here's a song that my brother and i wrote...it's really good:
where hav u gone my darling
i feel that something has begun to change between us
i know you're there and i can feel you...
i feel it's cold
and something's wrong
i don't think you're with me
(chorus)
don't let me go
not tonight
cos i feel dead when you're not with me
but i can feel you're presence here with me
i feel you're lips rest on my cheek
it's so cold
(chorus)
though i can see
the world beneath us
could you please be my eyes and
set me free
(chorus)
(the end)
one more thing...(this is not a part of the song)...i sang this to a frend and he was crying...so it's that gud...
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