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Ephemeral Ozymandias
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PostPosted: Wed May 01, 2019 5:35 pm
Balance Team
This technique is stress-testing the keystone concept and the extent to which the customs rules can be bent for them. Because of this, I will not be self-approving and will defer to the balance team's judgement and suggestions.


Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Aura of Reincarnation: Avatar of the Sentinel
Rank: S+ | Spiritual
Type: Bloodline Keystone
Element: N/A
Description: While Kenshin is cloaked in the Aura of Reincarnation, he can attain his highest form by clasping his hands together and manifesting one thousand immense rotating arms of reincarnation chakra. Each and every arm is one hundred feet long and perfectly mimic Kenshin's attacks. If taijutsu is used then the hands act as normal. If his blade is employed then each arm will extend a twenty-foot thin needle-like blade from the center of the palms. These arms replicate the attack used by Kenshin by paying their cost in chakra. Attacks can be replicated up to three times in one post and are limited to duplicate one attack per post. These attacks cost no additional activation, just the chakra and stamina resources to utilize them. The Avatar of the Sentinel is a highly taxing technique when used to its full potential but is capable of devastating the battlefield by selecting multiple targets. Complex or simple replicated techniques are given the costs and qualities of spiritual. Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension must be active for this technique to be used. As a result, the duration of Avatar of the Sentinel cannot exceed ten posts. Replicated attacks, even of the Jyuken, are unable to drain resources but they are capable of locking access to chakra.


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PostPosted: Sat May 04, 2019 4:17 pm

Character: Selina Rosewater
Technique Name: Awakened Resolve (Keystone)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Non-elemental
Description: Selina manifest the resolution within her soul into a spirit which assist her. This spirit is eight feet tall and is ethereal to attacks. It has two activations, one offensive one defensive, drains chakra and stamina from Selina, and can be any where in the same topic as Selina. The activation can korabo any jutsu with Selina at one rank lower than Selina while retaining its ethereal form. The attack will appear from Selina in this case. However, the attack may come from the spirit instead. In situations where the spirit launches an attack, the spirit is rendered vulnerable to harm for one post. Any damage the spirit sustains is delivered to Selina. When koraboing techniques, Selina and the clone do not both need to be performing the handseals for the technique, although one activation is taken from both of them. Finally, with the spirit awakened, Selina can turn any of her hanaton jutsu into katon.



Technique Name: Awakened Shield
Rank: X
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hanaton
Description: Can only use while Awakened Resolve is active. The flower spirit will guard Selina with one or both of its flower shields. Selina may use one of her activations to korabo this technique. The spirit may also use this technique to protect herself as well.

Technique Name: Flower bonds
Rank: X
Type: NInjutsu
Element: Hanaton
Description: Selina's body will expel a stream of petals which are directed by her two hands. Through somantic movements the petals will latch themselves onto something and stick onto the surface with Chakra. Selina can then use somantic gestures to move around the objects which are coated by the petals. Through the use of The Awakened Resolve, anything latched onto by this technique can also spontaneously combust. Technique last for three post unless cancelled early.


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PostPosted: Tue May 07, 2019 1:33 pm

Character: Coda
Technique Name: Body Art: Seal Impressioning
Rank: X
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Using her Youzen Clan tattoo jutsu, Coda copies a sealing or tag formula she physically comes into contact with. This allows her to, essentially, recreate a sealing jutsu for a single use. This copied seal must occupy a tracked space in her tattoo formation, and for seals copied from custom techniques or the Fuuinjutsu listing maintains itself for only one primary activation - ie, if it's function is storage, something may be stored without destroying the seal, but the unsealing process will break the jutsu. Custom and restricted jutsu must be presented out of combat by a Sealing Class RPC in order to be copied, take up an extra slot in the sealing formation, and incur a +5 chakra cost penalty per rank when used. Copying passive or permanent seals, such as those on an explosive tag or weapon create a semi-permanent seal in the user's tattoo formation, only if the seals originate from an item in the user's personal possession, and affords them access to the effects of the formula at an equivalent cost or X rank in the case of something like an explosive tag. This technique requires a post of setup, and tracking of copied seals. Coda may not copy more fuuin than she has space in any single tattoo formation.




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PostPosted: Fri May 10, 2019 4:40 pm
Ephemeral Ozymandias

Approved!

