Death

• Artist: Xxll Aero llxX
• Description: I Wrote This When My Boyfriend Broke up me
  
  I was Really Sad At the Time....
  
  
  I hope U like It
  
  Please Dont get creeped out by it (its just a poem people)
  
  XD
• Date: 08/29/2009
• Tags: death

Death is a great adventure,
Wouldn’t it seem?
To Close Your Eyes and Stay In a dream.
Never Wake Up,
Never Move…
There’s nothing you’ll Ever Have to Prove.
Death Is Fun…
Death Is Great…
So why do we have to wait?
You Never know when it comes,
You never know when its near.
Its something a lot of people fear.
Death isn’t wrong
its life that’s to long.
So Close your eyes and Sleep Forever
With me.
Its okay…don’t cry.
It was Simply ment to be

Comments

[Airatheis]

Beautiful... <3

[Polly Odd]

It's very good; I love the sentence structure. It's a beautiful poem. Keep writing. 4/5

[The Werepyre King]

I think to die will be the best part of my life-If I never love.
WHY???WHY DO I FEEL???
please....

[Chard0]

i liked it a lot it's kinda how i felt when my grandpa die (i was very close to him)

[-_Cuthbert-of-Eld_-]

Lol angsty kids writing about a concept that they will never fully understand.

[hagi333]

very true when the time comes sometimes all you can do is sleep