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J-O-U-R-N-A-L
My peoms/songs/other stuff.
W/E.........
My heart wants to mend,
and i try to pretened that
nothing happened.
But the harder I try to forget
it just reflects, like a light reflects of
the mirror.
It shoots straight at me, with such force
that it knockes me down,
and forces me to break down.
I try not to show my tears
and all my fears, but i feel
that this is way too real.
Too real to face to real
to go on it alone, but I feel as if
I have no one there to help
me fight this emence force.
Too afraid to ask for help,
i just dont whant her to go to hell.
I plead for gods forgiveness,
and I ask him for her to stay.
I just dont want her to pay the price that
I know shell have to pay.
Instead I ask and i offer to go
in her place.

WELL THIS POEM IS A POEM THAT I WROTE, I AM GOING THROUGH SOME VERY DIFFICULT TIMES RIGHT NOW, AND I JUST WRITE SONGS OR POEMS ABOUT WHAT IS USUALLY GOING ON WITH ME AND MY SAROUNDINGS. AND WELL I JUST WANTED TO GET SOME PAIN OUTTA ME SOMEHOW SO I JUST WROTE THIS POEM JUST NOW, SO I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT OR WHATEVER........................

nelly uchiha
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  • User Comments: [6]
    tsunede
    Community Member





    Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 02:50am


    I love poems! Is this a lymeric?


    nelly uchiha
    Community Member





    Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 04:09am


    SURE....lets go with that. xd


    spank my buns
    Community Member





    Thu Oct 11, 2007 @ 01:54am


    wat r u goin through and nice poem heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin


    Kristiney
    Community Member





    Thu Oct 11, 2007 @ 03:12am


    blaugh heart really 3nodding nelly -chan meet up with me in the firts topic in gaia town


    spank my buns
    Community Member





    Thu Oct 11, 2007 @ 12:56pm


    hi i saw tht u got the baseball bat i got for u sweatdrop sweatdrop biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin


    nelly uchiha
    Community Member





    Fri Oct 12, 2007 @ 12:21am


    YEAH!THANK YOU VERY MUCH whee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SESSAHMARO!!!!!UR A VERY NICE FRIEND U REALLY SHULNT HAVE BOUGHT ME THIS BAT, I WAS SAVING UP FOR IT ALREADY. BUT THANK YOU VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,VERY,MUCH! 3nodding xd whee 4laugh !!!!!!!!!


    User Comments: [6]
     
     
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