-
My Sweet Summer
by: shadowsong
a sweet summer's day ends tonight
but still your beauty shines so bright
i gazed upon you like a star
you seem so near but yet so far
you make me smile with just a glance
i'll be with you 'till the last dance
you saved my heart from being drowned
you held my hand in the crowd
i would not promise anything
that could break your heart with a swing
as the moon shines with all his might
a sweet summer's day end tonight....
- by erickbok01 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/02/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: My Sweet Summer
- Artist: erickbok01
-
Description:
this is my poem.....
^^,
VOTE FOR ME!
thanks! - Date: 09/02/2008
- Tags: sweet summer
- Report Post
Comments (2 Comments)
- Transcend_Unity - 06/28/2010
- Very mushy but it's alright. I'd like to see better grammar usage though.
- Report As Spam
- II cookie2 II - 12/16/2008
- that is so beautiful!!!!How did you come up with that
- Report As Spam