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Why you never believe me I do not know. Why you never believe me Do you think i'm putting on a show? Why you never believe me I think you don't understand. Why you never believe me on this loud and unpeaceful land. this one is a little different hope you like it i have never really written a poem with this kinda rhyme scheme

Posted by: Jinxed_lette Mon Apr 07, 2008 @ 12:35am

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Commented on: Mon Apr 07, 2008 @ 12:54am

Commented on: Sun May 18, 2008 @ 10:07pm


	nice havent seen your journal in a while keep at it theyre all great pirate

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Commented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 09:56pm


	good i like this one alot good rhyme scheme and it is quite true i love it

Commented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 11:38pm


	i love the rhyme scheme here. the only thing i can say is work on the grammer "why DON'T you EVER believe me?" and change the fourth line, it just doesnt work at all.

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