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 Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:48 am
Kk'z... I'm okaiii at poetry... my teacher brags about me in class (Yeaaa... evri1 takez da pee outa me for dat!) Lawlz...Anyhow here'ya :
1. Love's Pain
The bride was there on the floor,
Valentine's it was.
The groom came in,
dead he knew for sure.
The pain of love was unkind,
Tears in his eyes.
All the happy memories,
Running through his mind.
The funeral was painful,
Quietness took over.
Photo's of her lovely face,
No-one dressed up shameful.
One smiling face in the crowd,
The bride herself, a ghost.
Sending love throughout the room,
To those whom need the most.
2. Valentines curse
Every day on valentines,
A love is thrown away,
Someone dies and someone's born,
It happens on this day*
But today after valentines,
An apology is made,
A scarf, a star, never accepted,
it's far too delayed*
Then at last the guilt sets in,
And you go say sorry,
They give you back all the gift's,
and a love-shaped lolly*
Finally, love is made,
everyone is happy,
but then you know when you break up,
they will all feel really crappy!
3. Heart Stealer
Watch out, watch out!
The heart stealers about!
He takes away your love.
His smile, His charms,
His lovely tanned arms,
You really can't resist!
He takes your heart and runs away,
He doesn't come back for days and days.
Then you finally realise he's... gone.
So, watch out, watch out.
The heart stealers about.
That's the start of my poems... There will be more! Please comment constructively... It sounds silly but if you have a request for a theme of poem please PM me. I'll add your name beside the poem I write for you as well.
TFN [Toodlez for now] x-x
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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:12 pm
heart Yay! I luff's the stuff's!!!! heart Febuary gifts rule! heart
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