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Chapter 2!!! (happy now?) |
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for those of u just joining me this is the second chapter to my fanfic.i know its not as long, but this was as much as i could get done thanks to school starting
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"haha u mean that hottie that was walking u out of the park?" she said
"u saw him?!" i shouted
"yeah, saw u guys from my window." she replied
"and u didn't do anything!?!?!" i cried out.
"i thought he was a friend of urs!" she shouted
"friend?" i scoffed "hardly"
"awww come one u should give him a chance!"
"never!"
"why not?"
"cus the dude was walking around with a freaking sword! thats a lil on the crazy side to me!"
"well at least he's gone."
"ah . . . not really."
"what do u mean?!"
"well just look what was outside the bathroom window when i was changing"
i dug through my clothes and pulled out the note. "what is it?" she asked as i handed the note to her. she took a few minutes and read the note "yeah ok he is a lil creapy." i nodded stuffing the note back into my clothes. there was a tap at the window followed by a voice "i heard that. not very nice to say mean things like that" our eyes widened in horror as we both realized it was impossible for someone to be right outside her bedroom window. "you gonna let me in?" he asked continuing to tap on the window.
i looked at amanda, as she turned to look at me. "what do i do?!?" i whispered to her, starting to panic. "well dont let him in, he could be a vampire!" she said, the movies were really starting to affect her. i think that faced with the thought that he REALLY could be a vampire shocked her back into reality. "I'm not a vampire!" he said now frustrated "well then why r u asking to come in when u could kick in a door with ur super human strength?!?!" amanda replied. ok maybe i was wrong, maybe this DIDNT shock her back into reality.
"why?! do u know how much noise that would make?! besides i dont think ur parents would be happy if they came back to find ur window broken."
"he's got a point."i said
"yeah now pleeeease let me in, and quick before someone sees me out here!"
"NO!!" i shouted
"why not" she whispered
"cus what if he rapes us!"
"i promise not to rape u!" he cut in
"well what if he"
"promise not to kill u either!" he cut in again.
we were both silent for a minute
"cross my heart hope to die" he said
i looked back at amanda "well?" i asked. she sighed and nodded. i got up and walked over to the window. i sighed gripping her pitch black curtains. i then pulled them open, only to see the mans face smiling back at me. he was crouching down while some how managing to stand on the 5inch ledge. i quickly pulled the curtains closed and looked back at amanda. she had her eyebrow raised in confusion. "hey come on! this is no way to treat a guest!" he complained "guest? u invted urself" i shouted. "fine ill just let myself in!" he replyed.
amanda and i looked at each other, i could tell she was thinking the same thing i was. i opened the curtains again but he wasnt there. oh s**t.i thought. amanda jumped up and locked her bedroom door then hid in the closet. "what about me!?!?!" i cryed. "try under the bed! he'll never think of looking there" she whispered. " wait i got an idea" i whispered, opening the window and making it look like we climbed out the window. i quickly jumped under her bed, and cradled my dads gun under my shoulder, ready to fire at any moment.
seconds passed and there wasnt a sound, not even outside.
"he he he . . . suckers" he spoke.
from under the bed i could see his black boots sticking out over his brown pants, as he walked around the room a few times. he passed the bed twice before stopping right where i was. i held my breath as his hand slid under the bed. before i could react, he grabbed my left wrist and pulled me out from under the bed. holding me high above his head with one arm. the gun slipped out of my right hand and fell to the ground with a loud thud."you were going to shoot me!!!" he shouted. "damn straight!" i shouted trying squirm my way out of his grasp, and in so doing the tank top came up way more than i wanted it to. he noticed this and lifted my shirt up with his other hand "WOW! these are better than in any magazine" he said with a devilish grin, practically drooling over my chest. "HEY!!! U PERVERT!!! DONT LOOK!!!" i cried smacking his hand away, then covering myself.
"OW! that hurt"
"serves u right!"
"oh really?" he said
"yes really, now put me down" i shouted still dangling 2feet off the ground. "fine" he said setting me on amanda's bed. "thanks . . . . . . . ummm. . . u gonna let go?" he was still holding my wrist. "u said to put u down, u didnt say ANYTHING about letting you go" he said smiling, as he pushed me onto my back. oh my god!! i thought starting to panic. he grabbed my other wrist and held them both above my head, and strattled my hips with his thighs. "GET OFF" i said fighting to get my wrists free. i then realized amanda standing right behind him holding an old aluminum baseball bat high above her head. i smiled at this "night night" he gave a confused look and then BOOOONG the bat bent from the force of it hitting his head. this caused shock waves to reverberate through the bat and into amanda's arms. the man collapsed onto me like a ton of bricks. "get him off! hes crushing me!" i cried trying to push his limp body off of me. amanda grabbed his arm and started puling as hard as she could, but to no avail. "its no use, hes to heavy!" she said straining her voice as she pulled with all her might.
((MUWHAHAHAHAHA!!!! im stopping here to make u suffer ami!))
 Roukan Ookami · Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 06:54pm · 1 Comments |
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