- its night I'm laying waiting for time to pass i watch my life flashing before my eyes i wonder am i dead am i about to die? so i just stay there still. waiting for my life to end. just staring at the ceiling wile my life passes.
- by mitchell1167- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/01/2008 |
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- Title: the sadness within
- Artist: mitchell1167-
- Description: this is a poem i wrote
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: sadness within
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- Iooking - 06/28/2009
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kind of incomplete.
give it more form. - Report As Spam
- Skadi Sundermount - 03/15/2009
- well i get the idea but its kinda of lacking in feeling. plus the style was rather poor.
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- xXshaylonXx - 12/07/2008
- ummm dude no that sucked sorry you need to add more on to it ill give it a 4/5
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- SimplyAh-mazing - 10/01/2008
- I can relate :]
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