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Hi Hi peoples! ^ ^ here are some sketches that i drew'ded tell me what you think ^ ^ constructive criticism is appreciated. thank you. (i dont have a scanner so most of these were rushed for my computer graphics class... i have better... but until i get a scanner this is all i have to show you.. maybe later ill add more) enjoy!
oh yeah... also before you look at them... these are all my own original characters that i made for a manga... so if you want to use one please pm me and ask first...


the girl's name is Tiga (she is my main character) and the boy is Hiroki (the boy that she ends up with)




this is chloe, Tigas best freind


Yeah... this one was done for a movie poster project in compy cgraphics...


heh heh... did this on a divider in my binder


This is Ari, Tiga's sister

tell me what ya think ^ ^

Those are awesome! I give em all a 9/10

thats really good

arigatou! ^ ^ heart

I really like them! You have great ideas for clothes, unlike me. Hehe, I never really have any good clothing ideas. Anyway, Constructive Critisizm: I notice you tend to draw the head too small and the breasts too big. Also, this isn't critisism, just a suggestion, I find that it makes characters more feminine to make the ankles smaller.
Okay, first one: Really good! But, I thin the head is too small.
Second one: almost perfect! But move Hiroki's groin area up a bit, his shirt is long enough that it would cover it I think.
Third: Good, head's alright, but the breasts are again a bit on the too large side.
Forth: Very pretty, but you might want to move the neck forward a bit.
Fifth: The arms seem a little messed up...
sixth: Again, the head is quite a bit too small. And she would also look more feminine if you made her legs skinnier.
Last: hrmm, can't seem to find any improvments...but again, the breasts are just a tad too big.

lol I also noticed that, they are very well detailed though, but next time dont base things off Pamala Anderson. confused

really nice!
practice and maybe you might become a proffessional!

I wish i could draw like that! =( 7/10