Street of Dreams.

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description: Something something,
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: street dreams

Street of dreams.

Walking through the veiled mist,
On this street of dreams
The wind flies through with menacing hiss,
Bursting at the seams,

Quietly you drift along,
whispering words true,
With a chorus you sing along,
collecting spirit dew,

And skip past all you wish and hope,
heart strings pulled,
carried along by majestic rope,
your mental state is lulled.

lying in the loving gutter,
sense so pure,
stumbling, you begin to stutter,
of the future, you aren't sure,

Waking to a drenching sweat,
in the midnight hour,
lost in thought of quick regret
a dream turned mighty sour.

Comments

[whitejade13]

Oh something indeed. Interesting it is this "street of dreams" very very interesting. 5/5

[Sorceress_Wakaru]

I could not quite get it. But I think it is not only a dream. You couldn't quite see what is around you because something is covering your line of sight.You could feel the outside call out to you but you still went on passing them by. The truth you have spoken is something you have learned in your lifetime. It might be big or small but it is still the reality of the world. I do not quite get the dew part but I know the feeling of just following what you set yourself to do but you feel nothing

[iiReina]

nightmare? o.O and great poem

[Bleuraven123]

nice... :]
But why does it have to end in the dream being sour?
I still like it though