Mattysandwich

Psshh choosing Yukiko and not Ann's persona?
Guardian needs a duration! Blah blah blah just needs to follow normal shadow clones rules that I know you were already going to have it do anyway, can only cast jutsu you know.

Shields is good and bonds just needs very slight better wording so that it doesn't auto hit!

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Give me some time to think on this. I have hesitation with the access to restricted seals part.

Edit: I have returned from consulting with the elder gods! There have been concerns over the restricted part and I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you to just omit that part
 

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PostPosted: Sat May 11, 2019 5:14 am

Character: Selina Rosewater
Technique Name: Awakened Resolve (Keystone)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Non-elemental
Description: Selina manifest the resolution within her soul, which in return summons a spirit which assist her. This spirit is eight feet tall and is ethereal to attacks. It has two activations, one offensive one defensive, drains chakra and stamina from Selina, utilizes the jutsu which Selina knows, and can be any where in the same topic as Selina. Cannot leave the topic Selina is in, and if Selina leaves the topic then the spirit fades away. The activation can korabo any jutsu with Selina at one rank lower than Selina while retaining its ethereal form. The attack will appear from Selina in this case. However, the attack may come from the spirit instead. In situations where the spirit launches an attack or uses a defensive action, the spirit is rendered vulnerable to harm for one post. The spirit can take an attack up to A-ranked before it vanishes into blue flames. When koraboing techniques, Selina and the clone do not both need to be performing the handseals for the technique, although one activation is taken from both of them. Finally, with the spirit awakened, Selina can turn any of her hanaton jutsu into katon when korabo'ing jutsu. Technique last for eight post before the spirit disburse in blue flames.


Technique Name: Flower bonds
Rank: X
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Hanaton
Description: Selina's body will expel a stream of petals which are directed by her two hands. Through somantic movements the petals will latch themselves onto something, (or someone, if they do not respond properly), and stick onto the surface with Chakra. Selina can then use somantic gestures to move around the objects which are coated by the petals. Rank is determined either by the jutsu being countered with flower petals or by the weight of the moved objects. Through the use of The Awakened Resolve, anything latched onto by this technique can also spontaneously combust. Technique last for three post unless cancelled early.

Technique Name: Promises
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Miyamoto
Description: Selina uses a bond set up through the Miyamoto clan to temporarily make someone of the Chiru clan. This does not allow the bonded one to use Hanaton techniques, so much as it allows Selina to use Hanaton techniques onto them as though they were herself. This technique cost Selina two activations, and the cost of the hanaton techniques she uses is added into the cost of this technique. Last for six post.



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PostPosted: Sun May 12, 2019 11:27 am

Character: Coda
Technique Name: Body Art: Seal Impressioning
Rank: X
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Using her Youzen Clan tattoo jutsu, Coda copies a sealing or tag formula she physically comes into contact with. This allows her to, essentially, recreate a sealing jutsu for a single use. This copied seal must occupy a tracked space in her tattoo formation, and for seals copied from custom techniques or the Fuuinjutsu listing maintains itself for only one primary activation - ie, if it's function is storage, something may be stored without destroying the seal, but the unsealing process will break the jutsu. Custom must be presented out of combat by the RPC assigned authorship of the technique in order to be copied, take up an extra slot in the sealing formation, and incur a +5 chakra cost penalty per rank when used. Copying passive or permanent seals, such as those on an explosive tag or weapon create a semi-permanent seal in the user's tattoo formation, only if the seals originate from an item in the user's personal possession, and affords them access to the effects of the formula at an equivalent cost or X rank in the case of something like an explosive tag. This technique requires a post of setup, and tracking of copied seals. Coda may not copy more fuuin than she has space in any single tattoo formation.




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PostPosted: Tue May 14, 2019 9:46 pm
Mattysandwich


Approved

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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2019 11:07 am

Character: Kenshin Kosei
Technique Name: Sage Art: The Circle of Preservation
Rank: S+ Spiritual
Type: Senjutsu | Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: While the tenseigan is active during sage mode, Kenshin claps his hands together and mixes his reincarnation chakra and natural energy together. The cost of this technique is split in half between the reincarnation chakra on Kenshin's main reserves and the other half in nature chakra. This natural reincarnation chakra mixture covers the entire area (topic) in cyan chakra with a dark green aura. The chakra then seemingly dims and dissipates but instead forms a circle around the area that perseveres. This is a circle of perfect order where chaos cannot exist. No individual within the circle can manifest destruction that harms the natural order. No entity including Kenshin himself can destroy any object in the circle including structures and vegetation for five posts. Attacks can still be manifested and harm others but the area will be preserved and attacks cannot leave the circle to destroy other places unless they are of stronger quality. This skill can only be used once per battle and only while sage mode and the tenseigan are active at the same time.
 

