broken heart

• Artist: john tb vogel
• Description: a song i wrote....about my ex girl friend...
  
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: broken heart

you riped out my heart...
you smashed it into pieces...
you say i didn't care...
but i really did
so now all that's left to say is

oh well i'll live with out you...
you don't mean any thing to me now...

you riped out my heart...
you smashed it into pieces...
you say i didn't care...
but i really did...
so now all that's left to say is...

you made me question every thing i did...
you made me think i was a nice guy...

you riped out my heart...
you smashed it into pieces...
you say i didn't care...
but i really did...
so now all that's left to say is...

i gave you every thing you ever asked for...
i tried...i wanted to be your hero...
you made me into a zero...

you riped out my heart...
you smashed it into pieces...
you say i didn't care...
but i really did...
so now all that's left to say is...

this is the end of my love for you...
don't ask if i still love you...
you make me sick thinking i cared about you...
i said i loved you...did you even care?

all you've left me is my broken heart...
now i am the broken hearted one...

Comments

[WorIds]

it's really good i give it a 4/5 u could use more descriptive details and less repitition..maybe change the words a bit the more u go along but other than that it is really really good dnt let ur talent go to waste i say...write more! smile

[violet porcelain doll]

its really good. keep writing songs, you have a talent.

[fireshadowkatdemon]

Wow, very good poem. *hugs* I hope everything is alright now though. 5/5. Keep writing.

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

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lol sry its good really it is