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 Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 5:11 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:16 pm
You should work on your lines 3nodding
This sounds silly but it will make it look nicer 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:00 pm
They are good, but you need to work on the lines and I've noticed you make them smaller as you go, like the head is huge and when you go down her legs are twigs. And on the first drawing the eye is a bit wonky.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:16 am
Like they said- line work. Try to vary your lines and make them smoother.
I'd also suggest doing a quick gesture before actualy drawing the figure.
And last but not least- work a bit on your anatomy.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:09 pm
I think it's pwetty! It's okay, i should say.
Oh yah i drew you some avi art on the "draw the avvie above you" topic.
I did it on microsoft paint, so it didn't turn out as good! I'm sorry. sad
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:57 pm
xxmiss_moonlightxx I think it's pwetty! It's okay, i should say. Oh yah i drew you some avi art on the "draw the avvie above you" topic. I did it on microsoft paint, so it didn't turn out as good! I'm sorry. sad Yeah I drew you too!
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:13 pm
Work on your noses. It is a type of style I think, but the nose looks pointy. xD;;
The eyes sorta just look like pupils, try adding more white to them.. Work on making the outlines of the eye more definate and thicker like the top and bottom lines.
Add more folds to your clothes too, it can help to know where to put shadows. :3
Lastly like the other people said, try not to make your lines all squiggly looking. You want to make them smooth. or sketchy, thats what I so xD;;
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 9:56 pm
cool art work harder biggrin
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 11:10 am
I'd say they kinda look like my grade 4 artwork but I was just naturally good at drawing after that. Work on drawing a bit more. I draw anime often but when I was in grade 5 I drew everyday during science and when I didn't feel like paying attention to the teacher so, keep working on it! You'll get better!
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 2:00 pm
Yes yes, work on the lines. But I really think you should pay more attention to detail. Really work on the outfits, sketch them out roughly before you put them into the proper picture. Extra strands of hair and folds in the clothes show that the person has really thought about what they want from the picture, and have tried to make it look amazing! So, detail and lines.
But you can draw feet!!!
-is jealous-
xp
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:35 pm
How long have you been drawling? Have you ever considerd coloring your pictures? I'm not critisiing you just to let you know I've been drawling since Grade K-12 so I enjoy it very much if you want some pointers on coloring pencils let me know okay?^_<
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