all the above for god

• Artist: casssie1997
• Description: This is something i thought of and thought it was nice and decited to show it so please coment your true thoughts about it so i can see how i did and if i need to do better or if i'm really good so please coment truefully.
• Date: 06/24/2009
• Tags: above love

Above all things that god has done.Above all things he has created.The only thing that really matters is the love he has created and wat he gave to us to save our souls and our lives for us to live.All the things i list above is the reason for gods love. for god loves us and so dose jesus that is why for died for us on a cross so we are here we should be thankful to be gods children.

Comments

[yowhiteboy4lyfe]

first of all, you have spelling errors as well as a few grammatical ones. some sentences are run-ons. it doesn't flow. also, if it's a poem of sorts, it needs to be broken up and not bunched up into some huge paragraph. you should've had someone edit this before you submitted it. appearances can help a person determine whether they give you a good or bad score. i'm not very religious myself, so i won't comment on your subject choice. overall...2/5.

[Rizu77]

very nice.