Heart behind closed doors

• Artist: 2muchanime4u
• Description: This poem i never got a chance to write down, it was dream i had, and i just remembered it, but im sure a lot of people get the meaning plz rate and comment, if this doesnt spark ur interest plz feel free to read comment n rate my other work and i will return the favor
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: heartloveforbiddencloseddoors

Speaking of things i cannot obtain'
like undying love or financial gain
Does anyone out there hear my plead?
Of wanting someone to need me
Need me!!!... please or at least want me somehow
I've never known real love and never shall
Take my heart and claim it yours,
and let my feelings you give it pour
Pour into your heart as one
And prove to me that my life is not yet done
That I have a light at the end of my cave,
and that its only me you want to crave
Give me the lustful desire
Give me the forbidden treasure
This is my heart behind closed doors
Somebody... anybody
Please enter

Comments

[UNKNOW dude ii]

dats awesome =D y have i never read ur poetry b4?? ^_^

[generic smoothies]

awesom poetic ability

[Spiff Tyler]

I think your poem is lovely. It's very deep, and it takes much skill to write a rhyming poem. Good job!