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my character from http://z10.invisionfree.com/Ludus_Mentis/index.php?act=idx
a psychonauts based RP... sadly he has been retired as a character there... i don't know if i'll RP again...
 the best i can do for now for an image.
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Name: Jess (Jeß) Loj'ik (pronounced 'logic')
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Occupation: Psi-Cadet
Distinguishing Marks: He has his green jacket on no matter what is going on, what time it is, or what the weather is. He doesn't have any scars that anyone can see.
Family: Mother (Unknown), Father (Unknown) Gustave Neidert (Adopted brother), Paul Neidert (Adopted brother)
Likes: games, silence, chess, books, anime, manga, and people he respects
Dislikes: loud noise, crowds, plotless books, pointless stories, physical contact, and people who touch him
Hobbies: reading books and manga, playing chess (and winning), studying people, and sleeping
Primary Skill: Telepathy
Secondary Skill: Aerokinesis
Weakest Skill(s): (can't control any of these abilities)(strongest to weakest) Mental Blocking, Thermokinesis, Pyrokinesis, Photokinesis, Telekinisis, Levitation, Invisibility, Clarvoyance, Cyrokinesis (can't do), Aquakinesis (can't do)
Other Strengths and Weaknesses: Jeß always plots out every move he and his opponent will make, but this usually takes up much valuable time that could be used doing something. He will stay as far away from his opponent as he can to prevent himself from being touched. His mind calculates all the possible movements of his opponents and himself and uses that to his advantage(this is why he wins at chess). Jeß has no physical strength, also his powers can do things on their own based on his erratically changing mood. The only ability he has that he can completely control is his telepathy.
Physical Description: Jeß is short about 5', red hair always cut short, brown eyes, pale skin, not too much to look at but his ever present jacket, and darkly colored shirts and pants which cover up most of his body all that you can see is his face and hands and neck. Jeß has no seeable scars.
Personality: He doesn't ever speak verbally to anyone but his favorite brother because he doesn't like to speak, takes on attributes of the people around him, he <b>HATES</b> to be touched and will run away if he is, he thinks every thing out before he does them, and he doesn't get into fights if the fights involve physical contact.
History: He grew up without knowing his mother or father. This made him fell alone casting himself into himself for protection, and made him not able to speak to most people through verbal conversation(note primary skill). Before the age of 5 he lived in a orphanage near Harvard U. where he spent most of him time reading in the library. He figured out that his family obviously had to be partly Irish and he claimed to be German because, as he figured it, he was at least 78.965% sure he was. In the beginning of his time after learning he could do things with his mind he experienced a disliking of using most of his powers because they would more than not backfire on him, pyrokinesis torching his arms only to make a minute fire. By the time he was adopted he had already learned many different languages. He was adopted by the "Neidert Clan" in which he grew up since the age of 5. While in this family his brother Gustave picked on him (mostly by being near Jess)so he grew more attached to his other brother Paul. Also his adopted parents worked all the time away from the house so Jeß didn't see them that much. By the age of 9 his adopted parents left Jeß and his 2 brothers for an unknown reason, but they left the car, car keys, house keys, the house, and money. Odd... After they left Jeß and his 2 brothers lived on their own.
Writing Sample:
*beep beep*
<i>'What's that annoying beepin' sound?!?'</i> Jeß thought to himself and anyone who can hear him.
Jeß turned around on his old falling apart bed and checked the clock,
12:00...12:00...12:00 it flashed in it's greenish colour.
<i>'Oh good it's only 12:00...'
'...'
<b>'WAIT IT'S FLASHING!!!</b> flashing means the power went out!'</i>
He quickly looked at the ancient oversized Grandfather Clock in the corner of his dark square red room,
7:21...
<i>'I'm late! I'm late!'</i> He thought to himself. Then he started going through his checklist of things he needs for the academy as he rushed around his dimly lit room.
<i>'Shirt, check. Pants, check. Other random clothes, check. Jacket...Why do I even ask myself that anymore?Check...Hmmm... I know I'm forgetting somethin'</i>
Jeß rushed out of his dark room with all of his speed only to get grabbed and thrown onto his back by an unseen force. He landed with a thump.
<i>'Ouch why did you do that? I'm going to be late!'</i> Jeß thought to anyone listening in an enraged tone.
"Oh I didn't want you to forget...YOUR...<b>SHOES</b>!" said Jeß' brother Paul. Paul stood over him holding his black shoes laughing. He is about 6'5" with long red hair, sickly pale skin, and brown eyes. He dropped the shoes inches away from Jeß' right ear.
<i>'Damn! I knew I was forgetting somethin'</i> Jeß thought a little less angrily. Paul laughed as he put his keys into his pocket by habit, and strolled gracefully out the front door.
<i>'Ok, now I have everything now to see if Paul will give me a ride to the academy.'</i> Jeß hurried to get his shoes on and rushed to the door. As he opened it and took the first step out of that old house Jeß thought, <i>'I haven't seen Gustave today I wond-'</i>
THUD! That's the sound of Jeß' face being slammed into the ground by his b*****d of a brother, Gustave. Gustave then proceeded to run to Paul's car and jump in. Gustave is a shorter person than Paul he has long black hair pulled back as to not get into his yellowish-gray eyes. Gustave has one feature that neither Jeß or Paul have, tanned skin.
When Jeß got up he saw that they had already left...
<i>'Damn that brother! I'm always late! I was probably born late, but there ain't anyone to tell me. It's probably cause of Gustave that I'm always late.'</i> Jeß shouted in his mind out a few more curses in different languages as the wind starts picking up.
<i>'At least I still have the wind on my side,'</i> He thought as his oversized security blanket, the green jacket, started to act as a parachute in the wind and lifted him off the ground.<i>'Ok now all I need to do is concentrate and I can make it to the acade-
OH LOOK A CHICKEN...
Damn...'</i>
As Jeß fell to the ground he hoped that he wouldn't land on that long passenger train 'cause it could hurt...
<b>THUD</b>
<i>'Ouch I landed on this stupid train I wonder where it's going...'</i> Jeß thought to people on the train. "To the academy?" He heard from an irate passenger, but Jeß was too distracted by the thoughts of a book he had once read, <i>Martyrs we Will Never be</i>...
When Jeß finally got the book out of his head he looked up at the blue morning sky with clouds spinning aimlessly overhead.
<i>'I wish I was a cloud, not having a care in the world, not one single problem, not even having to worry about the academy...'</i> Jeß thought as he fell into his sleeping meditation.
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Well that's Jess. We hope you like him. And sorry if you don't exactly like his vulgar language, but hey he's 13 what do you expect? I put his thoughts in Italics so it's easier to see. Also since he never speaks so I will just have him talk with
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these...And Italics
*Welcome to the Department of Redundancy Department, someone says in the background*
I hope to later maybe make more but one is enough for right now. At least till Jaime-san bugs me to make another...*Hoping she doesn't*
Oh and if you tell me I need to change anything I guess I'll have to...*starts cursing Jaime-san for random reasons**hides in dark corner awaiting an answer*
Well till that day remember to have fun...
Viel Spaß
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that's the edit...Man I hate writing...Oh wait ya'll didn't hear that...Jaime-san better be happy once Jeß is finally accepted.
 Jess Lieben · Mon Oct 20, 2008 @ 05:14am · 0 Comments |
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