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xXBullet4MyValentineXx
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7/25/08
i have decided to make my journal my poetry thingy....here is the first one...hope ppl like it...

Tie Die Sun

River of lilies
Frogs and crickets play
Tie die sun smiles down
Peace and cheer to all
Ripple the water
As it turns to stars

Sky of blue purple
River of lilies at my ankles
Pick one up and be the innocence
Petals rise above
Look at the moon
Having its sight
Flying above it says
This is the world of your love
Your innocence and peace

Drift down to perfumed trees
A little girl in white hides
Come out for i wont harm you
Let us climb
For I will never leave you again

comment, pleez...





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punkgirl610
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Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 07:06pm


huh whoa its really good but your right some of it didnt make sense
but oh well i still love it though
wonderful job. biggrin 3nodding mrgreen


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