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I look at my reflection,
hopeing for something dearer,
This is my contemplation,
People gettinf nearer,
I wonder if one can save me from the darkness in my heart,
I'm dead people dead,
Living but dead that is my part I ride the one way ticket to the devil's domain on his evil steed,
That place will be a vacation from my life,
I needn't be cried for,
Because my existence is full of striffe.
I needn't know what instore,
Completely concealed till now,
These thoughts and emotions burst from my chest,
Thoughts like "Send you heart down if you love her she is above and you are below",
My emotions overpower my mind as if no contest,
I have wasted so much time,
Now I seriously doubt she will be mine.
- by Lloyd the crimson scourge |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/20/2008 |
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- Title: Looking in the mirror
- Artist: Lloyd the crimson scourge
- Description: A poem I wrote when I loved someone very much but was to shy to tell her...yes it is kinda emo but I don't care...
- Date: 10/20/2008
- Tags: looking mirror
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 10/20/2008
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I love the metaphors
this is creative, beautiful, touching, sincere, and a sad depiction of life when one is not completely fullfilled - Report As Spam