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In the dark of her room Tammy is thinking about how no one knows her and her boring life. The next morning she wakes up, and of course her dad is sleeping in from getting drunk and staing up last night. School isn’t much more fun. She starts of by going around the school picking up trash. A boy much older then her throws down a pop can. "Hey you!" She yells. "Don’t litter!" And one's again no one listens to her.
The next morning she walks past a mini mart. "Hey, you! Got any money?" A man in his 20 asks. "Shore why?" Tammy asks "You can buy some beer off me." He says in a whisper. "Ok." Tammy buys the beer and goe's off to see what it says. She goe's to hide near a bush and starts to drink. Soon she goe's and buys beer of the man every day. 2...3...4... She cant stop. Her tiny body can’t take it. The next day her dad comes in her room. She’s an hour off time. He checks her pulse... Nothing
- by OMG its prettygirl123 |
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- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: Drunk
- Artist: OMG its prettygirl123
- Description: Tammy is a 15 year old girl who did good things now shes following in the foot steps of her dad.
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: drunk
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Comments (4 Comments)
- tomcat41 - 09/06/2009
- shore is spelled sure... this is a short and un descriptive story... try adding detail.
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- maraquia - 06/17/2009
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So sad! But very true sad
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- pvt_pixie - 04/18/2009
- uber sad!
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- Lost-in-Dreamland-again - 03/02/2009
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=O
I are speechless.
Didn't quite get it. But still speechless.
Watch out for spelling mistakes. - Report As Spam