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Here is the mind of Lady Meiku Noire, fellow Gaia member. Here she will record what goes on in her mind: ex, poems, stories and story ideas, events. etc.
Feeling
random poem I came up with xD had to write it down. again, please comment ^^ hope u like it.

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That feeling through which is descibed as loneliness,
What is it?
A desolate perception of emptiness,
That howling of wind beside,
The feeling of no one next to you?

That feeling through which is described as sadness,
How does it feel?
The throbbing pain internal,
That loved one passed to fate,
The feeling that wrenches your heart?

The feeling through which is described as anger,
What is it, I wonder?
The desperate pit of insanity,
That flood of uncomprehended emotions,
The feeling that snaps your restraint?

The feeling through which is described as joy,
How would it feel?
A bubbly, blissful sensation,
That fortune favors you,
The feeling of wings on your form?

The feeling through which is described as love,
How is it comprehended?
The passion which takes over,
For which you would succumb,
The feeling of profound affection?


Written by: Crimson_Pegasus
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ends rather abrubtly, don't you think? couldn't think of a suitable ending...

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  • User Comments: [2]
    ShadowsSerenity
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    Tue Aug 26, 2008 @ 06:48pm


    biggrin It's a good poem, although I really can't tell. Don't read much poetry. razz
    Keep it up? lol


    Jeanstarwin
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    Wed Aug 27, 2008 @ 12:35am


    this one's really cool too. Great job, Tomo-Chan. ^^


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