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Why can't you notice me?
Am I invisible?
Others find me alluring, appealing
But they are not you
They don't have you sense of humor or your looks, much less your personality
There are so much of you that I think I would love
I want you to notice me
To talk to me
I want to understand you and you me
I will never be pretty enough or smart enough or fast enough for you
So I will forget you
You are only a dream from yesterday nothing more
- by strawbarrie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/19/2008 |
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- Title: a crush nothing more
- Artist: strawbarrie
- Description: You know, that one sided love you went through for that one guy into words.
- Date: 11/19/2008
- Tags: crush
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXorangeSHYGIRLXx - 11/27/2008
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WhiteDrone doesn't know anything!!!
he is a big meanie!! - Report As Spam
- WhiteDrone - 11/27/2008
- Thank you, my Wife thinks so too!
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- strawbarrie - 11/27/2008
- WhiteDrone DUDE YOUR 2 YEAR OLD IS A GENIUS!!! O_o
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- strawbarrie - 11/27/2008
- thanks for the criticism
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- WhiteDrone - 11/27/2008
- my 2 year old could do better then this. 1/5
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- royalravenna - 11/27/2008
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sorta tacky but A+ on effort!
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- Dave Yognaut - 11/27/2008
- humm very interesting that described 6th grade for me =) but i moved on i give you a 4 because there is always room for improvment no matter what
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