Buterflies

• Artist: TranquilAwakening
• Description: Rate plz? It was 2 un the morning and i sent it to one of my friends and they thought it was cool but then again HE has a crush on me.. 0-0' anyway. Plz rate. What do you think i mean? =)
• Date: 01/30/2010
• Tags: buterflies

lies all trapped inside
there is never a way to decide
do we stay or go
will they always show

The Butterflies hold my dream
Catch it and stop its scheme
Cut It with that sythe
While i make that sacrafice

i kill myself slowly fro you
hoping the Butteflies few
But in the end all i find
Is thgat i tried too hard. Wasting time

Comments

[blue girl moon]

i like it 5/5

[Usaga]

I can't say i understand exactly what you mean in the 2nd line of the 4th stanza other than making a full circle with it. Aside from that, i can't blame your for spelling errors if it was at 2 am in the morn! XD A valiant effort.