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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 3:56 pm
anger...hate...distortion
I wish to convey
but these chains of metal
bar me from my emotions
Blood like the ocean
so open and flowing
from a sacrificial vein
I only wish for pain
How else can I be free
but to break the opression
flying on the razor wings
cutting both flesh and air
I welcome the pain of freedom
to spite my oppresser
my words like bloody spikes
piercing your body
ribbons that slip away
realeasing me to darkness
into the rivers of skeletal death
flowing into emptiness
written about a week ago after a huge blowout with my father....not much more to say....
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 8:07 am
It´s a really good poem.
One can almost sense your pain through it.
I hope you didn´t cut yourself...
Be carefull and take care...
If you wanna talk to a stranger ( they are the best listeners )
Soulfire29.
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 7:10 pm
I like it. It's a bit choppy here and there but no one can get around that. Great job.
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 11:14 am
sweatdrop Love it =D domokun
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 1:16 pm
really good but its kinda emo... no offence
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