insanity

• Artist: lifesux23
• Description: ok so heres a poem i wrote a bit or so ok, and wouldnt mind oppions, sorry i can spell worth crap, but its just how i feel right now so yea, comments are loved <3 and helpful
• Date: 12/15/2008
• Tags: titled

have you ever had a moment of pure insanity when all u wish to do is fly straight to the moon?
jump until you reach the clouds?
spin until the reality around you blurs?
scream until god hears your voice?
cry until your eyes turn dry?
laugh until you just cant breath?
run until you hit the shore, then turn around and run some more?
have you ever wanted to taste insanity?
just feel what its like to float mid-air,
or fall to the depths of hell?
ever wanted to just jump off the face of the earth and land somewhere new?
wanted a new pace, speed, depth of sanity?
dance until you fall
swim until you run out of land?
ever wanted to just dissaper?
have you ever had a moment of pure insanity?

Comments

[outsidegalaxy]

I like it, but there are some gramatical errors.