Hold on

• Artist: BabiiBoy127
• Description: I wrote this poem when I was losing the girl I love, she said she was confused, that she didn't know what to do, so I wrote this so she won't leave, so she will hold on and let me help her work things through.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love holdingon caring hope

Baby I know right now it feel like is not working out
But hold on, I promise you, everything will be better
If you love me, you'll never let me go
And if you don't you better tell me so
I'm just trying to stay true
You are my lover, my closest friend
Stay with me and I'll love you till the end
Right now in some way, some things went wrong
Something came along
I'm trying to make it all better, but it seems so bad
I'm trying to make you happy, but you seem so sad
If you don't love me no more then let me know
Because I'm hurting inside but i won't let it show
If my heart had eyes, they would probably cry from all the pain inside.
If your gone, I guess you move on
But I'll leave you in my heart, because is where it belongs
Before I'll go to sleep
I'll say a prayer for you
Praying for your safety
Babi you know I love you
Even if we go our own separate ways
I will still love you
But I won't be happy without you
You are the only one that completes me
The only one that has the key to my heart
I don't know what I would do without you
Baby please hold on, I promise you, everything will be better.

Comments

[AureliaTurner22]

It has great sentimental value but it seems more like a letter than poetry or lyrics.
3/5 for effort but it wasnt enough for me to give you a 5/5.
Hope things work out for you^^

[Isabella143]

i think thats really sweet. D

[Casca 7]

aww. that's so sweet and sad.