His eyes get big, “Yer special like me!” He starts jumping around happily, he suddenly stops and says, “You wanna see something I haven’t shown teacher yet?”
"i wouldn't go straight to special," she said under her breath hoping he didn't hear her. she looked at him intently forgeting to answer as she waited to see what he wanted to show her. she never got to see anything other than what she was taught, because she always had private teaching. she was happy to see something other than the four elements that she was able to control.
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“Oh no, if they find you they might make you go home. Wanna play hide-and-seek from the adults?” as he finishes the question he begins smiling. He grabs Elzia and they fall into darkness.
"ummm ok," she said as she couldn't help but follow after him. she sat in the shadows waiting thinking. we're only in a shadow. they'll still be able to see us, so what's the point in being here? little did she know what he was going to do next.
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Reappearing several hundred feet away from where they had been standing, Illidan breathing a little heavier then he had intended.
“I’ve never tried that with another person before.”
i don't think i should put anything here. it would seem kinda funny if i asked him if he was ok when obviously he isn't. the reader would be like "what the hell? you can see he isn't ok. why did you ask that?" so i don't think i'll be adding anything there.
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“I’ve never tried that with another person before.”
"what did we just do?" she asked more to herself as she looked around. she had heard about elves being able to travel through shadows, but had just thought it was legend or something. no one her age was ever very powerful, and she thought it was strange to find someone like her. but at the same time, it was great.
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“Elzia, you said elements before, can you do anything that would help us move quickly, without leaving a trail for them to find?” he finished with his breathing calming so he could speak normally.
(i have two ways of answering that but one you would have to rewrite your reply so i'll put that one first.)
"everything i know how to make would leave trails," she said as she looked around her. "and some of them i can't really control very well." after she said that she thought about the earth elemental that her trainer had tried to get her to conjure. she shivered at the memory.
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"not that i'm aware of," she said as she looked up as if thinking. it had been a while sence she had to make an elemental before. the last time she made one she had nearly destroyed her village, so they didn't make her try again until she was more incontrol of her power.
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As the children go through the encampment, Illidan notices that the camp isn’t as lifeless as it usually is. “Elzia wait a second something’s wrong here.”
"i don't see anything," she said laughing a bit. "i think you're imagining things."
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i wanted to add somethings in other places ... but i don't remember where. i'll read it again after work and see if i can find them. you'd have to make some revisions to it after i add them, but it shouldn't be to bad. mrgreen
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"yeah i can go first," she said with a little excitment. she wasn't sure why this was different from her previous training, but she was happy to train now. she thought it was kind of weird.
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