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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:11 am
well i have a poem i wrote on my primary(sp?) account so i thout id post it hear (though im not sure if im aloud to post it hear) i have a few others im working on to if you want to post your poetry go ahead warrning my poems can be depressing but ther just feelings iv had in the past and have observed from those around my my peomes are a bit happier now well anywho hears my poem: Why do we have hearts? If they only get broken Why do we have words? If most go unspoken
Why do you laugh When you feel like crying Why do you live When you feel like dying
Why should you care When others do not Why not just die Right here on the spot
But listen to me And I’ll help you see You’ll cause people hurt If you're six feet under dirt
So don't give up on livin When hope is not givin Cause it hurts to lose Someone you love And the only comfort you have Is that they're watching from above
Just dont give up hope The pain will go away And then you can say "I survived all the falls Some big some small And now I find it hard to fear When all my friends I know are near"
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:08 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 8:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:18 pm
the next two poems i post will be very depresing but thats becaus iv had a lot of bad crap happin to me in seven years that some dont go through in ther whole life so sorry but the dopressingness of it my later ones will be more happyer so hears they are
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Why cry tears
Why cry tears Thell still hate you Why cry tears Thell just laugh more
Why cry tears Your hearts still broken Why cry tears Words still go unspoken Why cry tears Thell keep fighting Why cry tears Thell keep lying
Why cry tears They won’t come back Why cry tears They don’t change facts
Life is cruel Why can’t you see Just how useless Tears will always be ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sorrow
Why do we live Our tortured lives When all we want Is our own demise
Why must we live To make them happy Why must we Feel so crapy
Can we not ourselves Feel joy are our lives just a toy
why must we live and try why cant we give up and die never again shall my heart mend my happiness I can no longer pretend
Cause if my heart heals I know it can break And that again I can not take
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:46 pm
this one explanes why my name is ~fallen~angel~firefox~ this poem is for my fiance, heart darkmorph heart
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Fallen angel
there was an angel Who lived up high She always loved To fly and fly
Because flying you see Was her whole life But unfortunately She was destined for strife
For suddenly she fell And she didn’t know why She felt like hell And could no longer fly
Years had passed And time goes by Pain kept growing All she did was cry
Although she cried She only did it inside Until each day She prayed shed die
But no matter her want She never had the heart To set herself free And at last depart For she knew for a fact All of her friends On her they depend There happiness shed always defend
She lived like this for many years till one day she lost her tears
for she found some one just like her he lost his wings and his heart burned
but in each other they saw perfection and needed each other for redemption
together they healed and the pain went away as the layers they pealed there love grew each day
until one day their pain they did sever then each of them knew they’d love forever
for each was an angel in the others eyes and they loved each other till the worlds demise
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 6:54 am
any body out ther *is sad* crying
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Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 9:06 am
i have two poems i fond from awile back
hearts
broken hearts are trying to fly broken hearts again they cry
healing hearts try to survive healing hearts still fall and die
broken hearts feeling pain broken hearts going insane
healing hearts still try to lie healing hearts are lost inside
my heart is broken once again waiting for its descend
its tired of healing its tired of feeling is tired of all the emotions reeling
my heart is broken don't make it try let it be let it die
this next one is less depressing but not that good
my heart is broken in half and so is yours walking down a lonly path alone our tears pour
i find you you find me we both wish to live happily
you see pain in my as i see in yours we smile in recolection as we start to see more
we see our futer in each other we found hope in one another
now you bring me joy and i do the same for you our hearts once filled with hurt and lies now are filled with love and truth
blahish i know but......
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Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 9:28 am
Okay, this really should be in the creative writing sub. And if you wish to update your poems just edit your post thanks. Don't quadruple post.
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Angelic_Highlights Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:30 am
this should be in creative writing. MOVED heart
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