ON THE EDGE

• Artist: Rukudos
• Description: ok i wont tell you what my poem means cus every body pulls something different out of everything so tell me what this means to you an if you like it or not (i love writing poetry an will enter more at a later time)
• Date: 01/07/2009
• Tags: edge

eyes shut tight
sow the closed
let the blood flow from your wrist
allow it to be your finale cut
just to awake
find it all a dream
i dont like it hear
i wont be hear anymore
just let it all go away
u wont find me dead
at leases not yet
can you help me in time find whats wrong?
cus im about to have this life undone
im standing on the edge
looking down seeing how fare down it is
six feet to the ground isnt looking that bad

Comments

[ShroomEnvy]

why so emo
but its good
great writing

[Aphotic Apex]

Nice job, it remindes me of how I feel at times. 5/5

[Demoncurse Desire]

Very interesting, to me it says that though the dream felt real, in a way you would want it to be real but as you stand looking down at a grave, you find yourself wanting to fall. I really do like the poem, I think it holds quite a bit of meaning. Good job.