Ephemeral Ozymandias
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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:18 am
Ephemeral Ozymandias
Balance Team
This technique is stress-testing the keystone concept and the extent to which the customs rules can be bent for them. Because of this, I will not be self-approving and will defer to the balance team's judgement and suggestions.


Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Aura of Reincarnation: Avatar of the Sentinel
Rank: S+ | Spiritual
Type: Bloodline Keystone
Element: N/A
Description: While Kenshin is cloaked in the Aura of Reincarnation, he can attain his highest form by clasping his hands together and manifesting one thousand immense rotating arms of reincarnation chakra. Each and every arm is one hundred feet long and perfectly mimic Kenshin's attacks. If taijutsu is used then the hands act as normal. If his blade is employed then each arm will extend a twenty-foot thin needle-like blade from the center of the palms. These arms replicate the attack used by Kenshin by paying their cost in chakra. Attacks can be replicated up to three times in one post and are limited to duplicate one attack per post. These attacks cost no additional activation, just the chakra and stamina resources to utilize them. The Avatar of the Sentinel is a highly taxing technique when used to its full potential but is capable of devastating the battlefield by selecting multiple targets. Complex or simple replicated techniques are given the costs and qualities of spiritual. Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension must be active for this technique to be used. As a result, the duration of Avatar of the Sentinel cannot exceed ten posts. Replicated attacks, even of the Jyuken, are unable to drain resources but they are capable of locking access to chakra.


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My only issues is the following line of "Complex or simple replicated techniques are given the costs and qualities of spiritual."

I am fine with Costs but qualities can mean that Formless can achieve Spiritual blows. A slight edit to this and it should be fine.

I am personally hesitant on still allowing access to lock down chakra, but it is a moot point.

This is pending to that one quoted line and concern.

Apologies, just making this more official since we were jumping around this like chickens with their heads cut off.  
PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:24 am
Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Aura of Reincarnation: Avatar of the Sentinel
Rank: S+ | Spiritual
Type: Bloodline Keystone
Element: N/A
Description: While Kenshin is cloaked in the Aura of Reincarnation, he can attain his highest form by clasping his hands together and manifesting one thousand immense rotating arms of reincarnation chakra. Each and every arm is one hundred feet long and perfectly mimic Kenshin's attacks. If taijutsu is used then the hands act as normal. If his blade is employed then each arm will extend a twenty-foot thin needle-like blade from the center of the palms. These arms replicate the attack used by Kenshin by paying their cost in chakra. Attacks can be replicated up to three times in one post and are limited to duplicate one attack per post. These attacks cost no additional activation, just the chakra and stamina resources to utilize them. The Avatar of the Sentinel is a highly taxing technique when used to its full potential but is capable of devastating the battlefield by selecting multiple targets. Complex or simple non-formless replicated techniques are given the costs and qualities of spiritual. Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension must be active for this technique to be used. As a result, the duration of Avatar of the Sentinel cannot exceed ten posts. Replicated attacks, even of the Jyuken, are unable to drain resources but they are capable of locking access to chakra.
 

Ephemeral Ozymandias
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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:30 am
Ephemeral Ozymandias

Character: Kenshin Kosei
Technique Name: Sage Art: The Circle of Preservation
Rank: S+ Spiritual
Type: Senjutsu | Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: While the tenseigan is active during sage mode, Kenshin claps his hands together and mixes his reincarnation chakra and natural energy together. The cost of this technique is split in half between the reincarnation chakra on Kenshin's main reserves and the other half in nature chakra. This natural reincarnation chakra mixture covers the entire area (topic) in cyan chakra with a dark green aura. The chakra then seemingly dims and dissipates but instead forms a circle around the area that perseveres. This is a circle of perfect order where chaos cannot exist. No individual within the circle can manifest destruction that harms the natural order. No entity including Kenshin himself can destroy any object in the circle including structures and vegetation for five posts. Attacks can still be manifested and harm others but the area will be preserved and attacks cannot leave the circle to destroy other places unless they are of stronger quality. This skill can only be used once per battle and only while sage mode and the tenseigan are active at the same time.


