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flowers of heaven, my latest poem.

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Kieanna Hyuga

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:15 pm
Stretch to the air,
tell me what you see.
Flowers from heaven?
great gods from the sea,
tell me,
tell me what do you see?
the flowers that you grow?
With more beauty than anyone can be.
from the charms of heaven,
stars of the night,
they crumble and fall
from your very sight.

so what do you think?  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:41 am
i like it! heart although it could use some tweaking but besides that its really good.  

Epic_Forest


Zaralius

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 5:01 am
Its a lot better than my poetry, I like it  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:16 am
cool  

Kity_liter45

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