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 Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:09 pm
One and Many
Like a raindrop, Fallen into the sea,
One and many, We are free.
I know it is really short but it is one of my favorite that I have written recently
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:34 pm
Its really good, I like it! heart
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 3:34 pm
Jellybeaner Its really good, I like it! heart Thank you Thank you very much
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:05 pm
Ravin-Ember Jellybeaner Its really good, I like it! heart Thank you Thank you very much It's not just good, it's awesome!
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 4:57 pm
drageaPDMdraconis Ravin-Ember Jellybeaner Its really good, I like it! heart Thank you Thank you very much It's not just good, it's awesome! I feel loved. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:17 am
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:43 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 2:09 pm
^_^ i agree that its short but its still awesome :3
short, sweet, emotional, and to the point! wiiiii!
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:03 pm
With all this praise I am going to become conceited biggrin biggrin
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 2:14 pm
I appritiate a person who can appritiate the value of a rhyming couplet. Very sweet and gentle.
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 8:52 pm
that doesn't classify as a poem just btw
but i like it. its good.
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 8:53 pm
also "into" on the first line. should be turned into a one syllable word, instead of a two syllable word. it would even it out and make it sound MUCH better.
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