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Love, sorrow, when does it end?
Love starts as friendship, binding two souls closer together
then a relationship forms, burning the candle of love
Not all candles are immortal, some die
and when they do, sorrow returns to visit
Nothing but loss, and despair, Knowing you've lost half your soul
the worst part. every time your candle dies, so does your soul
Pain, Joy, what for?
Pain in a sense is Joy, for others
What hurts you most may please another
Your broken heart in slow repair
only to have the fragile shards destroyed by the darkness
The darkness seems so inviting.
"Come..." it calls, "Come into a true promised land!"
Sure enough you fall into its clutches and damnation is yours
A bleak light shines from the darkness
You sprint towards it, but can you make it?
- by lordsonichero |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/18/2009 |
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- Title: Love and Sorrow, Pain and Joy
- Artist: lordsonichero
- Description: Something i wrote just now. It kinda jumps, so tell me what you need to work on.
- Date: 10/18/2009
- Tags: hell home
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- Deaths_Daughter4018 - 10/19/2009
- I like this. It gives off a sence of pride and truth. It fills the soul with relief and hope.
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