poem...untitled...

[Moon_Wolf_0001]

anger...hate...distortion
I wish to convey
but these chains of metal
bar me from my emotions

Blood like the ocean
so open and flowing
from a sacrificial vein
I only wish for pain

How else can I be free
but to break the opression
flying on the razor wings
cutting both flesh and air

I welcome the pain of freedom
to spite my oppresser
my words like bloody spikes
piercing your body

ribbons that slip away
realeasing me to darkness
into the rivers of skeletal death
flowing into emptiness



written about a week ago after a huge blowout with my father....not much more to say....  

[Soulfire29]

It´s a really good poem.
One can almost sense your pain through it.
I hope you didn´t cut yourself...

Be carefull and take care...
If you wanna talk to a stranger ( they are the best listeners )
Soulfire29.  

[Kaime no Go]

I like it. It's a bit choppy here and there but no one can get around that. Great job.  

[Rellikka]

sweatdrop Love it =D domokun  

[yogaman]

really good but its kinda emo... no offence