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Past,Past
What I have lost,
Ive lost what Ive had,
Ive had what Ive lost,
At first ive had nothing
Now im back to the same,
What i have gained
I have gained nothing,
But Pain......
Painful Past
By Christian Radosevich
- by 8xPrince Of Despair8x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/12/2009 |
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- Title: Painful Past
- Artist: 8xPrince Of Despair8x
- Description: This is about my past and what i think of it 8x ....enjoy lol
- Date: 05/12/2009
- Tags: painfull past
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Sixth L - 10/12/2009
- Typical emo and badly spelled poem is typical. 1/5
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- Mikilala1the1third - 05/16/2009
- Not bad. Careful about the capitals and the apostraphe in I've. Nice poem though!
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- Mutandanstan - 05/16/2009
- Learn how to punctuate and capitalize, please.
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