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Letting yourself continue in darkness or light,
In all the fear that we share and try to overcome,
For every tear drop that falls from your face,
Everyone can overcome these things together if we try
Maybe it's just me
but I don't think my life is terrible
everyone thinks you have to be
totally rich and popular but i am lovable
and kind and sweet so that's all I need
for I don't heed riches or fame
I just need to be me to succeed
in life so it's hard to watch you all without saying what shame
you should have for acting your way
because you pretend your the best of the whole
wide world but your just as good as me even is you weigh
less or look prettier because I might be smarter but do I take your role
of being the best away I didn't think so well maybe you
can understand this if I told simply that right from birth
everyone of us are great and all you have to do
is try and live with hate or despair and we might have a better life to share this one Earth
- by intoxicatingDestruction |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/29/2009 |
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- Title: Life poems
- Artist: intoxicatingDestruction
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Description:
Hi everyone fans or not. I don't think I have any fans, but I like me. I might see if I can put a joke or two up here later, but I think my poems are better. And my art sucks so. Anyway I am just making these poems as I write this so if it sucks I'm sorry. P.m. me if you think i can change it because i might not be able to see the posts here cause my compy is terrible. Also p.m. me if your now my fan cause that would be cool, or maybe if you need me to explain it.
- Date: 01/29/2009
- Tags: life poems understandings
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Comments (2 Comments)
- intoxicatingDestruction - 01/29/2009
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thank you, the colors serve a very special purpose actually
it helps people know the acrostic is life and it in the second one it shows my free verse rhyme scheme - Report As Spam
- Qaisar Domino - 01/29/2009
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I really like your poem!
The message is very beautiful, but the colours might be a bit distracting.
Else it's just great^^ - Report As Spam