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I did everything for you
But you still won't declare
Is your feeling for me true?
'Cause I'm starting to not care
I fell overboard for the first time
Thought, I was going for a swim
Then, I'm drowning faster
This is turning into a disaster
I don't wish for anything but you
If this get worst, I'm letting go
You don't care like the way I do
It's not like I'm asking much from you
No, not tonight, I won't call
So get out your blow up doll
After this, there is no you and me
You can't have the best of me
I'm sick and tired of your games
Tearing all my love letters
You're getting too lame
I just can't chase you forever
My heart is hurting everywhere
Finally, realized we're going nowhere
I'm done reliving every painful memory
No, you won't, you won't have the best of me
- by Abbygail0810 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2009 |
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- Title: Best of me
- Artist: Abbygail0810
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Comment and critique away please =]
- Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: best
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kyss Kyss - 07/08/2010
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itsz good i wuv it
so true for most relationships...but suppose you dont know what you have trill its truely gone =)
(sry for spellinhg mistakes i dont read what i typ[e io watch my hands to make sure i am typing correctly lol still havent grasped the consept in it though lol)
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- Pokaberry - 07/18/2009
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very nice, however, in lines 15 and 16, you repeat 'me' twice...
prehaps try...
you and I have no more can't you see.
You can't have the best of me?
X) haha, but thats just my opinion. 4/5!
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