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My firneds Journal....opinions?

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gakalika

PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:08 pm


My friend Ezvondulodt (that's her username) is writing a story in her journal. She's not a member of this guild, so I;m advertising for her, as she really wants feedback. Please search Ezvondulodt, read her journal, and posts thoughts here. Any comments are really appreciated. Thank you so much!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:08 pm


You can also pm either me or ezvondulodt with any thoughts and feedback, if you prefer that.......

gakalika


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 9:27 am


Ok, some suggestions:
A link to the journal - http://www.gaiaonline.com/journal/index.php?mode=archive&u=4193959
People won't go out of their way to find it...

She really needs to change the blue, you can't read the text at the top unless highlighted. Plus, she needs to host her own images and resize them, imageshack is good to use.

Other than that I see proper English; spelling out numbers is another plus and maybe some more detail could be added.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:14 pm


Your friend is really creative! I wish her good luck in writing, because she has talent for planning out the ideas in her head. It really shows in her journal. I like how she narrates as a tour guide, in a way. And the way she ends the entries is good! Tell her she's talented and to keep writing!

xWrittenx at the xDiscox

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