Swarn to Secrecy

• Artist: kloob
• Description:
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: swarn secrecy

Hello, i am a little girl named samantha that sworn to secrecy to never show my real face. I have two evil step sister named Agatha and Dorinda, they treat me like s**t. Most days i can not move they beat me so badly. "Girls I'm home come give your mommy a hug and a kiss...except Samantha she has chores to do". My daily chores are going to the atic a get all the mice by hand, cleaning up after my stepsisters, and cleaning the floor with my tounge, these are some harsh jobs i know, if my father were still around he wouldnt let this crap happen to me. The reason he died was because my stepmother killed him by slitting his thorat and dumping him in the well in 1889, i was there when she did it to she was caught by the policemen dumping him...but she didnt get put in jail, because she bribed the judge with two million cubics (thats what these peoples curency is called" so she didnt even get a smudge on her crimininal record. One day i went to go clean up the mess my shitface stepsisters left for me to clean up i saw my knuckles were bleading from me being on the ground for so long... i blame it on my stepsister. Agatha: "what the hell did you just call us" I heard from the kitchen. I said to myself "They heard me...the best way to go is saying im sorry for what i said." When she came into the room i was in she knocked me out and made me look like this those are my two stepsister who made me look like that.



Soon i hope i can just die or get swept off my feet by a charming prince who can protect me. Soon i hope i can get back to my normal self who used to look like this arent i beautiful?...or wasnt i beautiful.




I will never be able to get this crap off of me i said to myself.

So one day i went to go to the atic and get the mice my stepsisters were up there waitng for me... they both had knives in their hands i dropped everything i was holding to go open the door but it was jammed. Dorinda: youve caused this family enough pain and suffering you will pay for it! Agatha: yes and the way you will is by dieing. "Both Run over with the knives and stab me repeatitly till i am dead. Before i died i said to them "Thankyou so much for giv---" I couldnt finish what i was saying before i died. I remeber all the things i have done before my death... like riding my horse for the first time,having my first kiss...exc. I remeber what i said when i was rising to the pearly white gates "I thankyou all Dorinda and Agatha"

THE END

Comments

[bamhs]

Hey nice story. Check out mine.

[iWizzle_Dizzle]

um well this is my story i told him about it on day after school. i thought he was my friend he even took the avis i made for it...i should never have told him it. moleman546 give it back now! Douche

[olddaysgone]

wicked

[kloob]

Paragraphs won't bite, dear, always use them to intriduce a new speaker. Also, don't use colons to show that someone is speaking, "he said/she said" works well, too. Proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling are also things that need some work. Otherwise, the story's not bad.
(n__n)b

cool thanks for the great comment o and thanx for the advice

[f a y eliight]

Paragraphs won't bite, dear, always use them to intriduce a new speaker. Also, don't use colons to show that someone is speaking, "he said/she said" works well, too. Proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling are also things that need some work. Otherwise, the story's not bad.
(n__n)b

[kloob]

Um well i hope you like it its a short story of a girl i was reading about in a fake artical that we make for my school newpaper i wrote