9/11

• Artist: Feairie
• Description: I wrote this on 9/11/08 i had talked about the situation in class and i decided to write about it. i think its good but i would like constructive criticism please!!
• Date: 09/06/2009
• Tags: september attack

This is the day that we remember
As that fateful day of september
That day when many died
That day when the nation cried

For one week flags at half mast
For that day seven years since past
Many lost things you can't replace
That afected th human race

That day our towers fell
Many ended up not feeling well
Smoke and dust were both inhaled
Always with hope the attackers were jailed

Some went knowing they won't survive
trying to keep others alive
That's what real heroes are made of
Not radioactive spiders and alien love

This is for all you men, women, and children to
Remember all the people who
Didn't know their lives were done
September 11th, 2001

Comments

[Val Vampire]

that was an absolutely amazing writing piece. great work