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Okamikiba

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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 8:38 pm

I am Ookamikiba I am one of the many students of Marluxia. I am also #16 in the new organization. I was given the assignment 2 teach a potential group of new members to the organization.

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rules : keep urself incheck got it if I hear anything to bad I will report u
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a young lady walks into a lounge with very few people she asks, " Are you here to see if u r qualified 2 be Ookamikiba's students? Ok If ur here for the class we'll take only 15 students. We will have random field events accordingly to ur teachings there will be seprate classes for each student so who is first?"

Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 8:43 pm

WHERE ARE ALL MY STUDENTS?!?!

Okamikiba

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hydra4

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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 6:13 pm

if you dont mind me saying your students arent here because the storyline is kinda bland

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 6:40 am

Okamikiba

I am Ookamikiba I am one of the many students of Marluxia. I am also #16 in the new organization. I was given the assignment 2 teach a potential group of new members to the organization.

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rules : keep urself incheck got it if I hear anything to bad I will report u
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a young lady walks into a lounge with very few people she asks, " Are you here to see if u r qualified 2 be Ookamikiba's students? Ok If ur here for the class we'll take only 15 students. We will have random field events accordingly to ur teachings there will be seprate classes for each student so who is first?"

no offense but a good rp shouldnt be typed with spelling and grammer errors in the first post, also use the word "to" or "too" and not "2". "2" is ok if you mean "two".

also thoese are the vaguest rules i have ever read its almost like sayin "don't be bad"

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x- Ryed Raevin -x

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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 11:34 am

idon't want to offend you, but look at other RPs that are doing good (at least a couple of pages) and get creative. (hint: good storylines make great RPs wink )