No issue here. Boom. Approved. Now go tactically nuke something and prevent destruction  
PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 10:46 am
Ephemeral Ozymandias
Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Aura of Reincarnation: Avatar of the Sentinel
Rank: S+ | Spiritual
Type: Bloodline Keystone
Element: N/A
Description: While Kenshin is cloaked in the Aura of Reincarnation, he can attain his highest form by clasping his hands together and manifesting one thousand immense rotating arms of reincarnation chakra. Each and every arm is one hundred feet long and perfectly mimic Kenshin's attacks. If taijutsu is used then the hands act as normal. If his blade is employed then each arm will extend a twenty-foot thin needle-like blade from the center of the palms. These arms replicate the attack used by Kenshin by paying their cost in chakra. Attacks can be replicated up to three times in one post and are limited to duplicate one attack per post. These attacks cost no additional activation, just the chakra and stamina resources to utilize them. The Avatar of the Sentinel is a highly taxing technique when used to its full potential but is capable of devastating the battlefield by selecting multiple targets. Complex or simple non-formless replicated techniques are given the costs and qualities of spiritual. Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension must be active for this technique to be used. As a result, the duration of Avatar of the Sentinel cannot exceed ten posts. Replicated attacks, even of the Jyuken, are unable to drain resources but they are capable of locking access to chakra.


Unless Necro smites me with a bolt of lightning. I don't see an issue much else.  


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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 1:31 pm

Character: Zahara Kevali


Technique Name: Dragon's Breath [-2 Custom Slots]
Rank: X
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: Zahara's Signature technique that's earned him the nickname Fire Dragon. With a focus of chakra and the fire nature, Zahara just needs to breath to to create an oil based stream of flames. This gout of fire reaches out to several feet before him and erupts like a physical blast as it punches outward with an explosive force, its range and power increasing based on the rank of which it is used at, the heat of these flames and explosive impact capable of rupturing metals and melting stone at its highest levels of power. This technique comes as easily as breathing to Zahara, requiring little preparation with just chakra flow need to create the ability upon an exhale with his breath. Upon creation, a viscous substance is produced from the saliva that acts as the base of the flaming gout that covers affected surfaces after the flame's initial impact, this substance lingering behind and burning with hot flames on anything this goop covers. This flaming gout attacks in a cone shape in front of the user, this range extending greatly with each rank of power that this is used at to a maximum of a hundred and twenty feet, or it can be doubled in its reach in a single line of flame to a maximum of two hundred and forty feet. [20 FT per Rank as Cone, 40 FT per Rank as Line] This breath is able to be sustained for as long as the user has the chakra and follows the rules for sustained ignition. Anything touched by this burning breath are covered in the viscous liquid keep burning for an additional round, the power of the flames [-2 Ranks] lower than the initial blast that this ability was used at, this jutsu must be at least [C-Rank] to leave behind its lingering effect. (C Rank Blast will leave E-Rank flames, and so on.)


TL-DR -> Fire Breath. Leaves 1 Post of Lingering Flames. Scaling Range. X-Rank, Stops ranking at S, naturally. It's main draw is the lack for need for hand seals and major preperation. Follows Sustain Rules as normal.


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PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2019 2:06 pm
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Ephemeral Ozymandias
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PostPosted: Thu May 23, 2019 6:00 pm
Character: Kenshin Kosei
Technique Name: Aura of Reincarnation: Heaven Piercing Spear
Rank: A
Type: Bloodline | Bukijutsu Spiritual
Element: N/A
Description: While in the Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension form, Kenshin can apply an immense amount of reincarnation chakra to coat his rapier, Purity, while thrusting it. The blade glows with cyan chakra and can extend beyond the steel of the blade up to 100 feet. This spear will pierce through all in its path at a high speed. If the spear hits a target then it drains 1.5 times the amount of chakra applied to the blade from its target. This drain is only applied to a single target once although it can be applied to multiple targets if contact is made. This effect is identical to that of the javelins in the Aura of Reincarnation: Avatar of the Preserver technique and requires its knowledge before this technique can be learned. The extended spear can be retracted just as quickly and can be swung in wide arcing motions for a slashing effect. The spear's duration is entirely dependent on the duration of the Aura of Reincarnation: Ascension technique.
 
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