jutsu mentions that it will function even if szen is unconscious. Typically that only occurs if you run out of chakra or stamina. However there are a few genjutsu that may put one to sleep. So I can see how this might work.
