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Everything is cold.
Is it just me?
Or is it everyone.
Maybe it is just me.
Or maybe its not.
Are you cold?
In the deepest darkest depths?
Do you cry at midnight?
Or do you just sit and feels sorry for yourself.
Do you watch others, and wish you were someone else?
Do you watch lovers, and fill with envy?
Do you watch those with talents, and wonder why you have none?
Do you watch those who have expensive things,
and wish you could have more?
Why?
Why do you wish you were someone else?
Fill with envy?
Why do you want talent?
Why do you want expensive things?
Do you think your life is hell?
Do you think you have no hope in life?
No reason to live?
Or do you just feel ignored.
Thrown in a corner.
Do you just want attention?
Or do you want more.
More in life.
More in the world.
More time with friends.
More time with family.
More time with yourself.
For nothing can be greater.
Greater than yourself.
Greater than your family.
Greater than your friends.
Greater than the world.
Nothing is greater.
And never forget that.
- by zakia_the_mistica |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/12/2008 |
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- Title: Everthing Is Cold
- Artist: zakia_the_mistica
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Description:
Kk, so I was looking through some of the stuiff on my deviant and all of the sudden I fall upon all of this writing stuff!
I think it's all supposed to be poetry but I just don't really know*sweatdrop*
So comment! Tell me what you think!
And have a nice day~ - Date: 08/12/2008
- Tags: everythingiscold
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CrazyCake 8D - 07/06/2009
- takashi everything is cold because everyone is envy of others and dont believe themselves because of that..."its a sad world" for those who envy... *i think its that*
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- Takashi Kyo - 12/24/2008
- it is good except it doesn't seem to be very theme-related. your theme is 'everthing is cold' but it doesn't seem to be that way. more of a envy/greed poem.
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